Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1 - Page 10

Originally posted by: arshuaar

beautifully penned...
loved it...

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Are you serious?? You don't feel this upto the mark?? This was superb

I loved it

I feel you gotta a nice reaction by shravan over the last lines of sumo..i just feel

The chapter is really really awesome

Thnks for the pm

Update soon😆

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Up to date mark.😕 it is beyond mark...

Absolutely amazing...👏

Waiting for next...

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing update... shravan's past really gave me goosebumps...loved the part where he called her sumo... excited to see supportive sumo helping shravan to move on..

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Vyshnav

Are you sure it was not upto the mark?? Its awesome👏

Loved it' Thank you so much for the PM

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Good..

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

awsome... emotional... total blast ... 👏 please PM me ... update soon

Originally posted by: amlavs

Amazing update...

Sumo the wrestler gave a good knock on Alisha head..

It's amazing tat shravan opened up to sumo...an unknowing Bond is growing between them..

Keep.going..

Loved it..

LavSriya..

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Wow Sumo ne toh kamal kar diya...

She supported Shravan infront of Alisha... Wow this girl nailed it...

It was Major accident... She ran away from there who will tell she loves him.. & this fellow crying for that shit girl... Sumo is right he couldn't utter single word infront of her... Bechara shayad usse abhi bhi lagtha hai woh Alisha se pyaar kartha hai... He didn't love her he will realise one day actually that was not love...

Sumo what she told agar yehi situation mein.. Mein hoti toh mein aapko kabhi nehin chodti...

Let's see what will be Shravan's reaction for this...

Update soon

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