Channa Mereya ShraMan FF Chp-18 updated Page 73 July 5th

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Harshi Arora

@Harshi_ta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Yes you are too late😡 but I forgive you bcz u give us this beautiful part 😳thanks for it😛

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Sunain

@Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#192

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Lub!!!🤗

Ohh...where to start from😳...You also have some kinda of fascination to spellbound me..han😆

What i think is i shud say it was Hell Tremandous and end it here as wht i feel is I have no true words to really describe how Fantabulous it ws and how much i Loved it to core!Really u killed it!👏

But but but...tareef kiay baghair mjhse raha nhi jaay ga as when i was reading A huge grin plastered my face and got bigger and bigger with every passing min😃

How do u do tht...m so impressed by ur skill⭐️

Shraman Moments were...Shramanliciously Delicious❤️...totally Yumm☺️

U didnt disappointed a Bit...infact u just surprised me with such an Aaamazing update!😃

And about ur version of "Zindagi kahan kahan se"

Bas Intezaar me hi guzri thi zindagi Jitne the door tum utni thi tishnagi

Jitne the door tum utni thi tishnagi Tum pass ho to pyaas bhi bujhti chali gayi...

Zindagi kahan kahan se guzarti chali gayi....

Lafzon me kya kahe Dil me jo baat hai Khwabon se bhi haseen lagti ye raat hai

Khwabon se bhi haseen lagti ye raat hai Khushiyan banke baarish barasti chali gayi...

Zindagi kahan kahan se guzarti chali gayi...

This whole...literally stole my heart❤️...its each n every line helds so much feelings emotions and every line defines Sumo's very well...U nailed it!

Beautifully Penned!...without any dout!😉👍🏼

Tbh mjhy in ki dinner date ki excitement Sumo say ziyada thi😳😆

Ohh the date was PERFECT!...My fav part of it was the Library game...Brilliantly Penned!

each n every moment was lovely...made my heart swell with anticipation😳

The new feelings thy are coming across must be so beautiful for them and everything like a wonderful dream luvkly coming true.Both are on cloud nine floating in deep ocean of love and care.

His every gesture shouted his true n pure Love outloud for her and made her feel the most luckiest girl in this whole universe (n making us so jealous😳🤪)

He bought her childhood home cooked for her pampered her these all gestures overloaded with love made me Awestruk!

Their terrace moment was...❤️!! n so was their last Hug.It must had made him feel as if hez embracing his whole world and just want to secure her from every demon n disaster nearing her.

Han...Sumo wants to talk???...its nothing to be surprised of but it sounded suspicious...means something Intruging coming ahead😃...well so eager and excited to knw whtever she wants to talk about😳

Plz plz update soon as meri saans atki hooi hai🤪...tum hi bacha sakti ho😛😉

I'm so glad to knw tht u r not mad at me for being so late and Thanks for the hugs dear😳..means alot!

I hope this one makes u more happy!😃

Love you🤗

Take Care!

Sunain❤️

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

Hey lubna...you have become "the late latif lubna" 😆 ok sorry

This was too good👏

And your version of lyrics..omg!! They were so awesome...really don't have words to describe it

The diner date made me go awww...you completely loved upto expectations dear

The way he wiped the cake..i was blushing hard🤪

Update soon This time...please

Dolly😊

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Beautiful part, i loved their banter and the song version was very good you have a way with words !

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dhanyata

@dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#195

wonderful part !! this would be a dream for any girl in love. sumo shravan are the best and you brought their best version with your words👏

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Sorry for being late...

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Hey Lubna... Only one word to describe... Marvellous! It was amazing! The whole chapter was...just... See I don't even know what to say... And Shravan... Such a sweetheart he is.. Making all the arrangements only for his love. Awwweee! Kash show mein kuch dekhne ko milta!

And of course the lyrics... You are just too good with words. So perfect, so apt for the situation. Lovely.

Next part k liye zyada wait na karwana...

Thanx for the pm. Love ya...baby...

Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago

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deepoceaan

@deepoceaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#197

Excellent update lubna

Loved school & library part, her house.. Romantic date, cake cutting moment. Everything is beautifully penned

Update soon dear

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Swarnima

@Swarn283

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Posted: 8 years ago

#198

Lyrical Lubna is back!

With an Awesome update 😊

Loved it so much

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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 8 years ago

#199

Awww this was sooo beautiful heart-touching so loved it..thank u so much for wonderful update dear!
Loved your version of zindagi song!!

Love,

Spandana

Edited by sptrno - 8 years ago

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shaggy8

@shaggy8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#200

Hi lubna...
It was amazing dr... 👏 ...
The whole library scenario,their dinner date was just amazing ..beautifully penned...
Ur version of zindagi songs was cherry on cake...loved it
👏 ...
Plz continue soon...
Thanks for pm 😊

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