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lavanya

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow...

Am sooo sorry for late comment..

It is exceptionally superb..

Loved the feeling of a father..

And I dnt find any words to describe abt ur ending... awesome.

LavSriya

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Akriti12

@Akriti12

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Posted: 8 years ago

hey dear...a big round of applause for u..👏👏

it's so so beautiful..so lyrical,flowed like a beautiful musical composition...❤️

loved it to the core..❤️

and the best dialogue-"she 'll grow as my daughter , no need of any transformation"..👏👏

well done dear & keep writing..😊

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

As a father Shravan feelings is so bliss to read...

Shravan was just over the moon when he hold his bundle of joy in his hand... Tiny hand of his princess seems so small infront of his long fingers...

Keep writing...

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing OS dear..
Beautiful..
Love it..❤️
Thnx for pm dear..

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

What a beautiful one-shot!

Full of positivity and emotions. Absolutely loved it.

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