FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 33

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Hey, thanks! 😳

Yes, it's really been after ages - his POV. I personally prefer storing up his thoughts and save it all for the most crucial moments.

I'm extremely glad that you liked it. ❤️

Ah ha... your fav bit is the MY SUMO scene. 😉 Then just wait a while, this possessiveness is so going to increase only with time.

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

This was awesome . ..loved it

Thank u for the pm

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

I am looking forward to that!

P.S I have seen your res on my post, am looking forward to the full comment :):)

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

I'm going to unres that tomorrow, have lots to say and before that read the beautiful story again.😃

Tonight, going to updt Bitter Sweet... in an hour.😉

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

I Loved this chapter Lara! It was so beautifully written!

I love how you took it forward from the last chapter! I am excited to read about the whole courting thing. But I am kind of dreading the rest because of all the tension it may cause between ShraMan. Take note of the word may, so I hope they don't. Hehe.

Really sorry for the late reply. I was rereading the second and third thread. Thanks for the PM.

P.S Please more chapters with Shravan's POV.

P.P.S I am sure Sumo loves chocolates:D (In regards to ideas for the courting)

Originally posted by: arshuaar

awesome...
thank you for PM 😊
ShraMan...courtship...

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Lara,

Thanks for making my day. I was just excited with your pm that you updated a new chapter, and was pleasantly surprised that you dedicated it to me. Thanks again. Coming to the chapter, I was expecting something more for sure, but the courtship was the logical way to go. Sumo does deserve more. I'm sure if the show was still on, they would have followed the same story line. After all your story had Shravan force court marriage long before that happened in the show. I feel you are very calm as a writer, and that shows in your writing which is commendable.

This was a beautiful chapter. Shravan wants to take it slow and win her heart first even though it was so hard for him to restrain. 😉 That was depicted really well. It would be definitely interesting to see how and well the courtship goes on. I would suggest long drive and beach walk would impress Sumo and anything, even messages during the day or just a chat after dinner can go a long way.

With Sakshi's phone call it seems it will be quite adventurous ride ahead. Really hope Sumo let Shravan know about it.

Good luck Lara and I really hope you update soon. 👏

Lubna.

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing update

totally loved it

continue soon

superb

Originally posted by: Faith28

Awesome update lara👏 Was hoping for a long update..but koi nai...the official courtship has begun😃 And shravan the charmer is gonna use all the tricks from his trunk😆 (Evn tho our sumo is already floored by the horror /romantic breakfast😳) yaar ye sakshi inni jaldi kyu prakat hui...abhi abhi romance shuru hua tha😲 Im sure sumo wrestler shravan ko kuch nai bataegi🥱 akeli bhidegi jhaansi ki rani😕Looking forward for preekar track too...but mooostly rooting for ShraMan courtship(obviously!)😃

Originally posted by: krutish22

Amazing update

Waiting for shraman next journey

And peekar and Ramanath parts

Thanks for PM