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violetgirl

@violetgirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#341

Lara..I'll be back here tomorrow with my comment..hey I am back,sorry for the delay,I loved every. It of this chapter,the bribing with masalaa walk had me in splits,sumos bargaining skills man ,amazing,suckers for food!!lol!the whole roof top romance was amazing as well,he never forgets does he!blood moon description was magical..!amaIng update..Violetgirl

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javeria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#342

Awesome update

The place and occasion set for their first data was lovely.

Can't wait to read more

Thanks for the pm.

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bworm

@bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#343

That was wonderful. Blood moon date was fantastic. Now I wanna have a date like that.

Haha...masala wala kidnapper. ..that was epic sumo.

Just wish the kidnapping works out as planned...or Shravan is going to blow his gasket.

Waiting for the next part.

Please update soon.

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#344

Unres

Lara!!!!!

Firstly, take 🤗

You are a magician bro...!!

You took my idea Thank you so very much!

I have to say I absolutely loved the execution 👏

The whole set up, Shravan is indeed thorough in his advances

I can list out each detail I loved but then I'd end up writing the whole update😆

Let's just leave it at "I tip my hat to you" for that scene, very well written😛

Coming to her masala wala gang, I laughed like a fool at that bit🤣

They literally accepted food as payment! Damn I love this gang...

I hope this bit stays lighter on note, execution is spot on and no one gets hurt... I love surprises but not the kind where the leads may be in the line of fire, feeble heart and all😉

She literally pulled of a "I'll howl your brother's name" just to get even 😈

I love this side of her!

Poor Shravan, he was in dreams of another hickey😳

I absolutely adore how your Shravan is unabashedly truthful, speaks his heart. And how! The entire ripping my heart and limbs part ☺️ No I'm not being sadistic, its just the fact that he's aching so bad is a direct indication of how pitlessly in love with he is! I love it!

Now for your questions,

I hope the rescuing bit works fine, minus Khurana or his men making an appearance... Please *That's my puppy eyes cute smile request face*

About Shravan's reaction, no matter which way the execution goes, he will be a wild beast. The mere mention of Khurana's name with Suman is enough to send him raging to hell itself.

His plans for the "Big night", Suman will have plans of her own😆 and whether his plans see the light of day or not, the night itself will be magical, I trust you with that!

All in all brilliant stuff here Lara!

Love and Admiration,

Zoya😛

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#345

absolutely brilliant

totally loved it

especially the moon date

so romantic

continue soon

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#346

Thanks for PM LARA 😃

First Date...red moon just wow...and SHRAMAN moments loved so much 👏

But sumo will be sumo why she is hiding things from Shravan 😔...james bond sumo

PLZ update soon

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

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Posted: 8 years ago

#347

Hi Lara,
Another amazing update from you. Very well written and beautifully described the blood moon. I have a feeling that these masala walas might mess it up. And with Sumo not confiding in Shravan, who is unaware of these developments and diligently planning their wedding night, I don't know what the outcome will be. Hopefully Shravan understands her. Waiting for the next update already.

Lubna.

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Faith28

@Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#348

Superb!! Just loved the moon gazing...u described it beautifully...❤️ And their cosy romance😳😉 Glad to see suman in sumo wrestler mode,but worried kahi ye masale wale kuch lafda na kar de😕 Dont want her to go through that same khurrana chapter again Why do i feel the rescue mission n shravans wedding night surprise are gonna clash?!🥱 Whatever , i just hope sumo gives some inkling to shravan abt her mission...and they rescue mrs khurannas brother😊 im so loving this Shravan...all gooey gooey ☺️❤️ Cant wait for the next update😊

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#349

awesome...
beautifully penned...
loved it...
Shraman...
thanx for PM...😊

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#350

Res
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Unres
OMG!!OMG!!
U had dedicated this chappii to me Lara...Aww 😳 ...It means a lot to me dear !! So thank u soo much!!
<🤗>< 🤗>< 🤗 >
Coming to the update...
What an amazing update dear!! 👏
Detective sumo...interesting!!
So Shravan took her to d tallest building of d city...
"More adoring is when we women peel off that skin of confidence and reveal the real man with fears and flaws underneath"...Well said !!
I just loved shravan's answer to it..."And you've already succeded in doing so"...
I loved to see shravan revealing his true feeling infront of sumo!!
THE BLOOD MOON!!
What a surprise Mr. Malhotra!!
"I can not forget a thing about you ,somo, I've tried and failed and figured i'll be easier forgetting myself in stead"...Oh My Shravan is killing with his words!!
" Your nerd"...Yes sumo's nerd!!
How beautifully you've described their loving moments here dear!! 👏
Sumo is indeed a strong girl who emerged as a winner from her dark past!!
N now my personal favourite part(although whole update is 👏 ) ..." But I want your darkness as well. Sumo , I want all of you. I want all the good and the bad and the worst of you"...And shravan said it all!! 👏
Oh God!! Sumo n her gangster activities!! 😆
I soo love shravan's jealous n possessive side!! 😳
When your "Right time" will come Mr. Malhotra!!
Shravan is also tormented by the wait to make sumo his...U hav described Shravan's feelings very well dear!!
All in all it was mind blowing update dear!! 👏
Uff!! I haven't written this long before ever!!
Plz update sooonish dear...eagerly waiting!!
Loads Of Love 🤗
Nik

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