ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31 - Page 11

So beautifully written! Waiting for next update!

On the verge of crying after reading this 😭😭 this was so emotional but awesome...update soon

What a beauty! !

Excellent! beautiful update. I really feel bad for shravan. Everyone in his life made him feel so unwanted knowingly or unknowingly, they hurt him so much. I hope after getting so much hurt atleast now he would get some peace, happy moments and a person who truly loves him in his life. Now he really need care and love from a peson who would give priority.

Hey dear, what a beautiful update..👏👏..it's somethong beyond perfection...👍🏼

Awww so heart-wrenching emotional intense beautiful love it...thank u so much dear

Very emotional update!!! Wish shravan stays back with Sumo forever!!!!

hajnal firstly, thanks a lot for pm's dear.. you are a rising star of this forum i must say..ur just an amazing writer who knows very clearly how to put up things n where.. read both parts 7,8 in one go... loved dabbu in part 7 ..he is such a cutiepie..how innocently he asked shravu..it was so adorable ... n manju whoa a cunning lady who can never change.. n ramu finally came on track..agreed for shraman marriage.. loved when manju was accusing shravu n sumo came to his rescue n dragged him to her room... n then " mai wapas london ja rha hu " .. i was shocked for a while... couldnt feel anything for a sec... n then how emotionless n feelingless he justified why he wants to go back.. how hurt he always has been that he just dont feel it anymore... n sumo's anger, fear , rage was expected... she was shocked like us... but the way shravu behaved n answered all things that he never meant to hurt her but he did.. he did that to hurt nirmu but it did cause a big price to her.. the way sumo was begging him not to go..god my heart felt a pang.. it was heart wrenching moment ...again he was leaving n this time without any feelings... why the hell manju caught her...hate her..he did stop but again the smile of ramu appeared to him as a mock n he left without looking back.. n sumo retorted back to ramu which was necessary...n nanu pls find out... join the dotted lines... n one thing sumo was right about, if he would leave this time , he wont come back ever... you just create such an atmosphere, i feel everything is happening in front of my eyes..you have created such an impact hajnal... you are a wonderful writer...the intensity with which u write, touches heart directly.. waiting for next pm...pls update soon n thanks for the pm's dear...love ya :)

Hey dear...

Just come across this materpiece...n I am glad that I did!!
Just read all parts in one go!
This is exactly what we all wanted to happen n specially HOW to happen in the show itself...N u just penned down everything in the most beautiful, creative way possible!!! 👏
I can literally feel Shravan,s anger, helplessness, pain , frustation, n then indifference!!
Sumo's realisation of her mistakes, her pain...amazing dear!!
About Ramnath Malhotra all i can say that I cant fully blame him...Nirmala was equally at fault n u showed it wonderfully!!!
And the confrontation parts were my fav...be it Nirmala-Shravan, Ramnath-Shravan , Shravan -Suman...U just nailed it dear!! 👏
All in all I can say that i love love love loved it dear...
U r a God gifted writer...
Plz unite ShraMan soon and give us a happy Shravan...Cant see him like this!
Plz update soonish...waiting eagerly!!
N Merry Chistmas to u 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik