Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 41

Originally posted by: --Shraman--

Mindblowing👏

*speechless*

@Amish Reply ke reply ke liye shukriya...

I was just re-reading through the last part Zoya and one thing which made me love it all the more, the fact that how both of Nirmala and Ramnath were on the verge of losing their son forever...I just wonder how utterly painful it would be for Sumo to see a man like him refuse to fight back and just follow all instructions like a lifeless person. That would exactly have been Shravan's reaction in case we got an elaborate revelation in the show. I always expected him to go through some sort of physical trauma or accident when the truth was out for it made most sense and thats what you wrote too so it felt surreal reading it. How I'd really wish CVs had stolen some of these ideas and put them to use when we had time.

Originally posted by: Malika

I was just re-reading through the last part Zoya and one thing which made me love it all the more, the fact that how both of Nirmala and Ramnath were on the verge of losing their son forever...I just wonder how utterly painful it would be for Sumo to see a man like him refuse to fight back and just follow all instructions like a lifeless person. That would exactly have been Shravan's reaction in case we got an elaborate revelation in the show. I always expected him to go through some sort of physical trauma or accident when the truth was out for it made most sense and thats what you wrote too so it felt surreal reading it. How I'd really wish CVs had stolen some of these ideas and put them to use when we had time.

Originally posted by: orion23

Woh sab ke liye Anjali ko request kar😉

Haan yaar but I really wanted to read ur take on something hot ☺️ 😉

P.S. I apologise bro that mai aaj bhi comment nhi kar paayi!! 😭
I have been in the tuitions till 9... time hi nahi mila aaj!! Kal pakka... promise!! Aai shappat!! 😉

Okay okay, so I am an emotional mess after reading this!
The beginning...Sumo FINALLY realizing how much she took him for granted when they were younger and realizing Shravan's insecurities. This is what should've been on the show. It was so impactful.
Then the confession! I love how easily the confessions just came out...no hesitations...just portrayed how strong their friendship is and how comfortable they are around each other still..
Most of all I love how Shravan told Nirmala off! Like BITCH TAKE A SEAT YOU AINT NO SAINT EITHER 😆
Fave line has to be "meri nazar se dekhogi toh nazar lag jayegi" makes me wish we'd seen a more poetic side of Shravan, esp after the sardi ki dhoop scene

@ Amreen because it's you! I will try...

Originally posted by: Vishakha2092

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Zoyaaa...those starting lines...they r so beautiful...never read them before...can you please tell me ...kiski poem hai???

Unknown poet.. I'm trying to find out, pata chala toh pakka I'll PM you!

OK...m just reading it and reacting simultaneously...

I would like that!

Mana Episode...ooh...I m in bro!!!...

It's good that she is realising that she was at fault too...

It is, isn't it!

His face nuzzling her stomach...I don't why that simple action matters so much to me...*too many feels*...love the way he is trying to get warmth from her...

That was exactly the idea! You caught on to it!!

Peaceful Shravan without that much torment...would have loved to see him like that in the show and you made my dream come true with your writing girl...tumhara bahuut bahuut shukriya...

Anytime bro!

AFREEN!!!...

I am listening to it on loop these days...spl. the coke studio Wala version...it's so calming and beautiful...I m sooo loving this update...

It's my favourite too!!!

You know Zoya I always say ki ...Nasha ho to kisi ke pyr ka ho...warna na ho...Shravan drunk on her...👏👏👏

Dude kya baat keh di aapne!

If a look from your lover can make you feel like the most beautiful person on earth then you are with the best... Shravan Malhotra...is goals man!!...

He has been goals AF forever

The difference between waqt laga diya and der ho gayi...I bow down to you girl!!!...I really do...

So subtle yet so strong!

"Mat Jao...". I am hyperventilating now...

Very "aa jao" Aa la Namik😉

His pain...anguish... it's too much...

My feelings are all over the place...

His lioness protecting her wounded lion...hell yeah!!...go Sumo go...beat the crap out of him...

Just as we all would have loved it!

Silence of the person you love more than yourself...it slices your heart slowly ...

Word!

I have no words to describe this it is sooo perfect Zoya...sooo sooo perfect ...the words would not do it justice...this was everything I wanted...and...man...charan Kahan hai aapke??... brilliant...simply brilliant...

Dude please ya! Itna bhi praise mat kar.. No charan and all...

RUMI!!!!...Bhaai...I m gone completely...

He knew love! Very well😳

yaar Zoya This gave me too many feels...my emotions are still all over the place but I want to give you a hug for this ...and a booking thank you...update soonish girl...m waiting desperately...a proper marriage ...hell yes!!!...m sooo looking forward to it...

Hugs back!!! And I will try my best to update soon!!

Loads of Love...

Shivangi

Originally posted by: memories_im

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Beautiful update Zoya! I love the way you are addressing to each and every detail. The depth of Shravan's pain is penned perfectly! I still believe both his parents were not justified in to what they did. Really liked the way you are dealing with the story line. Sumo needs to make a lot of efforts to make amends. Really looking forward to what happens next! 😃

Originally posted by: notready.

Okay okay, so I am an emotional mess after reading this!

Turns out everyone is... Sowwii!
The beginning...Sumo FINALLY realizing how much she took him for granted when they were younger and realizing Shravan's insecurities. This is what should've been on the show. It was so impactful.

It would have been a treat to see Nikki and NAMIK enacting something like that
Then the confession! I love how easily the confessions just came out...no hesitations...just portrayed how strong their friendship is and how comfortable they are around each other still..

I know right... Soul mates!
Most of all I love how Shravan told Nirmala off! Like BITCH TAKE A SEAT YOU AINT NO SAINT EITHER 😆

She needed exactly that treatment! Not maggi maafi😆
Fave line has to be "meri nazar se dekhogi toh nazar lag jayegi" makes me wish we'd seen a more poetic side of Shravan, esp after the sardi ki dhoop scene

You stole the words right out of my mouth!

He was a poet! What immense romance we would have gotten!

And coming from Namik!

One aa jao slayed us, this would be ❤️

Chaddo!