OS: The Little World! [Posted 25/11]

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Sunain

@Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

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The Bestest One...Indeed!!
M Awestruk..spellbound..literally..
was Beautifully n Stupendously written!! 👏 👏 👏
Loved it to core...literally touched my heart❤️ ❤️ ❤️
The father daughter bonding was fantastic n lovely..Shravan over possesive for hia lil Princess..awwh
Made me emotional...the intensity of love..superb
he said she'll live just like his daughter n no one else..tht part was outstanding..n the ending was marvalous.
Really loved the plot...
Fantabulous piece..hats off to u bro..wud love to give u a standing ovation for this excellent piece of urs 👏 ⭐️

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Euphoric_Cacta

@Euphoric_Cacta

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

Hello girls,
Please buddy this account for Zephyr's stories!

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dhanyata

@dhanyata

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

Its so beautiful. Daddy and his little girl bonding is always bliss...so very well written. So emotional. Great work

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing write-up!!!And as you said,it is true that a daughter need not has to transform into anything ;she has to grow as a daughter only bcoz she is in no way inferior to a son!!!!

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shaggy8

@shaggy8

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing story... beautifully penned 😊

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

What a beauttyyy!,!

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Crazypiya

@Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing os
They way u potrait the feelings of a father m just spellbound
I dont know whether u have kids or not..
But being a mom i can say only one thing
If yes then ur kid is really very lucky to have a parent like you
N if not then u will be an amazing parent for your kids
N the last part where u potrait than its not needed that a daughter needs to fullfill dreams of her parents like a son.. She will be a daughter and will make her parent proud as being their daughter..
Loved it

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Very well written. I think this is your forte. Do write more. Would love to read your work.

Lubna.

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

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Damn Man!!!!!!I Seriously dont have words to describe how much i liked it..no loved it!! 😊
Every emotion ,every dialogue was just amazingly superb 👏
What a way of writing 👏...I feel like I am seeing everything in front of me 😊
N you just NAILED IT at the end!!! 👏
Please write more n more!!!!
Nik

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