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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
The Phone Call
In the evening, Sumo drops off Shiv at Malhotra house and goes back home. Shravan and Shiv play tennis on the Playstation, then they have dinner with the family. Shiv is sleepy so Shravan takes him upstairs to his room and then reads to him from a tintin comic book. Shiv falls asleep so Shravan calls Sumo and tells her that he will drop Shiv in the morning for school, Sumo agrees.
The next morning Shravan drives Shiv to Sumo's house. Shiv has a basketball match so he asks both his parents to come to his school to watch the game. Both of them agree. The Aroras live nearby so Shreya is also there to take the school bus. The school bus arrives, Dr. Arora, Shravan and Sumo say bye to the kids. Dr. Arora takes their leave. Sumo says to Shravan - Tum khud drive karke kyun aaye, abhi abhi discharge hue ho, driver ko saath nahi la sakte the. Chalo main tumhe ghar drop kardun
Shravan - koi zaroorat nahi hai meri chinta karne ki, main chala jaunga.
Sumo - haan main kyun pareshan ho rahi hun, tumhari chinta karne ke liye hain na tumhari girlfriends
Shravan(angrily) - Sumo! Goes and sits in the car and drives away. Both of them are restless so they get busy in their work to forget their fight. In the evening, Sumo remembers that she had to go to the match, She calls Shravan to ask if he went, he says that he was so busy that he could not go. Sumo says that Shiv must be sulking both of them decide to meet at Sumo's house and take Shiv out.
Shravan arrives at Sumo's house and is parking his Mercedes in the driveway, Sumo also arrives and in a hurry to park hits Shravan's car. Shravan gets out - Pagal ladki, kab gaadi park karna seekhogi.
Sumo - haan haan pata hai tumhare hisaab se mere paas licence nahi hona chahiye, chinta mat karo main repair ke paise de dungi.
Shravan - badi aayi repair ke paise dene wali, pehle theek se gaadi chalana seekho.
Sumo - mujhe gaadi chalani aati hai Shravan
Shravan - Nahi aati, main kal se driver ko bhej dunga aur haan ab bahut zid ho gayi kal se tum mere saath driving ki practice karogi, waise bhi iss week mujhe toh office jaana nahi hai.
Sumo - nahi koi zaroorat nahi hai aur tumne ye week rest karne ke liye off liya tha mujhe driving sikhane ke liye.
Shravan guesses that she will not stop arguing so he comes closer and kisses her. She tries to break the kiss at first and Shravan senses that, he says to her - bas Sumo kitna ladti ho. He continues the kiss and she kisses him back.
After a while she breaks the kiss and says that they should go inside and see how Shiv is doing.
They go inside, Shiv is in his bedroom sulking in the corner. Both of them go to him and say sorry. He stays angry and does not respond. Shravan picks him up and says - mumma and I are going to the fun fair, I think we will take Shreya along since you will not go with us.
Shiv says - no no papa main jaaunga
Shravan - toh chalo!
Shiv is very happy. The trio leave for the fun fair.
They go on several rides together. Then Shiv says he wants to on the dashing cars. Sumo says she is tired so Shravan and Shiv go on the ride. Shravan and Shiv are enjoying the ride while Sumo is clicking their pictures from Shravan's phone.
His phone rings, Sumo picks it up and says hello. It's Trisha on the other side. She asks if she can speak to Shravan.
Sumo says curtly - Shravan is busy with our son, you can call him later.
Trisha - no no I will be on the flight. Please inform him that I will arrive tomorrow morning at 5 am.
Sumo is seething with anger as soon as they get down from the ride she picks Shiv up, returns Shravan's phone and marches out of the fun fair.
Shravan follows her asking kya hua.
She does not respond, takes a taxi and heads back.

Next update - what will Shravan do now?

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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Guess, vamp trisha is also at the fair, should be calling shravan's no knowing that sumo is carrying the phone. 😡😡 Sumo madam won't open her mouth...shravan should soon find out the truth soon and teach lesson to trisha😡
Nice update. Loved their cute fight over parking the car😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Sumo reaches home. She goes upstairs and is surprised to see a brand new swing in the balcony. On the swing there is a bouquet of tulips with a note - Mrs Malhotra will you come to our favorite coffee shop tomorrow evening at 6 for a date? Love Yours, Mr. Malhotra.
Sumo sits on the swing and starts crying. Shiv - wow! swing.. Kya hua mumma aap kyu ro rahi ho. Sumo - kuch nahi beta, she picks him up in her lap and Shiv goes to sleep in her arms. Sumo cries in silence.
Flashback - Shraman's room - Shravan is looking for something and has messed up the entire room.
Sumo enters - Offo, ye tumne room ka kya haal bana diya, abhi thodi der pehle hi maine saaf kiya tha.
Shravan - meri Blue file nahi mil rahi, desk par rakh ke gaya tha, tumhe bhi na safai karne ka itna shauk hai.
Sumo - Thoda kachara kam failaoge toh milegi na, wo dekho sofa par tumhari t shirt ke neeche...
Sumo storms off angrily and goes to the garden and sits on the swing which Shravan had bought for her after Shiv was born..she is mumbling angrily - khadoos kahin ka, ek toh poora room phaila diya upar se mujhpe hi chilla raha tha. Shravan comes to the garden and slowly starts rocking the swing. He then comes and sits next to her and hugs her tightly and says sorry. Sumo resists at first but Shravan does not let her go. She smiles and hugs him back.
Back to present - She wipes her tears and takes Shiv to the bedroom and lies down on the bed. She texts Shravan - main nahi aaungi
Shravan replies - main jaanta hun main bulaunga toh tum zarur aaogi.
Sumo replies - nahi aaungi and goes to sleep
Shravan - mujhe pata hai ki aaogi.
Next morning - Sumo and Shiv are having breakfast, Sumo is flipping through the TV channels. An ad is playing on the TV.Today on Newshour, a panel of experts will be commenting on the need for a new legislation on Corporate fraud. We will have with us the minister for Law and Justice, Mr Narayan, SEBI chief Mrs. Murthy and famous lawyer Mr. Shravan Malhotra who is currently litigating against Encon in the biggest corporate scam ever. Shiv remarks - mumma look papa is on tv
Sumo - Haan beta your papa is a very good lawyer so everyone wants to hear his views. The ad continues And we will also have with us Ms. Trisha Agrawal, world renowned corporate lawyer Partner at Agrawal & Pearson..
Sumo gets irritated and changes the channel, the same ad is playing. She shuts off the TV in frustration and goes outside with Shiv to wait for the school bus. The bus arrives and Shiv leaves. She also takes her car and leaves for work.
She stops her car at the signal and when she looks out of the window she sees a big hoarding of the Newshour program with a picture of the host and all the guests including Shravan. Two girls are in an adjacent car, they remark, look at that guy, kitna hot hai yaar.
Sumo is extremely pissed - She shouts at them - Aur koi kaam nahi hai kya! Road pe dhyan do gaadi chalate hue, hoarding pe nahi, the signal opens and she drives off.
Next update - how will Sumo react, will she go on the date?

Edited by Newriterondblck - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Nice update
Ek bar shravan ne sumo ko coffee pe bulaya tab sumo nhi gae thi or wo na jana use boht mehnga bhi parha tha (in show) I hope sumo phir se wahi cheez na duhrae 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Wow...Turns more interesting !!
Sumo is getting irritated and kind of jealous. The adjacent car girls are increasing her already high BP.
😆😃

How sweet is shravan, got her another swing😳, This guy is Gem. Seriously sumo has not told shravan, what is her problem with him now. Shravan would be all clueless. So this coffee shop meeting is very important. i like that shravan is stubborn this time. Sumo too should open up.

Trisha is behind him even here. bloody girl.😡

I really hope shravan finds out the truth soon. He should not let go off that trisha so easily. She should pay heavily for destroying their cute world😈. Shravan has major work ahead, bring sumo back to her senses and kick trisha out.

Thanks for the update. am so happy. I loved the twist of scenes you are bringing in. Trisha at the hotel, then a phone call from her and now their newshour work. So there will be a big scene created during this work which might add more to sumo's anger. But it's good if everything ends good.

Shiv and their flashback are like sweet shots in between this high voltage drama.

P.S, how cool it is, to see shravan in the hoarding, Sumo would be dead seeing her hot shot lawyer husband there, if everything was normal. I am in my imagination now😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Amazing. ...flashbacks are really sweet nd shiv is so cute, just like his mum nd dad...nd jealous sumo is not ready to listen to our shravan ..she is not even telling him what she is thinking. ...hope they know trisha's true face soon...Continue soon..pm me if u can
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Nice update
I want to strangle this Trisha now I m just pissed

Sumo one side she is angry and other side she is jealous...!!

Shravan on hoarding. Umm too impressive. But Sumo is just pissed with these girls...

Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
The Date - part 1
Sumo is at PCT.. She is lost in thought. Preet asks what happened, Sumo says nothing much lets check if the food is ready otherwise the delivery will be late. Preeta - Haan theek hai Sumo par hua kya hai aur tum itni thaki hui kyun lag rahi ho. Sumo - arey koi aisi baat nahi chal jaldi khana dekh lete hain.
In the evening, Preeti has come to visit, Sumo and Preeti are drinking tea and chatting. The TV is on and again the ad plays on the TV, Sumo makes a face and says ye log baar baar mujhe tang karne ke liye hi ye ad chala rahe hain. Preeti - Di kya baat hai aap itna irritate kyun ho rahi ho.
Sumo - Irritate na houn toh kya karun, dekho isko kaise hero banke ghum raha hai!
Preeti smiles - acha di waise aap thodi pale nahi dikh rahi aajkal, kya baat hai tabiyat theek nahi hai kya?
Sumo - wo actually mujhe lagta hai ki main pregnant hun.
Preeti - wow di priyanka aur shiv se bhi koi chota humare ghar aayega. Aapne test karaya, Sumo - nahi, abhi toh nahi, par jaungi doctor ke paas.
Preeti - ok di, par aap ye beech beech me zone out kyu ho rahe ho..
Sumo - Soch rahi hun ki Shravan se milne jaoon ya nahi.
Preeti - Di main jaanti hun ki aap jaana chahti ho, itna mat socho chali jao.
Sumo - Acha acha theek hai sochti hun.
Preeti takes her leave and she leaves for Malhotra house with Shiv.
Sumo is still thinking and she finally dresses up in a very beautiful red suit and heads off to the cafe.
However she reaches very late and as she reaches she sees Shravan's Mercedes pull out.
She goes to Malhotra house to pick up Shiv, as she is climbing the stairs Shravan is coming out of their room. Sumo is about to slip and Shravan catches her. Shravan - Dekh kar nahi chal sakti, abhi gir jaati na.
Sumo - Shiv kahaan hai
Shravan - So raha hai, tum itna taiyar ho kar kahaan jaa rahi ho.
Sumo - kisi ke saath date par jaana tha, par usne mera intezaar nahi kiya.
Shravan - Sumo time dekho, coffee shop band karake aaya hun.
Acha chalo tom uncle ke yahaan chalte hain
Sumo - Chalo
Shravan - waise mujhe pata tha tum aaogi
Sumo - haan haan ab jyada chane ke jhaad par mat chadho.. Chaloo
Next update - let us see what happens on their date.. Also Shiv the jasoos has told something to his papa.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Woww !! Shiv is getting a younger one !!😳👏 so shiv would have told that to shravan😉, the jasoos boy. Why sumo is always late, can't she reach somewhat on time. 😡 Poor shravan. Half of his life is spent on waiting.
Fingers crossed, for at least tom uncle date to be a success.

Also, that trisha vamp should not destroy anything now, regarding this new entry into Shraman's life

I like that, here sumo is just speaking her mind to preethi. Also, she accepted to shravan, that she came ready only for him. Our show's sumo would never do that😆

Though a short one, u surprised with an update now. Dil khush kar diya aapne...thank you...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
I wanted that she has a little less ego after marriage. Self respect is important but ego can destroy a relationship. Some changes are there in Shravan as well, a little less anger you see.

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