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@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#861

Originally posted by: imshveta

Well I think it would be a totally different kind of a thing if a medieval story is written. I don't suppose we have had any Shraman story like that
Wouldn't that be awesome

That would, really. 😊

Shraman 18th century romance. 🤢 I can even see the from where it can begin...

Shravan the handsome lord in breeches,

Sumo the fiery lady in gown.🤢🤢

❤️

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imshveta

@imshveta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#862

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

That would, really.😊
Shraman 18th century romance.🤢I can even see the from where it can begin...

Shravan the handsome lord in breeches,
Sumo the fiery lady in gown.🤢🤢
❤️

Now you really really have to write it. I am ready for my lord (not the courtroom one but the ballroom one)and my lady.
Utterly romantic
😉

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: imshveta

Now you really really have to write it. I am ready for my lord (not the courtroom one but the ballroom one)and my lady.
Utterly romantic
😉

After Bitter Sweet ends. 😉

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imshveta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

After Bitter Sweet ends.😉

😭 not looking forward to this FF ending. It has been a very bitter sweet FF. And I can't tell how many times I have come back to read its different parts...the sad ones, guilty ones as much as the romantic ones. So not looking forward to not getting its updates but would look forward to the new Story for sure ⭐️

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#865

*I claim all copyrights of this work. Do not plagiarize this story, no part / scene / dialogue of it may be copied, reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means without my (Clara Ricks's) written permission. Plagiarizing my works will be taken as an offence and will be dealt with properly, and know that it is punishable by the forums and law. If you find anyone copying my works, please do let me know.*

This chapter is dedicated to - imshveta 🤗

Chapter 49

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Looks perfect, right? Just wait for the next chapter. 😈

Please let me know of your thoughts, about what you liked the most in this chapter - your fav part / scene / dialogue. Like and Comment, that will make me so incredibly happy. 🤗

Thanks to all those lovely people who've been liking and commenting, and have been patiently waiting for my delayed updts almost in regular basis. (Imagine puppy face)

By the way, how many of you're going to be on the upcoming KKP forum (someone's new show)? I'm toh very excited about it, let's see how it turns out.

Take care till later.😃

Lots of love, ❤️

tight hugs,🤗

Lara.

P.S. As usual, PMs will be sent to those who've liked and commented on the last chapter.

P.S.2. I will be editing and putting up this story on wattpad after in ends on indiaforums. Then, I will perhaps write additional scenes and bonus chapters too. So, make sure you're following me there as well, that is if you want to stay in touch with Bitter Sweet Symphony and reread and want to read a little bit more of it. (This arrangement is to protect my story from being stolen) Tada!

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#866

RES!

What a time to be online!!

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Lara 🤗

Your image in my mind just keeps getting better, for if someone is capable of producing such jewels each update, the person rocks!

The story has been with us a while and I still feel as excited as I used to. You keep raising the bar so high

Let's take it from the top, you gave us the blood moon and now the jeweled sun!

The title had me tripping❤️

Shravan may be the incorrigible bull, but he's the hottest and sassiest at it!

I love his word play, Suman took our street smart lawyer a little less than his stride. I'm loving it.

I like how you always stick true to their character.

OMG! Pasta🤣

Akhri pasta just became fluff ball pasta and I'm not sure how to react but much like your Shravan, I'm grateful it wasn't Biryani or Vindaloo😆

I guess I'd get used to cutesy pasta!

Shravan and his surprises 🥳

I love the mock anger! They presentation of the dialogue gives me an exact idea of how Namik would voice these, and the timber makes me 🤪

Seducing his way out of a query? Heck he can seduce his way through life, that heart thief!

I learned a new way of starting the car. Mental note to self, keep a belan in the car, for who knows when it would come in handy 😎

I thought the car would breakdown based on the state of the road😆

But Nakhreeli made it there...

You just gave the term, "Jungel mai Mangal" a whole new dimension! I was dazed. That was hot! ☺️ Utter Gutter? Pretty much! I expect a follow up on that😉

Consider it a request or otherwise, please do follow up on this...

The whole run up the hill and everything that followed, beyond expectations Lara 👏

I'm in love with the idea of love... I hope for a love like their's.. *SIGH*

Marry me again? Hell yeh! I married him mentally already❤️

I can't wait to see what follows!

Don't keep us waiting too long hon!

Need I say this one was a beauty?

Cheers!

Zoya

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imshveta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#867

Such a fluff sweet, romantic chapter dedicated to me Thanks would be a small word ❤️ 🤗 it's a first for me
I am honored and deeply touched. Anything I say right now won't justify how I am feeling.

Coming to the chapter, it was super cute, loved white Pasta...Awww Suman is treating that fluff ball like her baby. Such a right timing to have another baby..I can imagine a perfect family picture. Shraman and their two little ones... But when is a certain thick headed girl going to.understand that she is got two and not just one baby to take care of.
Dabboo... That one was totally hilarious... Monkey taking care of a dog

Hayye...Tiwaris are blessed to have such Sanskari damaads who make full use of the
"portal to midnight rendezvous of daring, romantic hearts" and keeping the daughters of their house utterly happy.

What are you going to do in the next chapter? Err... I am not sure I like that devil head... I think you are introducing some blast from the past for them. But I got to say I am excited too. So bring it on 😈

Lots and lots of love. You made my day

Shveta

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#868

Lara... I mean... Oh my gosh.

this is the reason this guy is my favourite in the whole wide world right now. Lara's Shravan!! 😃❤️

and you are pure genius or a work of art by god himself the way you weave words with ease, with finesse and draw beautiful scenes on papers. hats off to you.

If the crimson moon was beautiful this jeweled sun is beyond that. and see beyond my range of words here.

Loved every bit of it 49 parts and not one has a dull moment. what do you eat !!

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#869

You write like a dream! !

❤️

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#870

Oh girl..you wont let me enjoy this moment peacefully?? What new bomb you have kept in next chapter?? And please..please..dont make us wait again for ages!! And i dont want this story to end ever!!!!

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