FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 72

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

Beautiful ShraMan Hug ❤️...
Naughty Shravan and his reply 😉..
Chachi's word keep hunting sumo..
So she finally able to ask Shravan the Question.. You very beautifully expressed their situation after Shravan saying the truth to sumo..
She is devastated that Shravan went to another women in their wedding Night because of his hater towards her..
Though Shravan didn't cross his line but it will take time for sumo to forgive Shravan..
Sumo is right in thinking Shravan might do the same mistake in future if something bad happens between them.. So to trust him again he needs to prove to her that he won't make the mistakes again..
It was not a goodbye but a sure promise to soon return
Sumo will certainly return but for time being they need little space..
Ab Shravan ko bahut papad belne hoge sumo ko manane ke liye 😉
Thanks for pm


Love
Shrujani


Hey, Shrujani! 🤗
Belneka pata nahi but
filhal toh woh khud papad banke uski doorstep pe pada hai. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Joyness

Wow Lara terific update...sumo turmoil alongwith shravan's is so realistically put..waiting for the next..she should forgive shravan and come back to him fast


Thanks a ton, dear! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonai_02

It's fantabulous dear.

You never fail to impress me with ur superb writing skills.
It takes my breath away.
I'm happy that Shravan didn't cheat on Sumo. But anyways Sumo misunderstood him...she really felt bad about the fact 😭
I just hope Suman returns soon.
Update soon.
Love ya


Thank you so much! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

I Feel sad for sumo hope she will come out of this

thank u


Thanks, dear!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

That was a very very emotional one ..

Sumo did try to trust him,she mentioned it all to him as a joke but his guilt & conscience gave away .. Sometimes truth does bring lots of trouble ..

That whole unfolding of emotions during confession & acceptance was really tearful .. Both had their own set of pain - one was overpowered by guilt & other was filled with pain of betrayal & insecurities;for its legitimate what could happen once can happen again,to the point where the thin line of wisdom between right & wrong may get subdued & won't be possible to return back .. As a woman there's bound to be a point where fear of rejection does seep in .. She's in the shoes of Khurana's wife now ..

Shravan had a reason to be so vile but now that he reflects back to his deeds,its only guilt to see his love of life in so much pain .. Irony when he wanted it to happen,it didn't & while they were all good;it just resurfaces .. Destiny is bitter ..

True that she can't punish him for his past when she wasn't even a part of his life but at the same time she needs to make peace with the new truth ..
Space may bring peace or turmoil in their life ; only time will tell ..

They would have to again work from ground zero to build up trust in their relation ..

Preekar found peace & gave Shraman pain.. indeed kamini suceeded ..

Let's see Shravan's predicament after knowing Sumo left ..
Update soon ..


Spot on observation.
Truly, they've to make their foundation strong now, and let's hope this
distance will help them with that.

Thanks a lot for the lovely comment, dear!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: violetgirl

Omg that Kamini is one hell of a women..her claws always out..she i sensible enough not to take rash decisions and pretty and Pushkar and doing good..shran need to move past and make amends..how are you Lara?a very emotional and heartening update:))cheers d


I'm fine, dear, thanks! 😳
How r u?

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Posted: 8 years ago
Mind blowing update !! your way of writing makes me feel, that am living with them. Mostly it was suman's perspective and is very well portrayed. Distance is very much needed to think before we act. By this, we don't end up hurting someone the least.
I was very very eager to know shravan's response. It was so intense. A bone chilling scream...😲 that would be after he saw sumo missing and may be after reading her message. How mad he must be. He must be cursing himself and his fate. Isolation...Oh God, Poor lambu seriously.

Kamini is a cheapo. She wanted to praise Carol just to tease suman. If she really wanted to do it to someone then it should be her son or Preethi. What even this Poor suman did to her.

Thanks to Ramnath, that he shut her mouth. I was afraid, when sumo was degrading herself by comparing carol.

I also hope that Carol won't be wedding planner anymore😆.

But Shravan burst out what sumo was trying to hide from her family. Now no one is going to leave the matter. Can't wait to know what happens next.

Thanks for a beautiful update as usual. was going restless, without getting this week's dose😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

RES

Would you look at that
I'm late and how!

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Hey ya Lara!

Firstly, apologies, I'm terribly late!
Nonetheless I'm here now and for updating take 🤗

Secondly, you say I rock at cliff hangers?
Do you have a mirror around you? Please go and have a look at your reflection.
You've been handing out cliffhangers with more intensity than Nanu handed out burns!
I dread reading the ends of your updates cause I know, you'll be leaving us, hopes all high and I'll be waiting like a kid for the next.



Coming to the update, I love how ShraMan are when they get home from a long day at work. Immediately basking in each other cause, "Hey, I missed you!" Adorable...

Tub of ice-cream, you and me. I just love your little nuances of day to day life which exude love. It's a very simple scene but so poignant.

He always knows something is off. As does she. I hurt with them.
Can take a moment of swag for self, cause I guessed it right 😆
Shravan did go to that woman but didn't betray Suman. In a way at least.
I am proud of him! Even in his intense hate, he couldn't get himself to cross the line.

But he went and that's enough for the wedge to make home.
Ouch is all I'll say.
Suman's pain and disbelief were written very well👏
Shravan's guilt and fear made me shudder 💔

It was a hard hitting scene that one. I will be honest, I did shed a tear or two.

He lifted her and they snuggled and slept. No matter the wedge, they will find a way back to each other, such is their love!

She saw the pain even as he slept. She left! Oh no! I see red...
I get that she needed time off, that's okay. It's understandable.
But she didn't tell him!!!
He will go ballistic when he finds out she left, cause his first instinct will be to assume she left him..

All in all a fab update buddy!
And as usual I can't wait for the next, like literally can't!




Heyaaa, Zoya!
At last you remembered to give a visit to the old bauji 😆

Err... mirror? 😕 I think I'll skip that.
I already know what I'll see there. 🤢😆

And of course, you were spot on about your guess. 👏👏⭐️ You know Shravan too well. 😃

Hmmm... about you being proud of him, well, the last chapter at the same time depicted the depth of his love and hatred both. I must confess - that was a difficult thing to write down. 😳 And I'm so elated that you liked it.

Thanks, and tightest hugs. ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mogu_togu

this update tore heart into pieces... can feel the pain of suman... and am so scared to feel pain of sharavan when he does not find her in the morning...


Thanks!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyparrot

Nice update!

Can understand the pain of sumo, so happy that shravan did not cheat on sumo!
Sumo left him, why? I know she needs peace but how will shravan react if he knows it! Shravan will break down😭
Update soon!
Thanks for the PM


Thanks, dear!😳
The next chap is up, I hope you like it too.

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