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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

For some reason I cannot like this. Stupid like button!

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading the first 2 chapters and I am looking forward to read more!!!

Please update soon!

Best wishes :)

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Naamika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Really loved both the chapters. Your writing is very much clear. Bonding between Ramnath and sumo is adorable. Eagerly waiting to read more.😊😊

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Swarnima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Res.. Will take time to unress coz wish to read it aaram se😊

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806
lovely dear..
the best thing sumo ramnath ki beti hai so major problem solved. no ramanth bhadhkaoing shravan 😉
but literally jab tumne bola ki ramnath ki beti hai suman i literally connected it to make suman shravan's sister but instantly remembered hum tum. usme to she even stayed with them😃

Hai na !! I wanted to rewrite the part where Ramnath wanted to adopt her.. but kept it cause I couldnt figure out how to portray better how fond he was of the kid..sorry newbie issues..

He he yeah little bit similar to hum tum with the bond but not quite still... Akhir kaar most ffs have shraman fighting in the beginning and the gap of few years before they reconnect ... I need to do more research before imaginasun takes wings. although I had it figured out a bit already this morning where I want to take this one..

Sochna padenga.

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Harshi Arora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Wow awesome yar today I read both part but I want to read more it's awesome yar plz update soon

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deepoceaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Read both part...it really interesting and sound something different... Plz continue it

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

amazing update

totally loved it

continue soon

superb

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kranti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Best FF. Very interesting.. waiting for next one...

Last yeh EDKV2 hota...

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mariajamal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

awww so sweet update ... sumo always thinks about others bechari.

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Res 😊
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Unres
This is getting more n more interesting with every update... 😊
Wonderful update dear... 👏

Loved the way you described Sumo's childhood, her friendship with Shravan n Pushkar, ShraMan's fight...everything!!So Nirmala asked Sumo about alliance n Sumo bought some time...loved their convo!!

Shravan follwed Sumo all the way just to ensure that she safely reached home ...Awww!!!
Thank God Sumo saw Shravan...
Loved n enjoyed immensely reading the whole update...!!

Thanks for the pm n plzz update next part soonish ...Eagerly waiting..
Love
Nik

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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