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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Faith28

Beautifully narrated... Very well written... Shravan is back with a bang!! Looking forward how the case resolves👍🏼

Thank you so much Faith. I'm so glad you liked it. Will try not to disappoint. 😊
Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya

Lub...!!!🤗
Amazing chappy bae...!!!
Aakhir kar saara majra pata chal gaya...
Awesome update...
Waana have more..😆
Update soon...!!
ANU😳

Hey Anu,
Thank you so much. Shravan is back in action.
Will try to update soon Anu but after Je T'aime as that's on mind right now😆
Change your username Anu!!! You are so cute and this name is the opposite.😕

🤗🤗

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey girl back with bang !!!!
phodu update, ohh my God hero ke thappad really no one can stand in front of him😉

ab hero is here so no tension at all 😃

loves shraman moment 😳

sorry for late comment dear hope you are doing good 😊

Priti

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Posted: 8 years ago
Ressi⭐️

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Unres!



SPARKLE!!!🤗🤗


I swear i read it long time back its just that i got time now to unress!
So sorry!

Okey directly coming to ur upii...

Haay!I was damn damn damn sure Shravan aay ga!Mera Shravan aay ga! N dekho woh aagaya😃
Kya dhasuu Hero wali entry mari Isnay k mein tu faint hotay hotay rah gae 🤪 😆 #Dramaqueenme

Oye Hoye!Yar sachi bataon agar mjhy seetee bajana ati na tu for sure ab tak 10 bar baja chuki hoti Shravan ki heroic entry par!😃...Par afsos mjhy ati nhi n jab bhi bhai ko bolon tu woh sikhata nhi n.Chachi ny sekhany ki koshish ki par mjhy smjh hi nhi ae..Dumbo me
Khair...

Woah Sparkle! ⭐️
Shravan's entry his attitude his build His threats everything was penned hell Fantastically! 👏
mein tu phirse fida hogae apnay Shravan pay😳
Really u penned tht sequence Brilliantly!I enjoyed that part A LOT!
And Saniyal'a bewildered state was a sight!😆😆...Very well Sparkle!😆 👏
Kya jun k dholai hoe Saniyal ki 😆 👏

Our Hovward Graduate Clever and extremely Hot Lawyer ki tu kya hi kahein!Bindas!
I so loved the Part where Shravan says lets forget the sore memories and make some good ones!An example of a Great and responsible son,brother and Lawyer! 👏

Oh!Kamni herself was happy to have them back!So she actually realized her mistake"😳
These oberio brothers🤢...One thing is for sure that the file is in PCT now the question arises woh wahan say nikal kar Malhotra lawyers k pass kaisy jaay gi?Ab zahir si baat hai usky paair tu hain nhi!😛😆

I so not want Shraman to leave their family!😔

😆...Preeti's tease..."Shravan aaygen tu apko rest nhi katny dein gay"..😳😆

Pushkar n Shravan are ❤️

Haay...Mar dalo Sparkle apny fluff stuff say!😳
Shraman moments were hell hell hell beautifully penned!I so loved them!❤️❤️
The ending was the BEST!!! I so loved it!😳😆

Sparkle this was a he of an Enthrlling Chap😃⭐️
Hats off Lub!👏

Now coming towards ur spoilers..

More Shraman moments!...[:D/]...Bring it on!⭐️

And and and...HOW IS GOING TO BE THIS CERTAIN SOMEONE TO MAKE SHRAVAN JEALOUS!!!]:o]
n u are asking whether he will be or not thn knw he's hell of a Over Possessive over protective over over sab kuch in Sumo's case!
Shravan kacha kah jaay us larkay ko!😆
Oh Sparkle kya tili chori hai...ab suspense maar hi dalay ga!

Plx ab tu update day do its been so long now!
plx do update soon.and disclose this new entry😃

Oh this story is getting more n more Intrigiuing!⭐️
Lots n lots of hugs n kisses ur way Sparkle!...🤗🤗...Muuuhh!❤️




Love
Teddy bear❤️






Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lubs 🤗
I know you are asleep there.
But guess what, i dont have any resses here 😆
I checked all the 73 pages and mera koi resses nahi hai yahaan 😆
I didn't comment on a few chapters, but i read them all and liked 😃

see you there at Qubool hai 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank You so much for the wonderful surprise!! Loved it. You made my Birthday special. I will always remember this🤗


Malhotra office was hustling around as Shravan has called for an urgent meeting and everyone were preparing to report their respective cases to him.

Bhaiya all set! "Everyone is waiting for you in the conference room. And here's the copy of the Will and the testimonies of everyone related to the Sitaragunj Estate".

Thanks Chote. Let's go.


Mathur how's Khan's case going on? asked Shravan

"I've a crucial hearing this week, finally convinced the witness to testify for us, he was threatened by Saniyal but getting all our informers out was a good idea. We were able to track him back again".

Great Mathur. Just be very secretive and vigilant at all times. Now when is the next hearing for Bharath Agarwal's case Rohit?

"It's two weeks from now Sir and I'm sure decision will be in our favor".

Hope for the best but be prepared to stumble with new challenges so you are still in control of the case. Saniyal might try to influence again.

And what about Ashwini Sehgal's case?

"That's a bit still complicated, replied Pushkar, a key witness is still absconding and Ashwini is worried he might lose. But we still have time, the next hearing is on 21st of next month".

Make sure to follow every lead, even if it's not confirmed try to get to the depth of it until you find the truth. Every single lead should be reported to me. I don't wanna take any chance regarding this.

Ramnath was just proudly staring at how efficiently Shravan has managed to take over all the cases. Guilt smeared all over his face again and eyes starting to well up remembering all the moments Shravan was in pain because of him.

You guys can leave now, Mathur you stay I need to discuss Berry's case said Shravan, turning towards Ramnath. Papa you OK?

Yes Beta let's discuss the case.

Now that we clearly know what Oberoi's want, we can be prepared to fight and protect Aashiyana.

What about Berry?? asked Ramnath

"We've to rescue him Papa, but when time comes. I don't want to rush anything, because Berry's life could be in danger".

But Bhaiya Berry told them that Sir has the papers, now they will try to harm us again. Why is he doing this, we are trying to save him and he's getting us in trouble. What if they attack us or our family?

"I know Chote, right now all we can do is be very vigilant and be ready for everything. They won't be quite, but they can't do much. If we lodge a FIR against them, they will be in trouble too. We have strong evidence against Saniyal, but there is a possibility that he might refuse to acknowledge that Oberois are behind this. Yet I strongly feel that they won't do the same mistake again but might torture Berry more to get the Papers out and maybe he will give in".

So what do we do then? asked Mathur

"Put our best informers behind everyone related to Oberois. They should directly report me, we have to rescue Berry before he gives in. Arrange a meeting with Shikha Singh when she's back in the city but not at the office. Also I need all the information about the land around Aashiyaana".

Sure Shravan I'll get to it. Mathur leaves.

"Papa please call Sherry to check if he has any copy of the Aashiyana Property Papers and tell Bunty to back to Oxford and just be careful, his studies's getting affected".

Okay Beta. See you tonight at home.


Bhaiya why do you think Berry said that?

"That's what bothering me Chote. I know he's in big trouble but he would never get Papa in trouble on purpose. I sometimes have a doubt that Berry might have given Papa those papers without even letting him know. Let's check all the files in Papa's cabin just to be sure".

What if we get a search warrant against Oberois? We might get some clue after all Saniyal works for him.

"No Chote. Even though Saniyal works for them, he might refuse it completely and we don't have any solid evidence for connecting Berry's missing to them and on top Mahesh Oberoi is in Politics. It could go out of hand and Berry will be in more trouble".

Tapping the pen on the desk Shravan was in deep thoughts about how get Berry out , he then snapped as an idea popped in his mind. Chote is there any Builder's Association Conference or Meeting where Berry had to appear.

"Not that I know for but we can certainly arrange one winked Pushkar. We can sponsor one such event said Pushkar chewing on one of the cookies from the desk. Hmmm... how does Sumo make these Bhaiya. They are too good".

Sumo!!! Shravan just smiled at her thought. Oh Shoot!!!! "I forgot I promised to have lunch with her. OK Pushkar be very careful in sponsoring this event, Oberoi's should not know that we're behind this. Make sure Media knows this and also get our closest reporter to spread the news that he will interviewing all the top builders of Delhi this week including Berry along with other's names. This news will certainly make the Oberois falter a bit. We will keep an eye on how they react. Also let's keep this between us for now".

Got it Mr. James Bond. Working with you on a case for the first time is fun!!!

"My name is Shravan!! Shravan Malhotra!! he said in the same tone as James Bond putting on his Sunglasses in a sassy style. And this Bond doesn't wanna make his wife wait for him". So see you later Alligator!!!

See you later Crocodile!!!


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"Preeta zara investors ki files meri gaadi me rakhwa dena warna main bhool jaoongi. Mujhe profits ki detailed report banana hai, uske baad hi meeting rakhenge, said Sumo packing up the last tiffins left. C'mon tum log delivery ke liye niklo, main ye sab saaf kar deti hoon".

Sumo main kar deti hoon, said Preeta. Aaj delivery ke liye main nahi jaa rahi hoon na. Us Dhurinder ko le ke jaana hai ek job ke liye. Pata nahi ab ye acting ka bhoot kab utrega. Tu ruk main ye gaadi me rakh ke aati hoon.

Theekh hai, main Shravan ka halwa nikal deti hoon. Woh aata hi hoga.

She blushed thinking about him as she remembered how he leaves her speechless with his antics making her crave for him more. Her thoughts were broken by the loud noises outside. Looks like Dh se Dhurinder is here!!! She goes out to find out what has he done now??

Yahin tha woh abhi kahan gaya?? Dhurinder was looking around everywhere even under Sumo's car making Preeta yell at him

Kya kar raha hai ab?? Kis ko dhoond raha hai?

Yahin to tha! kahan gaya! Tu ne kahin use bhaga to nahi diya?? he asked Preeta

Tu na bilkul pagal ho gaya, kis ke baare me baat kar raha hai? Sab chod ab chal teri naukri ki baat karna hai

Naukri??? Naukri tum jaise chote log karte hai, hum to acting karenge!! Abhi ek reality show mila hai usse public me famous ho jaoonga aur phir filme karronga filme!!!!


Ho gaya tumhara to jao yahan se agar Shravan aa gaya na, tumhare is pyare se mooh ka hi poster bana dega. Woh aata hi hoga

Kya!!! Top floor wale aane wale hai, mujhe jana hai par woh kahan hai??

Kaun?? asked Preeta and Sumo in unision

Guddu!!!

Kaun Guddu???

Guddu mere dost ka bhatija hai. He is 20 year old but in the accident in which his parents died he suffered brain injury and now he's like a 8 year old. My friend told me to look after him today and he will give me free acting class tonight.

I'm tired of your acting classes. Yelled Preeta. I think he left, let's go now she said pulling his hand.

He yanked it away! He's mentally still a kid Preeta. Sumoji can I look inside PCT once he asked very politely blinking his eyes

Go check quickly before Shravan comes.

Dhurinder rushes inside to look for Guddu, Suman and Preeta follows.


Where did the halwa go she wondered. I just put it on my desk. She goes to the other side and find someone hiding in there. Guddu, is it you?? Bahar aao!!!

She saw him nodding his head. Dhurinder came and called him out but he was still nodding his head for a no. Suman bents down and find him struggling to fit in as he was a grown up kid but the scared look on his face got her worried. She slowly stretched her hand towards him with an assuring smile which made him hold her and come out of the desk.

As he stood he was as tall as Sumo with a childish smile on his face.

Yahan kyun chupe the?? asked Sumo

Kyunki mujhe badi awazon se darr lagta hai, he replied with fear still all over his face. Ye bahar lad rahe the to main andar aa gaya. Aap gussa ho kya??

Nahi bilkul nahi.

Agar main ye boloon ke maine saara halwa kha liya tab bhi nahi??

Sumo smiles and says no.

Aap bahut achi ho, he quickly hugs her as Shravan enters.

Sumo!!!

Shravan tum aa gaye!!

Haan par ye kaun hai jo tumhe hug kar raha tha he questioned pulling her to the side.

Arre Shravan ye to bachha hai!

Bachha?? Mujhe to ye bachha nahi dikh raha, tumhe ye bachha dikhta hai

I'll explain, he's 20 year old but when he lost his parents in an accident he had a brain injury and now he mentally he's like a 8 year old.

Whatever it is. I want him to stay away from you. Is that clear?

Jealous?? Mr. Malhotra is jealous she winked.

Shut up Sumo, it's not safe.

OK give me my halwa. He changed the topic as he saw her expressions changed.

He ate it. She pointed towards Guddu

What?? You gave my halwa to him?

No he ate without asking

And you say he's a kid

He's a kid that's why he ate without asking

OK let's go now, I'm hungry. We'll have lunch out and then go home. I have work with Pushkar.


Aap bhi bahar aa jao Dh se Dhrinder ji said Shravan as he saw him hiding behind the door. Aap chup kyun rahe hai?

Main chup nahi raha tha Shravan ji, woh kuch gir gaya to dekhne gaya tha.

Mujhe halwa bahut pasand aaya, kya aap phirse mere liye banayengi? Maa ke jane ke baad kisi ne halwa nahi khilaya.

Suman's eyes welled up on hearing this. Koi baat nahi tumhe jab bhi halwa khana hai yahan aa jana, main bana doongi

Sumo!! Shravan protested

She raised her hand and assured him, making Shravan more mad.

Tumhara naam Suuummmooo hai asked Guddu trying to remember it.

Nahi beta ye Suman Aunty hai!!! said Shravan in a sarcastic tone

Nahi main tumhe Sumooo bulaaonnga.

Theekh hai. Aur ye Shravan hai?

Trravan!!

Trravan?? Shravan!! Trravan nahi. Now it was getting on his nerves

Woh main batana bhool gaya Guddu Sh ko Tr bolta hai, said Dhurinder in a small voice

Kya!!! He's playing with you Sumo and you still don't get it.

Kaminey!! screamed Sumo

What the hell Sumo!!! tum gaali de rahi ho mujhe

No!! Kaminey Movie Shahid Kapoor ki. Usme ek Shahid ko yehi problem thi

Are you in your senses Sumo. He says S properly but can't say Sh, how ridiculous?

Some have this problem Shravan. But Trravan is good too she laughs making him more upset.

Trravan bol raha hai ab kal Raavan bol dega

Raavan asaan hai Summoo, kya main inko Raavan bulaaoon? questions Guddu making Suman laugh out loud and Shravan fume in anger.

Beta main Raam hoon Raavan nahi, he replies. Raavan to tum banke aaye ho meri life me, he mutters to himself angrily and leaves from there.

Dhurinder tum jao yahan se ise le kar. Preeta main chalti hoon tu PCT band kar ke chali jana.

Suman runs and hugs Shravan from back while he was trying hard to ignore her. You look so hot when you are jealous, my jalkukde husband.

I'm not jealous Sumo I just don't want to see him again.

You won't Shravan. Woh roz roz thodi aayega. Chalo ab bahut bhook lagi hai.

Mujhe hi khaa jaoo he said still fuming in anger while starting the car

Khane ke baad she replied making him smile
You are going to be the death of me Sumo...


(A/N: Please read this in the tune of EDKV title song)


Chahoon agar to bhi na, ab khafa main reh paaoonga

Sehloo tera har dard par judai na seh paaoonga

Bandha hai tumne aise mujhe dosti se pyar se

Mil jane de dil jo bane Ek Duje Ke Vaaste...



I can take a breather now. This was pending for so long. Finally posted, and really hope you guys like it. I know I'm way too late, after Ramadan I was confused how to make the case interesting. Hopefully I didn't disappoint you. I told you that someone is coming to make Shravan jealous but is he someone to be jealous of?? What do you think??

Please let me know what you think about this update and my stanza #11 :) Thanks.


Lubna.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ahem Ahem something is burning but our Shravan never except he is jealous now one mentally poor man can make Shravan jealous.🤣 uska Moong dal ka halwa koi aur chat kar gaya.😆
The way handle all the juniors of him is commandable the Shravan Malhotra is really a James Bond 2.0.😆 nothing can be hidden from his eyes.

Vinu

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

1st to comment 🥳

Ahem Ahem something is burning but our Shravan never except he is jealous now one mentally poor man can make Shravan jealous.🤣 uska Moong dal ka halwa koi aur chat kar gaya.😆
The way handle all the juniors of him is commandable the Shravan Malhotra is really a James Bond 2.0.😆 nothing can be hidden from his eyes.

Vinu

Shravan is burning😆 ek to pehle Sumo ko hug kar liya aur phir halwa bhi kha liya. Glad you liked our James Bond. Thank you so much Vinu.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome cute update 😳
And ur stanza apt 4 update 👏
Eagerly waiting for more
Update fast

Maria 🤗
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Okie so it's a funny and cute birthday update Lubs :)))

Well the hubby taking charge in his office and the wife giving orders at her wrk place !! Such an adorable fulfilling Shraman scene ;))

Ab ye beech mein Guddu kahan se tapka aur kyu !! Kis ka shadyantra hai ye 😕 ya jus a irritating makhi types jis ko Mara aur gaya types 😆
The jealous malhotra :)) n Sumo Ka jawab 😉

Likhte toh to aap bahut khoob Lubna :) keep writing !

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