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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
why is forum quite today? 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Story 7 - The trip - part one
They have a great time together, Shiv falls asleep on the way back. They reach home and Shravan carries Shiv to his bed. He comes back to their bedroom, Sumo is changing.
Shravan comes and hugs her from behind - toh Sumo tum toh badi chalak nikli.. ek do din bhi nahi poore 15 days ke liye ek bechare seedhe saadhe bande ko apni seva me laga liya
Sumo turns and playfully hits him on his arms - seedha? Kaun tum? Acha dekhte hain..
Sumo steps aside and nonchalantly continues with her routine, She has opened her hair which was tied in a bun and then asks his help in opening the dori of her blouse, he helps her and moves away smirking.. Sumo takes the challenge and takes out a beautiful red negligee from the closet, Shravan is dying to touch her but he also wants to see what she will do next, meanwhile she goes into the bathroom and instead of the negligee comes out wearing his T shirt
Shravan is surprised and Sumo lets out a laugh.. Sumo says - that was a preview for the bechara jisko maine 15 days ke liye apni seva me lagaya hai
Shravan - tumhe toh main dekh lunga, Shravan gets up from the bed and goes towards her
Sumo - tumhare haath aaungi tab na, She starts running, he chases her and picks her up and carries her to the bed.
The next day both of them keep thinking about the trip and can hardly concentrate on work.. Pushkar teases Shravan incessantly while Preeta is busy in taking Sumo's case.
Both of them therefore come back home early.
The next morning they say bye to everyone and leave for Mumbai, Shravan and Shiv are very excited to meet Nirmala after many days and Sumo is very happy for both of them.
Unnoticed by them someone has followed them and is on the same flight
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Don't tell me Ramu kaka won't even let them enjoy their vacation. Hmphh
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Waise idea bura nahi par ramu kaka toh sudhar gaye hai na.. Yahaan kebab me haddi koi aur hai..
The trip - part 2
The flight reached Mumbai, they collected their baggage and proceeded to Nirmala's house. A tall and very beautiful woman dressed in a blue business suit watches them go from afar. She also takes a taxi and leaves the airport.
The trio reach Nirmala's house, She is very happy to see them, She immediately takes Shiv into her arms..
Shravan watches his mother very fondly then teasingly says - Dekho inke pote ke aage jaise main toh kuch bhi nahi.
Nirmala touches Shravan very lovingly on the cheek and hugs him tightly.
They go inside.. Nirmala has cooked all of their favorite things for dinner. They all enjoy the meal together.
Sumo takes Shiv upstairs to put him to sleep. When she thinks he is asleep she kisses him and says.. I will miss you my baby, mumma jaldi aa jayegi.
After a few hours they leave for the airport to take their flight to Rome. The woman in the blue suit also boards the same flight.
Shravan and Suman are sleeping on the flight holding their hands and Sumo's head is resting on Shravan's shoulder. The woman in blue suit is seated two seats behind them.
One airhistess to the other - aww they look so cute together, looks like they are newly married. The woman hears this and makes a face - cute together huh.. Shravan you belong with me not with that b**ch that broke your heart. Don't you remember how miserable you were all those years, how easily you forgot all that. Not to worry, I will remind you that it is I who really loves you, not her.
The flight lands in Rome, they take their luggage and proceed to the hotel.. They are jetlagged and go to sleep. The woman has checked in the same hotel.
It is evening, Sumo is dressed in a yellow maxi dress and is lookin absolutely stunning, Shravan is also looking dapper in a blue suit. Together they head out for dinner. The woman follows. After dinner they head out to a gelataria to have some Gelato.. They are sharing a happy banter and feeding each other gelatos. Shravan playfully puts some Gelato on Sumo's nose, then kisses her on the nose, then he is about to kiss her on the lips when someone calls his name from behind - Hey Shravan! (it's the woman)
Shravan - Hi Trisha, how are you? Shravan gets up and gives her a hug.. Long time no see, how have you been, what are you doing in Rome.
Trisha - Oh I am just passing through, I have to go to Zurich for settling a case and I have a train tomorrow.
Shravan - Sumo, this is Trisha, my classmate from Oxford and she also worked with me for a while in our firm, now she has her own law firm operating in Mumbai, London and Brussels.
Sumo - Hi, nice to meet you. Do visit us if you come to Delhi.
Trisha - Sure Suman, I would love to. BTW I have heard a lot about you, this one here used to talk about you all the time.
Although Trisha seems friendly enough Sumo can feel an undercurrent of jealousy and hatred directed towards herself, and by the way Trisha keeps touching Shravan, Sumo guesses that she does not think of Shravan as a friend.
To avoid further interaction
Sumo says to Shravan, hugging him all of a sudden, marking him as hers- Can we please go back, I am feeling very sleepy.
Shravan kisses her on the head - Sure, Chalo wapas chalein. They say goodbye and take a taxi back.
All the way back, Sumo keeps on thinking what she must do. How she must ask Shravan.
Shravan can see that she is jealous and he feels very happy.
They reach the hotel and enter their room.
Sumo asks - Was she a very good friend?
Shravan - Yes, she and her brother were very close friends of mine.
Sumo - you said she worked with your firm, did she leave because of some reason? And you never mentioned her to me before?
Shravan - Sumo, actually she had feelings for me and I had guessed as much. So I told her brother that whether you loved me or not, nobody could ever take the place you had in my heart. You see I was always yours, how could I give your place to someone. That broke her heart and was the end of our friendship and any professional relationship.
Sumo - Oh, Acha.. hugging Shravan she says.. I am so sorry I thought you had lied to me when you said that you never thought of any other girl all those years.. Please please forgive me. I got jealous and and doubted you.. She starts sobbing
Shravan - Shhh.. I understand, after all I am the jalkukda in this relationship.. That brings a smile to her face and then she says - Acha but promise me, we will try not to meet her again.
Shravan - Happily.. Ab khush meri jalkukdi
Sumo - haan bahut
Shravan - toh lao mera reward
Sumo stretches on her toes and kisses Shravan with all her love. He picks her up in his arms and they are lost in each other's love.

So Sumo was green with envy in this one.. Lets see what our jealous Sumo does next...and of course we have Trisha as our kebab me haddi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Sometime before, i kept a request in the forum for writing about jealous Sumo. I always wanted to see that side of her. You are writing this now. So happy. Very eager to know what Sumo will do, as much as what Trisha does !! seems shravan gonna have a tough time !! Waiting for the next part. (Greedy me would ask for lambaa part 😛 though)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Yes I also felt that some parts of the story are unexplored, we know how much shravan feels for her but it needs to be seen how much she loves him. It was there when the series began but later on it was much too much focused on shravan's love for her her and his pain
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Lovely story. Sumo's surprise was amazing. And their trip is alfab. Shravu has dlsorted things with Nirmala finally.

Ab ye Trisha kahan se tapak gayi??

Glad that you are gonna explore Sumo's tale, her love and possessiveness.

Please update the topic title to indicate a new update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Fabulous
Excited to watch jealous sumo which we missed in serial
Update soon
Edited by krutish22 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Fabulous
Excited to watch jealous sumo which we missed in serial
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
The Trip - part 3
Shravan is lazying around the hotel's swimming pool, he is just wearing his swimming shorts..his eyes are closed Trisha watches from afar, drooling over him, she is standing right by the pool. sumo comes down in her swimwear, notices Trisha, She walks towards Shravan as if she cannot see anybody else, when she is near trisha, she nudges her with her arm, Trisha loses her balance and falls into the pool, Sumo goes to Shravan as if nothing happened, Shravan notices all this and lets out a chuckle, then they go together for a swim.
When they are having breakfast, to Sumo's annoyance Trisha comes and talks to them on the pretext of saying bye, Sumo acts polite but as soon as Trisha leaves she stomps her feet saying isko toh main dekh lungi.. Shravan is enjoying this cute jealous avatar of Sumo very much. All day long they visit several places and the next day they leave for Paris.
They have a very enjoyable day as they visit all monuments and in the evening they go for a cruise on the Seine River followed by dinner on the top floor of the Eiffel. They are busy enjoying the dinner when Sumo notices Trisha having dinner with someone. She gets passed and says isko yahaan kisne bulaya? Ye toh Zurich gayi thi na..
Shravan - mujhe kya pata, main bhi toh utna hi jaanta hun jitna tum
Sumo's - Sach bolo tumne hi isko bulaya na.. She gets up in anger takes the lift and goes downstairs, Shravan hurriedly followed her by the next lift.. By then she has already left for the hotel.
Shravan follows. When he reaches there he finds Sumo crying. He wipes her tears and hugs her saying Sumo main usko kyun bulaunga, tumne dekha na wo kisi aur ke saath dinner kar rahi thi, aayi hogi woh Paris apne kisi kaam se.
Sumo - main bhi na pagal hun... Sorry mujhe gussa aa gaya aur main aise uth ke chali aayi.. She hugs him back..
Next Update - let's see what Trisha does next.

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