Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 45

Originally posted by: trayee

agar shraman romance hotness ki sath malhotras cute family drama mil jaye to life ki to balle balle ho gaye...
piyali u made my day...nice update wid a suprv cuteness..
pushkar's dialogues & their reactions were watchworthy...

update soon dear..wid our hot & naughty shraman 😉 👏

Originally posted by: dhanyata

dekho...i told u before...my vocabulary is so weak to find words to praise...😉

awesome, amazing, mindblowing, fantastic, adorable update this is. lottt of progress in shraman's relationship...👏naughty shravan is sooo cute. Of course family drama is equally important, only then we can have shraman's marriage on card. and their bonding is lovely...how even naniMa is fond of sumo...so nice.

now that their marriage ceremony would start, am so excited for their moments...thanks again for most beautiful update of this FF.

Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: Castile2

Res
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Unress

You know whats the best feeling in the world?

Getting a really nice long and happy update the first thing in the morning! 😳

Seriously, I woke up and groggily opened IF and saw your comment and I knew you had posted the next chappy!! 😆

Even before you sent a PM!! 😛

But you scared me there a bit with Shravan keeping distance... But you quickly cleared that up!!

Suitcase exchange was too good!! 😆

My God!! Pushkar's curses to Sumo's future husband were just 🤣

And Varun and Pushkar's reaction to their wedding announcement! 🤪

Naacho its ShraMan's wedding!! Yohooo!! 🥳 [:D/]

Update soon!!

Love
Cas ❤️

Originally posted by: ReebaS

Wow wow wow its awesome yaar itna acha likhti hai tu...Its beautiful yaar..you always make me read each and every chapter again and again...Plz update the next part asap..A tight hug for you baby

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Piya,

Loved every bit of it. Like I said it before you give all characters equal importance. I didn't want it to end. Pushkar was very cute in this part. I like that the misunderstanding are cleared out by talking instead to becoming differences.

I don't know how you planned Sumo's confession but I have a suggestion for you, just like in Maine Pyar Kiya, Salman khan wants Bhagyashree to confess in front of everyone. You can use the antakshari part here. Your characters in this story have a lot of resemblance with them, of course without the negatives. It's just a suggestion, I'm sure you must have awesome confession for Sumo, that we didn't get to see on the show.

Take care and update when you feel better.

Lubna.