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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

#931

Ya,how cud Deepti end Hide & Seek .. Argh ..

Awesome update ... good its from Sumo POV .. shravan ka guilty POV bad me dekhenge warna story partial ho jaegi ...

She understands that he's doing all this out of love,but pissed out of his ways and ofcourse she can't understand the changed Shravan Malhotra the sassy and I-mean-Business from loving caring one ..

Even I was thinking that this Aditya and his father won't let things end here only,they will definitely do smtg ..

I liked that atleast the rude Nanu side was infront and later on Shravan let her see the real face of her Nanu logically and glad she understood ..

But really that instant broke my heart,it was like she was again orphan .. In all these months,it was she who had suffered most-she loved ppl,cared for them but they ditched them -1st she lost parents,then she thought at least Nanu loved her,he used her,Aditya was her friend , she fooled her and trapped her and Shravan was no less-she fought for him,gave him strength,will power and all her love but he also broke her and again married her forcibly ..Like a thing,she's being handled without consent.. poor girl .. she's all broken,wondering how she didn't have a nervous breakdown still,she must be an emotional mess ..😭

Reverse psychology works everywhere,sofa bola toh bed pe soengi ..😉

The cute lil romance was nice between them and her mutterings - mar bhi gae to pta ni chlege,bada pyaar karta h,😆 And that 'fayda utha rahe ho' will again make him realise that the man needs to earn forgiveness for a lot of things and build up trust again .. won't be a cakewalk for him .. and I'm waiting how she mingles with his family and overcomes this painful time .. update soon ..❤️

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#932

Lovely update..

I always love ShraMan's nok jhok. ..

Aditya's father might do something..

But Shravan's dialogue. 👏

Thanks for pm

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#933

Juju!!!🤗

Wht to say...Yeh tunay kya kia...😲

U wont believe the first thing tht left my mouth as soon as i was done reading it was...Mera dil tu upar nechay ho raha hai!😆...n my broz were like Kyun kya hoa...n i laughed on their concern n said kuch nhi was just reading a story to which thy shock their heads in disbelief😆

M really shocked to the core after reading this😕...in true means it was a MINDBLASTING one!👏

Coming to the upii...

The way Adi's dad told Shravan tht he wud have to pay for this in future made me😕...is gonna turn their life's into hell...the evil dad n son duo are giving me negative vibes😕

N the way Shravan saved her from Adi's nonsense burst out was❤️

Nanu..i cant believe he cud do tht..m hell shocked😲...is it really true...is Shravan's dout true??

N the way Nanu treated Sumo was 🥺...n Shravan calmness made me furious😡...i mean come on yar she is being through hel alot n all she needs is love n care n some sympathy...n hez acting the opposite...indeed he has changed.

Ohh their bedroon banter was👏...loved it😳

N the way he teased her was⭐️

Typical wife's ki tarha she send him to close the windows...awwh...n he did it after some denials😆...Pati pati hi hota hai aur biwi biwi😆

Ohh n the way he comforted her...touched my heart which surely proves he still loves her😳...n was already obvious as he really cudnt even bring or tolerate the thought of sharing her.

Their cute moment was..beautiful❤️...i just loved it😳

But thn wht Suman said made me go 😲...n...💔...Fiyda utha rhay ho😕...like srsly she thought so low of him😲...hell shocked...aisa jaisay kissi nay electrocute kar dea ho mjhy.

N imagining Shravan's predicament hearing such a accuse..was painful...😭

Yek kya kar rhay hain dono apnay sath😭...cant see thm like this...but M loving it A lot!

All in all it ws hell Stupendously Penned!...tunaay tay Mahfil hi loot leti hai😆😉

It was fun reading it...no dout ur storing is geting more n more engaging upii by upii...n m enjoying this Roller Coaster ride Alot!

Plz plz plz do update soon cant wait ton knw Shravan's pov..whts in his mind n how he'll react to her accusation😃...so many querries n answers are only with u so plz Dont make us wait for long as u knw na my patience level is 0😳😆

will be waiting...till thn..

Take Care!

Lalchi❤️

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#934

Saaanjh!!!

Seriously yaar love love love your Tedha Shravan!!

Suman ke dimag ka pech dhilla tha wo bhi usne tight kar diya... Never realised nanu used her till I read it and then actually yeah he is right... That was selfish for nanu to do.

Mehenga padega? Adis dad sounded like amrish Puri...

And last scene wqs actually cute... You wrote well. No self doubt soft ramntic scenes you have already hit master strokes in previous chapters haan.

Thank you for giving me this one. Mai froum pe hoon farewell nahi dena mujhe.. bas FF khatam hua hai 😆

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#935

Bunny!!!! your tedha shravan is someone to die for yar❤️

And tedha shravan beech me softy bhi ho gaya tha...love it sooo much

Sooo sad for sumo us bichari k sath bohot sad hua yar...really could not imagine nanu could do this yar!!!😭😭 dil toot gaya yar💔

And that thunder scene ...full Bollywood feels yaa 😆😆

These two be so adorable

Quite emotional it was...but you write emotional sooo good baby...so proud of u mera bunny👏👏

U better update soonish varna gundi mode activate ho jaye ga🤣

And for a change aj drama thoda kam kiya😆😆

Gundi 😎

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#936

Res ...

Unress...

Hey Sanjh,

Totally loved it. Aditya ki bolti band kar di Shravan ne. Great use of the "Sasti cheezon ka shauk bhi nahi hai mujhe".👏

But never expected this from Nanu. Hope Nanu understands and forgive Suman as she got married without permission even though she did it for him. If Nanu forgives Suman, she will forgive Shravan. Hope they clear the differences soon and have some cute romantic moments together.

Dr. Sanjh ne Shravan ko theek kar diya, ab Counselor Sanjh dono ke misunderstanding door kardo. Please.😭 So we get to read more lovely moments like they shared before.

Lubna.

Edited by LubSha - 8 years ago

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lavanya

@amlavs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#937

Wow...again an wonderful update...

ShraMan in same room... sharing same bed wow..

Shravan still madly loves his sumo...

Naanu...

Excited for next update...

LavSriya

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Faith28

@Faith28

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#938

Superbly narrated👏Loving it...looking forward to how they resolve their differences 😊 Pls update soon.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#939

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200
Wow really nice one 👏
Sumo don't have any one other then shravan
I hope he will lookafter her
Thank u
Waiting for next update

Hey Nadeeka.. Let's see what they will do next.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#940

Originally posted by: Crazypiya
Awesome update.. Hai
So finally they r together
Feeling bad for sumo...nanu ke baarein mein sochke... Bechari ko aur kitna dukh sehna padega..
No sumo u r not an orphan
Sharavan is there for u darling
N a big hug to u saanjh .. Using that dialog shravan malhotra ko sasti chhezo ka sokh nahin hsin
Kyaa baat kyaabaat...
Finaly they r on same bed
But sumo yeh kar diyaa yaar
Jald se jald next update karo...

Hi piya.. Thank you so much.. I wanted to use that dialogue for so long! Abhi possible hua hai...

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