FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 70

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update

Sure, suman going away from sharavan without informing him will raise hell. He has reach to a point in his life where he is extremely possessive of her and wants her with him at any cost even if she is need the place. This will be a new revelation for suman and they will both learn the lesson to never go to bed without sorting problems.
Can't wait to read more.


It'll clearly take some time for this ordeal to be over, or at least another talk between them.
Let's see...
Thanks.❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

Happy Holi to you too Lara !!
That was one helluva chapter...Shravan almost betrayed her...but thankfully didn't ...such a relief..
Suman may need distance from Shravan to sort out and calm d storm in her mind...but plz let this storm not ruin their newfound love...let Shravan realise that anger and vengeance is not d best way to punish someone, especially one not proven guilty...only presumed guilty...
u r such a awesome writer...u will give the best solution to their problems...
eagerly waiting for d next chapter

rgds
Anuradha


Thank you so much for having faith in me, Anuradha! 🤗
Love u.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Edkvforever

Nice update

Happy Holi lara


Thanks!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

Okay. I know I have not unresd the last one and I have not commented for a while, but I have read each chapter, I am really sorry for that. Really sorry. I will Unres it. I haven't been commenting due this, but this chapter forced me to comment in spite of my embarrassment 😳


I Loved this chapter Lara!! Every single bit of it!!!
The way you showed her asking him about it, was brilliant!!! His reaction and hers consequently was beautifully written!! The pain, the anguish was all👏

Hats off for such brilliance and for maintaining it through and through!!

Much love,
Sara

P.S: Probably my longest comment so far on this story😳


Oh dear, thank you so much for commenting, Sara. 🤗
And I'm sooo glad to know how much you liked reading this chap.
Love you! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Shravan went with another woman on their wedding day & he wanted to keep mistress for him only to hurt Sumo because then he hated her, so much hatred was there in his heart so he went that extent.. 😡 Now Sumo left the house without informing him but she will return once she is felt good but what about Shravan he doesn't know she left him but she will come back, for him she left him again when he needed her most what if he again starts hating her, again he will become same Shravan one he was before.. 😭 what Sumo will do after she come back if she find him same like before.. 😲 Shraman's life again devastated, will be they together again.. 😭 I m just worried for them.. 😭 I can't imagine how Shravan will react now after he woke up when he won't find Sumo @ home.. 😭 plz God save my week heart it won't break.. 😭 🤢

Emotional chap & Unexpected twists.. 😕

Thanks for PM

Vinu


Thanks a lot, Vinu! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Anxiousness at its speak! ! Each of these 45 chaps made me feel curious,,nervous,,excited...but this one was exceptional! !
Read it with a bated breath! !

Infidelity n Shravan it's so uncomfortable to think of these two words together!
'I couldn't'...brought me back to life !!
Shravan will go beserk! Not finding Sumo around!

Sumo,,I really feel for,,just when things started getting normal n she was finally at home,,this happened! The idea of putting Homely feeling into the house went on a pause! !
I hope she is back soon!

Happy Holi to u too!🥳



Aw, dear, thank you so much! 🤗

Yes, I know, at this stage of the story - Shravan and infedility - those two words are hard to imagine in one sentence. 😕
And blame me for making just that happen. 😈
At least, he returned before completing the "mu kala"🐷 process. That's the good in all the bad, right? 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG...what an update...truly Love has d power to make or break a person...this chapter is a painfully beautiful example of d same...u really can't stay away from someone u love...atleast not mentally n emotionally...

I loved this chapter... 👏 ...poor Shravan n Suman 😭 ...I feel sooo bad for them...but then they need to learn to trust each other unconditionally n also to keep their anger in check...

u always leave me asking for more...n sooner...plz update d next part sooonnn..

rgds

Anuradha
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow
poor sumo
hope she can forgive shravan
amazing update
absolutely brilliant
continue soon


Thanks, sweetness! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

This is exactly why you are the best.

This if it happens with anyone would be exactly realistically this way... 👏

how to ask your spouse, the love of your life a question so sensitive. Did you cheat on me?

No hunny, but since you decided to lose trust in me by even coming up with this question, now I have full rights to go away or stay upset.

The other way round its like getting caught off guard like.

What if she doesn't ask the next question? What if she assumes? thankfully she din't assume. Sane person sumo is here.

Shravan's predicament, the entire dialogue between them with each expression is so beautifully penned. Yes you take sadistic pleasure in drawing out pain and then spreading it beautifully over your blank canvass for the viewer to stay enthralled and feel his insides churning at the same time.

Amazing Clara. Amazing.




That's so sweet of you to say such lovely things, dear! 😳 am blushing*
I hope you'll enjoy chapter 46 as well.
Take care.
Love you!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priety.priti

oh thank god he didnt cheated her 😃

but she left him to come back but without telling him thats gonna create a new drama for sure

it was too good\

waiting for the new update eagerly for how he will react when he will woke up?😕


Thanks a lot!😳

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