Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 45

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

I am sooo sorry for being so late !

It's alright hon!
I have to tell you something, I LOVE your writing, like wow you know what's the best thing about it ? IT is so close to our show that you can actually imagine all of it happening Shravan's pain looks so real, dialogues are your forte for sure ! Never stop writing on them and please teach me how to write like this !

Aww really! Thank you so much man... IDK how to teach😆 I imagine, I write...

If I have to teach you, you will have to learn to imagine like me😆 And that sounds like a very difficult thing to teach
This is love, this is everything, this represents my EDKV perfectly ❤️

Shukriya!!
Thank you so much for this big hugs to you !

You're welcome!!

Hugs back!

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Zo🤗

Prii🤗
I was bored so what could be better than reading this update 😃

Dude! I like you!
Ab padh liya hai to ainvayi to nahi ja rhi main without commenting 😆

Quite obviously!!
Okay so lets bore you with my rant 😆 (har ek friend kameena hota hai 🤣)

Aur zaroori bhi!!

"Jab tum nahi dikhti toh lagta hai saasen tham jayegi meri, pata hai itne saalon se tumhe Facebook pe stalk kar raha hoon, taaki chain se saas toh le sakoon kam se kam."

After reading these absolutely beautiful lines i want to sing...ga loon? 😳 .
Ga hi leti hu 😆

Majal meri jo tujhko rok loon! Gaa de behen😆

Saans me teri saans mili to mujhe saans ayi
This song! I hate it🤣 But I understand why you'd think of it😆

Zindagi toh ho na tum meri, tum nahi toh mai kuch bhi nahi. Pyaar mai tumse kitna karta hoon, yeh shayad na mai kabhi tumhe bata paaon, aur na shayad tum samjhogi kabhi.."

Jo Meri Rooh Ko Chain De Pyaar De
Woh Khushi Bangaye Ho Tum
Zindagi Ban gaye Ho Tum
Wah wah! Kamal!

I can see a lot of flying chappals coming my way 😆
Mat maro mujh masoom ko *makes puppy face*
Arey! Kiski majal jo tujhe maare! Mai dekh loongi 😈
Mat jao
Maine pehle hi dekha tha ye aur samjh bhi gyi thi but ye bold hai ye meri nanhi munhi ankhon ne abhi notice kiya 😆
Get your eyes checked! Maine tum logon ke dimag ko wahan, Sneha ke post tak le jaane mai koi kasar nahi chodi😆 Aur tu!

Zo will you kill me if I sing a more song ? Tell tell

Tujhe maar diya toh mera kya hoga!
Apki khamoshi ko maine haan samjh li 😆

Filmy😆
When sumo slapped chomu all i could imagine is sumo with a whip
Singing

Mar diya jaye ki chhod diya jaye
Bol tere sath kya salook kiya jaye 😆

I thought maar diya jaaye, then I thought zyada ho jayega, toh iss liye chodd diya gaya🥱

Meri nazron se dekho Sumo, tumko khud ki nazar lag jayegi.."
Haye zo you are the best dialogue writer ...muahhh
Aww ya! So happy! But imagine Namik Paul saying that in his gorgeous voice and brilliant face expressions❤️
Meri bakwas ab band ...change the channel 🤣
Thanks bro🤣
P.s.- This is the only update I've read more than 3 times 😳

Are you for real!

3 times was your first TS caught 😳

You read that thrice!!! And this 4 time!

Priii! I love you!!!

Originally posted by: pal655

Phew at last updated on page 42. Too late

Originally posted by: pal655

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Zoya di!!!! 🤗 . Sorry for the late comment

Priya 🤗Arey koi nahi ya!
this college after a long puja vacation is taking a troll on me. 😕 .

Happens...
Ok you again made me speechless but as always I will speak 😆
Haha! Go ahead!
Whattt an amazing chapter . Wowww 👏 . I have no words to express my self.
Thank you so much hon!!
This chapter has fulfilled all my dreams for maha episode. Well I think after this ff ends I will be in peace and all my dreams regarding edkv will be justified and main edkv Ki moh Maya se mukt Ho jaungi and I will lead on to Himalayas 😆 .
Dude! 🤣 Nirvana😆
Ok mixed feeling chater it was . I was mostly crying during my read firstly because I was sad and then because I was happy.
As expected 😎
Uff at last sumo is making some sense to me*shikho CVs shikho writing kise kehte hai*. After reading your work I realized that ya sumo is actually in love with Shravan because in show this idea was contradictory. Anyway .
Agreed😆
Uff poor soul shravan why on earth he has to suffer so much. Ramu kaka and dalmala Ho to hell together 😡 . I loved the way sumo bashed them yahhh gayal sherni 😳 . And of course that epic and pleasant slap on chomu ka face made my day 😆 . For him our poor baby was hospitalized. I loved the way you have described Shravan's plight. Amazing description 👏 .
Shukriya...
Aww sumo shut his mouth with a kiss . Thank god she did warns Shravan Malhotra aur 10 years waste kar deta. Shravan is such a pure soul after all this he wants to forgive people who made him cry and rip inwards . He is a dream guy . Even sumo has given in to him but he wants her dreams to get completed . Wow.
That's him na... Aaisa hi toh tha woh hamesha se...
Well I have read this update twice and still can't get over it so going to read for another time.

Ooi ma😳

So zoya di hope to see you soon with another such a beautiful and longgg maha episode chapter soon. And I can't help but curse our luck . Hayy hamari phooti kismat . If you were the writer of edkv we would have been the luckiest.

Chal oye, I think CVs ke paas time hota toh iss better milta himko, #Sab Kismat Ka Khel Hai Pushpa😆
Tada . See you soon.

Absolutely!
-------priya