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Reeba shukla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#491

Wow yaar its so emotional and beautiful

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MadhuGupta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#492

Please when will you update.i am waiting your next update.

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Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#493

Hey lovely update..
Are inmissed ur previous update to read all of them in one go...
Ohh hod n now m a biggest fan of yours
Finaly in dono gadi age badhi and the best part was jealous sumo..
Main tumhe kyon jia are niharika se nahi milati...
Wowww will love soo see how their love blossoms

Thnk iu gor the pm

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reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Lovely update...

Can you write a ff or OS where ramu kaka Honestly asked Shravan to stay away from sumo as he didn't like her unlike in the show where he backstabbed Shravan and it is Shravan who is ignoring sumo during preekar marriage

Hey Arpi...isn't that an awesome plot. ..had struck me long time back that if only this were the track. ..would he ignore Sumo and how?😛

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: Edkvforever
Superb update
Beautifully penned

thanks you sweety 😊

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: beasmukherjee
Marvellous!!!! Penned down so nicely 😃 . Hope their 'right time' comes soon 👍🏼

😊 thanks. hope so too

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: sweksha
so my request is can you please write something on shravan's guilt track as an os or ts...Mai humesha se chahti thi ki sumo ke ghar chorke jaane ke baad shravan Wo sare incident yaad kare jab usne sumo ki insult ki...like pct me, pushkar ki shadi waale din, sumo ki shadi ki preparation ke time jab unwanted kaha tha Wo sab yaad kare or guilty feel kare or ye bhi PTA chale ki sumo ne pct free me Nahi bulki business deal par liya tha...and us guilt ke karan uski condition and sumo se proper apology...Mai humesha se chahti thi ki show me ye ho but hua Nahi or kisi bhi ff ya os me ye scene likha he Nahi gya but aapki story padhne ke baad laga ki aap show ke writers se bhi Accha ise likh paogi...if you have time and koi problem naa ho to Kya aap kuch is par likhoge...whenever you want...zaroori Nahi Hai agar aapka Mann ho tab he...

thank you Sweksha for reading this😊

and big thank you for considering me for writing the shravan guilt track.. I will try too write it. gimme some time though. Also, dunno how I will do with it.. I don't like to get my head into extremely sad zone coz it reflects in my day to day life also then.. coz the story keeps running in my mind..so that's why in my FF also, the sad part ends soon...as I can't bear it myself for too long.

but I will definitely try. 😊

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Lovely update...

Can you write a ff or OS where ramu kaka Honestly asked Shravan to stay away from sumo as he didn't like her unlike in the show where he backstabbed Shravan and it is Shravan who is ignoring sumo during preekar marriage

thanks dear 😊second request for the day.. I have to keep them listed somewhere... I will try.. dunno when though..