Channa Mereya ShraMan FF Chp-18 updated Page 73 July 5th - Page 13

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Lubna. Great piece again.👏

Hey !! excellent ! the confrontation part was awesome !! and the terrace scene was equally beautiful. I just loved that sumo understood shravan and told he is important to her.

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Sirf aadha he padha hai... Baki ka aftr my Clg.. Filhal ke liye RES
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#9900FF"> Lubna Dea...This was so so cool...👏👏👏
Loved it to the core yaar...❤️
Shravan's outburst bilkul jaayas hai...bhala konsa baap aisa karta hai..😡
Penned it beautifully dea...👍🏼
Sumo ne jis tarah se Shravan ko samjhaya...Loved it yaar...Kaash show mey aisa kuch hota...
Pushky is too cute...ShraMan ke liye chaccha (roof) sajaya...😊
sumo proposed to Shravu...Loved that part yaar...tooo gud...👏kiss bhi kiya...Aacha hai..😉
All in all amazing update...do bring out more like these...
Thanx for the pm..
Love,
ANU😳

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Hey Anu,
Thank you so much. Dil khush kar diya tumne. Shravan was really hurt, but Sumo was with him as his support without any ego, which was important. I wanted to recreate the terrace scene again as that's where they renewed their friendship. You didn't say anything about the song. In the show there was only male voice but I wanted Sumo to be a part of it too. It was needed according to my story. Let me know what you think about it.

Lubna.

Originally posted by: laavanyam

What u have written is beautiful !!! 😛 I loved this story

Thanks Laavanyam for taking time to read it. Glad you like it.

Lubna.

Originally posted by: bworm

Beautiful. ...it was love.

Thanks. 😊

Lubna.

Originally posted by: evaviego

AWww... So cute... I always wished to see Sumo doing all this for Shravan...

Great update👍🏼

Thank you so much Lubna😊

Thanks Eva, I know hamari bahut si khwahishen adhuri reh gayi show me. Writing about it makes it less painful. Just trying to keep them in our lives and our imagination.

Lubna. 😊

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Yayyy🥳🥳🥳

Dekha threatening kaam aa gayi na!😆

It's a lovely update Lubna, as expected! Everything of this part, are just perfect! Be it, Suman-Ramnath confrontation, Ramnath -Shravan confrontation, Shravan's breakdown, everything!👏

But but but ...the scene on terrace, Sumo singing for our Shravan is just cherry on the cake!👏 👏Couldn't ask for more! Lovely update Lubna, as you have promised! And yes it was worth waiting! Please do write more... Will be waiting eagerly... Till then, lots pappiyan and jhappiyan!🤗🤗

P. S... Is it the last part? if yes, then an epilogue please.. And if not, no one will be more happier than me!😃

Hey Sanjh,
Finally got time now to reply everyone. Thanks for the wonderful reply. I'm so glad you liked the terrace scene, I didn't wanted to go wrong with this. Shravan's confrontation was much needed, but Sumo supporting Shravan was the key.
I have another part for this story and another stanza for the title track. This would be sensuous. 😉 😆
Let me give you a teaser to the last stanza of the title song:

"Sanson me milkar saans ab
Hone lagi madhosh..."

Let me know what you think about it.

Lubna.

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Sanjh,
Finally got time now to reply everyone. Thanks for the wonderful reply. I'm so glad you liked the terrace scene, I didn't wanted to go wrong with this. Shravan's confrontation was much needed, but Sumo supporting Shravan was the key.
I have another part for this story and another stanza for the title track. This would be sensuous. 😉 😆
Let me give you a teaser to the last stanza of the title song:

"Sanson me milkar saans ab
Hone lagi madhosh..."

Let me know what you think about it.

Lubna.

This was amazing! *speechless*