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Posted: 8 years ago
This story is just getting more and more beautiful with each update...their mutual understanding was their biggest strength...if only they could actually understand it..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: laavanyam

What u have written is beautiful !!! 😛 I loved this story

Thanks Laavanyam. So glad you liked it.
Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

This story is just getting more and more beautiful with each update...their mutual understanding was their biggest strength...if only they could actually understand it..

Hi Reshma,
Thank you so much. You've been very kind. And yes their mutual understanding is their biggest strength, and after the confession I feel nothing could come between them. Our bad luck that our fav show ended with their confession. So miss it everyday.

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

This was amazing! *speechless*


It's just so bittersweet to read Suman confessing her love for him, going out of her way just to be with him and having every intention to make only him her priority...
Thanks for the PMs...!!! 😳

Thanks a lot A. Hanjal, Glad you like it. These two are amazing, no one except they both can make each other feel special by giving priority to each other.
You are very welcome. 😛

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Lubna. Great piece again.👏

This was a mix of vulnerable revelations plus the joyous ones.
God really loved the proposal.
When shravan said
"Reh paoge iss toote insaan ke saath. "
And sumo replied
"Is toote insaan main meri jaan basti hai"
I was to like main Marjawan.
Shocking to jab tha jab mami ne kuch nahin drama create kiya.😆

Love
Arpita

Hey Arpita, thank you so much.
Yes this update was an emotional roller coaster for ShraMan. I'm glad they went thru this. This made them trust each other more, depend on each other more and of course love each other more than before. And mamiji would accept any guy for Suman as long as she's married and they are off her. Even in the show she was the one who convinced her to say yes to Shravan, by telling her she can repay her debt by getting married and letting them go meet their son.
Did you like my version of the title track??? Let me know. Have a nice day. 😊

Lubna.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Lubna. Great piece again.👏

This was a mix of vulnerable revelations plus the joyous ones.
God really loved the proposal.
When shravan said
"Reh paoge iss toote insaan ke saath. "
And sumo replied
"Is toote insaan main meri jaan basti hai"
I was to like main Marjawan.
Shocking to jab tha jab mami ne kuch nahin drama create kiya.😆

Love
Arpita

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: krutish22

Wonderful update

Beautifully written Shravan's emotional break down... Sumo supports him...
Love the date part too and title song edkv uska to kahnahi kya
We miss these part in the serial
Waiting for next part
Update soon


Thanks Krutish22, yes the emotional breakdown made them trust and support each other more. I can understand, our show ended when all the beautiful moments were supposed to begin.😡 It's still upsetting.
So glad you like the title track, I just love it, I keep singing all the 4 stanzas I wrote almost all day. Makes me really happy. I keep asking everyone if they like the song.
Thanks again for taking time to comment.

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing...Read it all in a go...

Well written...Plz continue soon

Thanks Jerry. Sure. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful dear Luba...
Shravan really feel bad for him... how much pain he has to go through...everybody is back stabbing... When he came to about his father's truth really his condition was hopeless...

In the show I heard director was saying its woman oriented story... But I would definetly says that it was not woman oriented show it was male oriented ... Shravan has suffered more in the show compared to Sumo... Everybody was taking dicision for him...he was clue less what is happening around him...

Sumo has handled Shravan very well... She knows how to calm down him... Their official date on the terrace under the full moon... Sumo is ready leave her PCT... That's great... She is not talking about self respect... Independent & all... Thank God...

The song which Sumo sung for Shravan beautiful... U r lyrics right... Keep it up...

When is the Shraman wedding... We proper wedding with all the rituals...

Update soon dear

Thank you

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

<font color="#0033cc">Beautiful dear Luba...</font>

<font color="#0033cc">Shravan really feel bad for him... how much pain he has to go through...everybody is back stabbing... When he came to about his father's truth really his condition was hopeless...</font>

<font color="#0033cc">In the show I heard director was saying its woman oriented story... But I would definetly says that it was not woman oriented show it was male oriented ... Shravan has suffered more in the show compared to Sumo... Everybody was taking dicision for him...he was clue less what is happening around him...</font>

<font color="#0033cc">Sumo has handled Shravan very well... She knows how to calm down him... Their official date on the terrace under the full moon... Sumo is ready leave her PCT... That's great... She is not talking about self respect... Independent & all... Thank God...</font>

<font color="#0033cc">The song which Sumo sung for Shravan beautiful... U r lyrics right... Keep it up...</font>

<font color="#0033cc">When is the Shraman wedding... We proper wedding with all the rituals...</font>

<font color="#0033cc">Update soon dear</font>

<font color="#0033cc">Thank you</font>

Hi Vimik,
Thank you so much for taking time to comment. I agree about it being male oriented or at least just as important, it's hard to find any show like this one and that's the reason Namik is taking time to sign any other show. So glad you like the lyrics, this makes me happy.

Lubna.

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