Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 107

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Wow Piya

Nice Update Thank U
I love the way Shravan take care of Suman
Please Update sooon piya can't wait for week



Thank uu dear
Hope u liked it...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Piya di...piya di. ..finally apan update kar diya itna mehnat k baad😆😆

It was too too good ...loved each and every part of it

Specially the caring shravan ...it was the best...the way he explained her everything...omg!! Just took my heart away and that line..."shravan to apni sumo ki bina jee hi nahi skta" omg!!!...my heart just stopped beating for a sec and then fluttered

And the song...kuch dino se...my recent fav have all the necessary feels

And you depicted society's harsh truth very realistically. ..people nowadays are so mean ...that was so beautifully penned👏👏👏

And packing romance...hayeee🤪

Or vo trip part...loved it...and too excited to see an trip p kya hota h

Please please please update soon and apko chodne vali to hu nahi me...pura time jaan khuangi apki😃mera haq h vo to😉

Doll😊




Dolll
Ab tujhe kya bolun bol..
Muaaah muaaah
Achha ab kitni seedhe ban rahi hai.. Kal raat ko meri jaan khaa li thi yune update ke liye

Are shravan sumo was ek duje ke vaaste kaise jeeyag ek duje ke bina

N thank uu for liking the song re..
Tujhe to pata hi hai i love songs

Ab packing romance to tera hi idea tha
Thik thak huya???
Friday se pehle start nahi karne wali huun
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazypiya




Thank u harshita
Hahah u r so cutee yaar
Actually i send pm to so many ppl but got comments from my pehchaan wale hum tum lovers
Pushkar to is like suman ki dhaal..
N Ramnath i want to potrait him like a perfect father figure.. Which will be totally opposite from the show..
In the show god knows what cvs want yo potraied.. They just ruined his character

Am I really cute???
Yup cvs ruined ramnath character which I personally didn't like but it's not in our hand
di i really want to say something to u
shraman room rennovat kara do bcz jb again ye matter uthega case k time than she will again scared from their own room . and vese bhi abhi shrman h nhi to rennovation m koi problem bhi nhi hogi.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazypiya




Dolll
Ab tujhe kya bolun bol..
Muaaah muaaah
Achha ab kitni seedhe ban rahi hai.. Kal raat ko meri jaan khaa li thi yune update ke liye

Are shravan sumo was ek duje ke vaaste kaise jeeyag ek duje ke bina

N thank uu for liking the song re..
Tujhe to pata hi hai i love songs

Ab packing romance to tera hi idea tha
Thik thak huya???
Friday se pehle start nahi karne wali huun


Thik thak nahi...bohot acha hua..ekdum awesome...akhir apne jo likha tha...and Friday haha ...nice joke...dekhte h..hum chodenge apko?? Really do u feel that??🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Namiksfan



Thik thak nahi...bohot acha hua..ekdum awesome...akhir apne jo likha tha...and Friday haha ...nice joke...dekhte h..hum chodenge apko?? Really do u feel that??🤣




Bhaagooo
Friday tak muuh mat kholna ..
Warna bhaag jayungi...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazypiya




Bhaagooo
Friday tak muuh mat kholna ..
Warna bhaag jayungi...


Ap bhaag k kaha jaoge...vapis to yahi aoge ...kahi nahi jane denge ...parso se likhna start karo ok? Kal ki chutti😆😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliant update...Sad but true people like Mrs.verma exist in our society..
Shraman's scene was amazing as always
Also congrats as hum Tum is going to complete 150 pages that means a new thread..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Brilliant update...Sad but true people like Mrs.verma exist in our society..

Shraman's scene was amazing as always
Also congrats as hum Tum is going to complete 150 pages that means a new thread..
Waiting for next update..



Thank uu dear for liking it
Is it new thread .. But i dont know how to do it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hiii di!
Its really really nice.
Even after u gave us such a long update am nt getting enough of it.
It was so realistic & the way ramnath N the whaole family cared for sumo is so emotional.
And what type of husband shravan is😡 , don't he have any minus point... he is just perfect!
I REALLY WANT SUCH A CARING husband LIKE HIM😳
Its really a worth waiting di, thnks for the PM di.
luv u di a big bear hug to u
I hope u remember me (I have commented on wattpad earlier)

I can understand u r very busy ... bt I just request u to try to update twice a week at least.
Don't take me wrong di... Just a request, am really becoming impatient bcz of ur each updates. 😊

~priyanka.

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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing...
beautifully penned...
ShraMan...

Even after a long update am not getting enough of it.
thanx for PM 😊
loved it...
eagerly waiting for next update...
thank you so much for the wonderful write up...

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