Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 46

Originally posted by: kennashreign

Aww, this was so cute. Continue soon.

Originally posted by: muskiii

Sorry dear, my phone was not working so I couldn't reply coming to the story- it's amazing, poor shravan but at least he's able to vent out his frustration here 😆

Originally posted by: hermoinelily

Zoya. ...am really sorry I have not unressed my comment for the previous chapie as I was so busy.. ..

It's okay ya, np😛
Bt both the chapters are like wowww!!! 👏

Thank you!

U literally bought tears in my eyes. ...shravans pain was so beautifully penned that I could feel it.
Everything S there.. ...logic.. Drama.. Emotional. ..'Sab kuch' hai. ...
Can't wait for the next one which S going to awesome like the others.. ...

Hopefully soon!
😳 Love u loadsss.. ...pls give us more.. ..yeah I know tat I am greedy. ...bt do write more ND more shraman

I will write more on them, yahan ya kahin aur, but I will write 😃

Originally posted by: Sunain

Ressi res...
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Unres

Zoya Zoya Zoya...firstly m extremely sorry for the delay..i hope u wont be mad at me...sorry... 😕
Oh come on! Why will I be mad, it's cool😛 Happens😊
Secondly big big 🤗 for u...u r a sweetheart gem...n i genuinely mean it.
Aww man, thanks. Hugs back 🤗
Thirdly...The upii 😆 ...woah..WHT SHUD I SAY...yar u always make me spellbound n amazingly i love it..
Zoya..it was stupendously written!!!

Thank you!!!
the begining was really nice...flashbacks were outstanding n very much dishearting at the very same time...
I really wanted sumo to realize how much she hurted him..n be guilty as this was sumthng our show failed to potray yaa there were other things to but this very thing disappointed me alot as shravan alone was not at fault she ws also equally responsible but nhi wht i think is shravan got devasted the most (hope u wont beg to differ on tht 😆 )

Never!
N u pulled it off really wel...
Morning moment ws ❤️..n "mujhse chupaogi" made me
N "maat jao" ws like i literally cud feel the intensity with which he wanted her..pata nhi...it was damn heartwarming.!
phir tu jo hoa...tuoba tuoba..mera tu literally tissue box bhi khatam ho chukaa tha tab tak..naya kholna para..zoya nxt time sy u r going to pay for my tissue boxes k..it was so difficult to read with teary eyes 😭 😭

Hahahah! Deal!
Tht heartbreaking intense drama ws very wel penned..as if u nailed it to the core.
Shravanz outburst ws made fresh tears roll out of my eyes..was very dishearting n justified too poor shravan.. 🥺
Ramnaths confession was very nice...but after result was 🥺
later the hospi faisco was fabulous...sumo ki outburst moreover adi ko chaantaa was the best one her lioness avatar ws 👏
Pushkar ka jaalwa bhi aalaa tha yar..us ko kaiay bhool sakatay hain..
Thn shravan ka silent tourcher was why thy deserved.[BR

"sumo tum na,tum bilkulandhere mein roshni jaisi ho.Gharmi mein chao jasi ho.Barish ki pehli boond.Tum jahan jati ho sab khush ho jaatay hain.."

This part was ethereal...bestest dailougez..without any dout.
n sumoz way to shut his nonsense talk n mouth was terrific..sumo say yahi umeed thi warna humray shravan k pass jo hormones hain woh court main case
larnay kay leay chalay jatay hain..darpok kahi ka..
🤪
😆 N tht end part was damn cute...
All in all u killed it..

Thank you so so much!
My sweetheart.. 🤗
Haaa...finally i did it...yaa unres mission accomplished..huoof.

You're funny 😆
love u...muuahh..ajj pata nhi kyun bara pyaar aa raha hai tum par.. 🤪 🤣

Dude, yeh controversial ho jayega 🤣
hope u wont mind.. 😉

Behen ka prem hai, why would I😉

Originally posted by: AMNP

Sorry for the delayed response...Finally got to read Chapter 3, and Zoya you really made me emotional with this one😭...A big hug to you dear for this 🤗...you have beautifully written what we wanted to see between Shraman and the pain that Shravan went through is heart wrenching...wish we could see all this happening in EDKV 😭

Originally posted by: Niroja

Dekhe lo Hum ko Karib se

Aaj hum Mile hai.Naseeb se

Ye pal phir kanha aur ye manzil phir kanha

Gazab ka hai din socho zara yeh dewana pan dekho zara

Tum bhi akele hum bhi akele maza aa raha hai kasam se

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Kya kahu Mera jo haal hai

Raat din Tuhmara Khayal hai

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Originally posted by: orion23

Hey!!

Thank you so much for the beautiful lyrics and CAPS!

Hum ko Tum se Pyar hai