Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1 - Page 74

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

absolutely brilliant

totally loved it

continue soon

superb

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Sanjh,

Wow, what an amazing update. This was Destined Rewinded. Totally loved it. I was just going out but couldn't stop myself from reading this. Finally Shravan is all better walking without even a crutch. There will takkar now between two strong headed boss and employee who happen to be lovers. I'll comment more about it later.

I'm happy that song suited perfectly for your storyline. Want to write more, but gotta go now. 👏👍🏼

Lubna.

Originally posted by: Sunain

Lubna!!!🤗

ek baar yakeen mjhpe tu kar tujhe choorke nhi jaoonga

Teri kasam tujhse kiya har waada nibhaonga

Par tere bin ek pal bhi jee na paoonga

Tujse hi tu meri sasoon mein hai zindagi

Main tere kabil hoon ya tere kabil nhi...

M all speechless...really Lub u described his thoughts so wel...apt way i must say!😳

So so beautifully Penned!

So full of feels n i did touched my heart...loved it to core!❤️

Ur song version added beauty and live to Sanjh's chapter...literally!

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

PERFECT MIXTURE OF ALL EMOTIONS...everything soo perfect👏

now excited to see this new bindast THE SHRAVAN MALHOTRA😎....aur kaise apane ruthe pyar ko manayega

Originally posted by: Faith28

Amazing...nice move by mr. Malhotra👏 Eagerly awaiting for the next update😊

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

The last part reminded me of Anil kapoor and kajol's "Hum aapke dil mein rehte hain" in which anil kapoor also bought a loss company because his wife was working in that company and she is also very stubborn

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

The update is awesome as always..

Lubna the song is beautifully penned👏

Excited to see this new badass shravan

Originally posted by: nileshni679

Sanjh u r an awesome writer n very well kno how to drool your readers😉

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Wow .. awesome update .. 😭broken down shravan , well he did go overboard and its good that he knows that .. I loved that chapter was from pushkar's pov.. I liked the bold Preeti who threatened shravan and yes ❤️clever shravan , he knew nanu knew where is sumo .. Liked the kaabil song insertion and timing .. I thought he'll find her in a day or two .. but woah ! three months .. But yes ! he got well completely,the biggest hindrance removed .. 😊 And ya taking over Berry's firm - sassy,smart,badass shravan malhotra is back🥳And 'abhi futega bomb' 🤣 .. the last lines from dhadkan was apt 👏well abhi toh blast next chapter me hoga .. waiting for explosion ..😉