To Be Continued.. (ShraMan SS)

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Beautiful story !
This could have seriously been our last episode, loved it
Keep writing !

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Hi Swarnima,
Very well written, loved every bit of it. Wow a beautiful story came to an end and of course for a new beginning. You write really well and I would like to request you come back with a new story soon. Will be waiting. 👏 😊

Lubna.

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

This was so sweet Swarnima. ...exactly he we would have wished the story to end. ..would have given some sort of closure..but you gave me the much needed relief. ..how about an epilogue. .anything more about their life as a couple.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Wow... Simply wow! Desperately need an epilogue! but I think you should write the very one! No one could do justice to your thoughts and your style of writing! Will be waiting...

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Last part!!!! But its incomplete.. Please complete the story dear.. And please write an epilogue too..

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

beautiful ending

absolutely loved it

thank you for writing it

superb

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srividyasubbu1

@srividyasubbu1

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

The concluding part was too good and yes as you said the end does not say its literal meaning but a happy beginning. Thank you for this wonderful story. Yup do write more stories. Would love to read them

- Sri

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Meera

@Jerry2308

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Simply awesome.. Beautifully written.. Do write more...

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Amazing chap!...

But this is the last chap... 😭

After crossing so many hurdles in their life our little poor souls came closer to each other finally... It made me smile when Shravan trying control his emotions!... After their lawful wedding he didn't get chance to eat shaadi ka ladoo... 🤣

Update epilogue soon...

Thanx for the PM...

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago