The vulnerable meets the powerful within-An Analysis

SleepyPsycho thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#1
Okay so Psycho Analysis finally makes its appearance as a guest here in this forum.I had quite diverse request on which episodes to analyse and I couldn't really decide to choose among them so I went for my favorite.This bit of Shravan what I am going to write right now is challenging and equally interesting,mixed breed he seems like so without any more time lets begin.

Psycho Analysis

He watched her,her head hung low,tears ready to break the walls of strength and dreams she had built up.Somewhere in him he felt as if something was incomplete like a lone piece of puzzle had found a place but which was completely or maybe partially wrong,as if not fitting with its counter part.He watched as she tried to leave,not even stopping when her best friend asked too rather denying that she was not fine.He now realized why it had felt wrong,why it had felt as if it was misplaced.His heart had understood that he had done wrong and had hurt her but his brain denied,conveying the message to him that his heart was wrong and was just playing with him.He heaved a sigh,letting out all that he was holding in just as she was out of sight,that sigh had conveyed as to how much contentment he had not received and what amount of uneasiness he was feeling at the moment.

His heart was broken and hence had lost its power but brain being the most stable had gained all the power and so he decided to hear the one who held the most power at the moment,so finally a new mask for him was formed.

He went behind her,taunted her,made her realize how wrong she had been in the past.He at the moment,the most vulnerable was over powered by the most dominating,that was- the brain,he was now just a mere puppet,doing what his brain had directed him to do.

As she said that what she had done 10 years back to him was just a 'bachpana',the oldest broken pieces of his heart that were burnt partially now rose and told him how she was now,10 years later again blaming him for being wrong.Those pieces not just conveying how cruel the girl in front of him had turned out to be but along with him burning the leftover part of them,burning him along.

She asked him one last question,asking to ask himself what he had turned out to be.In him now two powerful people had formed an alliance,the burnt pieces of his heart and the brain,much powerful than ever before.And so they once again took him in their control and gave a heart breaking reply to her,leaving her in such a state that she had nothing to say anymore.

The burnt pieces of heart and the brain went off for a victory party leaving the fresh broken pieces of his left over heart to mourn his pain.Once again 10 years later the same girl had walked away not once looking back,not once saying the word 'Sorry'!


Tadaaa! Its over finally.Hope you all had a good read and I hope I lived up to my previous ones.I am a bit scared about this one as I am now analyzing after really wrong and have no idea about still having it in me.So leave your likes and views below,it would really help me!

Thank You.

-Mitali❤️

Created

Last reply

Replies

18

Views

1.6k

Users

12

Likes

27

Frequent Posters

orion23 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Res
I'll unres by tonight!!
---------------
Psycho!
You proved your mettle!
That episode had stirred a lot many feelings in me...
And you brought them all back...
All Shravan ever wanted was for her to realise what she had done...
To apologise and he'd take her back with open arms!
Sigh...
He broke that day again much to his dismay...
Very well written hon!
Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago
anonymousanju thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#3
ur analysis's are always amazing...episode 15 was my first episode of edkv n I'd cursed shravu a lot but in very next part I got to know why he did that n I was like dumbstruck ...then I realized how he'd have felt at that moment when he needed her the most n this time she changed for good but got the results of her doings in past... awsm mitali ...loved it... can I call u mita if u don't mind?? or ur Nick name??
Sunain thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#4
Res
wil do it by weekand😉

""""
Sorry sorry sorry mittu m really sorry...i knw i shud hav had unresed by weekand..but got soo buzy k apay hi leay time nhi tha...so pardon me 😳

Coming to the upii...
Mittuuu.. 🤗 🤗
was phenomenal dear...loved it to core❤️
Beautifully penned

Tum kya ho aur mein kya hoon...ths dialogue 😕
Shravan was badly hurt all he wanted was a proper apology from her...agar aisa ho jata tu shravan wud hav easily pulled his gruards down n took her in his embrace...

Really loved it..waiting for more 😳
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
SleepyPsycho thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

ur analysis's are always amazing...episode 15 was my first episode of edkv n I'd cursed shravu a lot but in very next part I got to know why he did that n I was like dumbstruck ...then I realized how he'd have felt at that moment when he needed her the most n this time she changed for good but got the results of her doings in past... awsm mitali ...loved it... can I call u mita if u don't mind?? or ur Nick name??

Same was the case with me! *Virtual HiFive*
Thank You :)

I am called Mittu but if you wish to call me me Mita or anything you like,feel free to do so.I don't mind at all!
CarpeDiem_365 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#6
This episode came and I was hooked...booked to EDKV forever...
Shravan ka badla or a beginning of badlaaw...

Mind vs Heart... Plan was success yet nothing feels right..!
Tum kya ho aur main kya hoon...phew !!
Sorry awaited... (will remain awaited unfortunately)

Super analysis... loved reading it...
SleepyPsycho thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

This episode came and I was hooked...booked to EDKV forever...

Shravan ka badla or a beginning of badlaaw...

Mind vs Heart... Plan was success yet nothing feels right..!
Tum kya ho aur main kya hoon...phew !!
Sorry awaited... (will remain awaited unfortunately)

Super analysis... loved reading it...

Same Same Same!

I know Sorry was never said but then we saw Sumo not saying that but practically doing that during the the whole journey,though I agree that a bit of apology from her side was needed to!

Thank You :)
anonymousanju thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#8
virtual hifive... will call u mittu then :)
CarpeDiem_365 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Same Same Same!

I know Sorry was never said but then we saw Sumo not saying that but practically doing that during the the whole journey,though I agree that a bit of apology from her side was needed to!

Thank You :)


Actions do speak louder than words,,, yet a little vocalization never hurts ...😉
Safire thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_


Actions do speak louder than words,,, yet a little vocalization never hurts ...😉


Exactly!!!!BTW , your analysis was awesome!!!you have cut deep into the episode and brought out the inner most emotions of shravan very well👏

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".