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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

#711

Wow .. awesome update .. 😭broken down shravan , well he did go overboard and its good that he knows that .. I loved that chapter was from pushkar's pov.. I liked the bold Preeti who threatened shravan and yes ❤️clever shravan , he knew nanu knew where is sumo .. Liked the kaabil song insertion and timing .. I thought he'll find her in a day or two .. but woah ! three months .. But yes ! he got well completely,the biggest hindrance removed .. 😊 And ya taking over Berry's firm - sassy,smart,badass shravan malhotra is back🥳And 'abhi futega bomb' 🤣 .. the last lines from dhadkan was apt 👏well abhi toh blast next chapter me hoga .. waiting for explosion ..😉

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shaggy8

@shaggy8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#712

OMG...it was such a dhamakedar update yaar...
Kya U turn liya hai story ne...totally loved it...dialogues were mindblowing..beautifully penned...especially that last one...👏 ...
Aeee... the shrvan malhotra is back in his avatar.. 🥳 ...
so sumo manno mission is on by our badass shravan 😆 ...

Aur Preekar ki Love story ka khulasa hogaya...
super dooper excited for next parts...plz update soon. ..

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#713

Bunny ...hayeee ye kya rapid fast speed se bhaagi...sumo gone...shravan chalne laga...three months nikal gaye. ..sumo found ...company overtook omg!!! Kya race lagayi h😆

But this was too good yar shravu finally thik ho gaya *sighs contedly* and we are going to see badass shravan malhotra omg!! Was dying to see this from chapter one thank you sooo much for this not getting words to explain *dances till exhaustion * are bimar hu na...jaldi thak gayi nachte nachte🤣 dramaqueen me is always present and bichari sumo ko kya shock laga hayee🤣 and pushkar ka p.o.v how are you so good at it?👍🏼but i love it and i love you bohot sara as you know...meeting you soon with next update hena? Hope tu is point of time p hume wait nahi karvaegi. ...meri achi bunny h na? Jaldi update kar dena pleeeaaasssee *pleads with puppy eyes*

Chal bbye...meet u soon😊

Gundi 😎

Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago

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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 8 years ago

#714

Awww this was so beautiful emotional intense fab so love it dear

Spandana

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#715

Ek kaam toh acha huwa Sumo ke vajah se.!. Shravan has started to walk without the crutches & he is alright now... Now he won't feel insecure... He can show his huq on Sumo... Apna huq jama sakta hai Sumo pe...😉

Pushakar's POV was good... . Preekar ki chori pakdi gayi... 😆by Mr. Sherlock... Even Nanu's chori... 😆

Let's see how how he will win her heart back now... Papad belo Shravan belo... U have hurted her many times it won't be that easy... But u r The Shravan Malhotra good luck... 🤣 welcome Mr Badass Malhotra start mission Sumo manao... 😆

Last sentence was good Sunil shetty has told to Shilpa shetty...😆

Thanx for the PM...

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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nadeeka1200

@nadeeka1200

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Posted: 8 years ago

#716

don't do this to us i want read more😭

superb update no words

thank u pls update sooon

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#717

Wow sanjh its marvellous... Kabil song used very well..each and every scene was very well described.. And the last line Dhadkan wali was cherry on top... So tashan starts now...waiting is a small word I m dying for the next part.. And baby Thankyou sooo much for pm.

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#718

Hey buddy... 🤗
Amazing update buddy... 😊
Pushkar's POV idea was too good..!!
So Shravan realises his mistake...!!
The effect of leaving Sumo on Shravan is soo beautifully deascribed buddy.. 👏
I loveeed the song...truly apt for the situation..❤️
Pushkie ki love story or nanu ki chori pakdi gayi.!! 😳
But what was written in the letter???..or did I miss smthg!!
So finally Sumo mil gayi... a big relief to Mr. Malhotra 😊
Shravan took over the company just for winning back Sumo...Wohooo..!!..nice move!!
Ahh now Sumo madam is not going to forgive him easily this time...!!
Exited for the next part...!!
Thanks for the pm buddy.. 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik