FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 32

Originally posted by: anum20jamali

Lara, my darling, 1st of all so many hugs to u for d fast update, it was such an amazing surprise. 🤗 U made my day.

Coming to d update, I wanna shout "dey kissed, dey kissed" Haha, I m such a Besharam, lol 😆

Shraman did not say d 3 words but dis was even better. It was so intense and emotional, obviously dey know dat dey love each other, Shravan knows Sumo loves him and vice versa. It is so evident, words ain't even needed.

It was so so beautiful, Nanu revealing evrythin, realization dawning on Shravan, Sumo is also guilty for hurting him but he consoles her, I just can't get over it I could imagine each n every thing. Shravan says he can't stop and Sumo says then don't stop She's giving him permission, she wants him too, she loves him so damn much. 😳

And our lover boy, wat to say about him 😳 He is already giving her so much of love, now dat he knows about her feelings too, he's goin to shower her wid all d love dat he has kept hidden within himself for so long I m lookin forward to read dat. Reading ur story makes me wish dat we could see all dis, I wanted to see dis on d show, I desperately want a season 2 now wid dese amazing scenes dat u write.

U r amazing, u r awesome, keep writing and plz don't keep me waiting for long, u know u stopped at a very wrong point 😉

Loads and loads of love sweetheart,

Anum ❤️

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

That was a lovely update Lara!!

It was AMAZING reading Shravan's POV after ages!!! His thoughts, His feelings and desires, his emotions, his guilt everything was so well-written!! I Loved every bit of it!!!

My favourite parts would be: MY Sumo!! (Haha I loved how possessive he became!) And the last scene!! So much happened in it!! Beautiful!!!

Thanks for the PM!! Please update soon.

Originally posted by: Castile2

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It has been already established before that whatever Shravan feels, its always in extreme.

He never does coy. He never underplays his emotions.

I thought his feelings here ran deep. Never realized the depth of them, though.

It is perfectly normal to get attracted to a woman and harbor intimate feelings for her. Justified even, when the woman happens to be your childhood love and your wife.

What is astounding here is Shravan's self-control! Not for himself but for her.

Her safety. Her mental well-being.

Shravan acknowledges all this and is ready to live in (sexual) frustration rather than scaring and scarring her for life with his lust.

For a man, this is a humongous task. A nearly impossible feat.

But he is ready to endure all this. Just for her.

Suman

A woman tried and tested by destiny.

Weathering the trials and tribunals of wicked life all by herself.

Broken and left by her dearest ones. First her parents. Then her Shravan.

But she gathered herself and stood again. But barely so.
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These two put together are the epitome of damaged imperfections.

But what others fail to see is that, they are each others only home.

Their only respite from the world with which they are constantly at a battle.

Respite from their battles within and among themselves.

I just wish to see them supporting, healing and salvaging each other from their demons.

Again a heart touching piece from you. May many more such come our way.

Regards
Cas

P.S. Just loved your Pushkar ❤️. Shravan's little wife is loved by his brother after all. So get used to it!

Originally posted by: shalz_123

A message popped up in my gmail. chapter 33- Shravan"s POV, i was super happy. I clicked on the link and Viola, what do I see? Finally mera Number aaa gaya. I get a dedication...

i am not a person who can express myself in long comments. Honestly i am at a loss of words. First from the chapter, second from the dedication. Thank you, thank you so much. Thank you for remembering.

The entire chapter, d ShraMan conversation, the pushku conversation , everything. ...finally they open their hearts.. I wish they confess too. R they going too? Or u are going to keep it open ended so that u can bring in insecurity card later on..

I can't wait to read more...

Love

Shal

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Wow...most awaited shravan's POV👏...Poor boy, now all his struggles have come out. its one amazing chapter. he understood sumo even better and accepted his feelings as well...hope there is major development in their relationship from now on...

thanks for the pm...waiting eagerly for the next one.

P.S...am die heart fan for your writing..that I go dumb when it comes to find words to appreciate...I am just loving this writing...bas😆

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Honestly, I find myself incompetent to analyse what you write!!

Nevertheless, would like to say, your writing skill leave me astonished!!

#Wonderstruck!

Originally posted by: BhataktiAtma.

Nanu is love thank you so much Nanu for telling Shravan about Sumo's sufferings and everything that made him understand her better as person and reasons for being one she was in childhood and she is today and Pushky my baby 🤣 that part was so hilarious god 🤣 following rest with Shraman was pure love <3

Originally posted by: Nik03

Hlo lara...am newbie so kinda late in commenting 😊
I read all parts n I loveeed them...Amazing storyline n u have penned shraman's emotional turmoil so beautifully 👏
I must say ur writing style is like professionals 😊
Waiting for ur update...Plz update soon...😊
Love
Nik