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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Hey Lubna. ..the update...although late beyond words ...was awesome yaar. The dinner date was such a dream...and your song proved to be the perfect desert to end it!! Way to go girl!!

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#202

I was smiling like an idiot while reading it...😊

This was absolutely worth the wait Lubna..

I am so glad that you decided to convert it into a SS.. otherwise shayad hume ye part padhne bhi nahi milta...

The suprises.. wow... kitna sochta hai banda uske baare mein... he can do just anything for her na..

The treasure hunt in the library .. wow.. nice idea...

He gifted her , her childhood home... wow... koi itna pyaar kaise kar sakta hai kisi se.. itna... itna zada... Shravan is Boyfriend goals man.. ❤️

He made her dinner.. 😳

Fireworks ... I love fireworks..

Full on romantic and a perfect date.

Your version of Zindagi song is fabulous . 👍🏼

Strange that you used to find love stories silly, yet you have one of the most amazing love story of your own".

Indeed ... They have the best love story ever.

Awesome update Lubna... 😊

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Poonammhatre88

@Poonammhatre88

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Hi Lubna
nice update
thanks for pm
continue soon
waiting for next update...

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#204

had waited for this update since long...

finally here😃, and all the wait is worth what i just read😛

man, like really i was trying to sing the lyrics in the tune of the song, to try to find these lyrics, but failed, so i listened to the long again, that's when i realized these are not from the song, amazing lyrics👏, so in sync with the way story is building up😳

the part when shravan licked the cake off sumo's face 😳 first feelin was 'eeww' there's so much pollution in delhi, all that dirt in his mouth then removed the crazy cleanliness filter from my mind and thought from his POV😆

update soon

love

Arpita

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Cinderella finally 'found' her prince charming !! Princess your time has come!!

Sumo's happiness knew no bound,,,neither mine!! Beautifully written! !

Loved the lyrics!! Amaaazing! !

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
The song is so good...

Their old days, dinner every thing is really nice

Hey Thanks Arpi.

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta
Yes you are too late😡 but I forgive you bcz u give us this beautiful part 😳thanks for it😛

Hey Harshit_ta,

I know I was very late, sorry again. Thank you for taking time to read and comment.

Lubna.

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Namiksfan
Hey lubna...you have become "the late latif lubna" 😆 ok sorry

This was too good👏

And your version of lyrics..omg!! They were so awesome...really don't have words to describe it

The diner date made me go awww...you completely loved upto expectations dear

The way he wiped the cake..i was blushing hard🤪

Update soon This time...please

Dolly😊

Hi Dolly,

So I'm LLL (Late Latif Lubna) now, 😆 I'll try not to be so late again, but I kinda like the title you gave me. LOL.

Thank you so much Dolly, So glad you liked the whole update and the song. I tried my best to keep the cake wiping scene look too bad, it was hard to find good words to describe it. 😉

I wont be this late again.

Lubna.

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
Beautiful part, i loved their banter and the song version was very good you have a way with words !

Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.

Lubna.

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#210

Beautiful...

Shravan bought Sumo's parents house from Khosla & gifted her... Terrace dinner, he cooked for her pizza, pasta. & chocolate cake... Wiping cake from her face was so romantic... 😳😳

Lovely date & romantic one... Sumo's happiness has no bound... He made her feel special with dinner date... 😉

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago