Imaginary episode #20

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello edkvians and shramanian 🤗

Aj saturday hai...pata hai na kya hoga aj...yes..imaginary episode

Its imaginary episode #20 😃

this imaginary episode will be based kn friday episode precap:

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Shravan apologies to nanu for being late and asks his permission to bring his wife at his home if she is ready to leave..mami turn to call suman but rachana maasi informs them that suman has left for pct woth preeta and she has forgot her phone at home and preeta is also not picking her own phone.

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try to include the precap in the imaginary episode #20

So its 10 pm IST.

lets begin it .

note :

1) this episode will end by 11 pm IST.

2) if you put a res for writing episode, then you will have only 5 min to write (unres) your part of story after previous res is unresed by other writer.

3)anyone can participate.

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

I thought I'm late..

Yahan toh koi aya hi nahi hai 😕

RES!

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Nirmala's call had an effect on Aditya. He was guilty. Again. He looked up at Shravan who was looking directly at him. Hurt flashing in his eyes.

Shravan turned and looked at the goons who backed off a bit seeing the anger seething in his eyes. He spoke in a deathly growl, "Mujhe yahan meri gaadi mai laaye the?" They nodded. "Chabi?" One of the goons fished the keys out from his pocket and placed it in Shravan's hand. "Mera mobile?" The other guy obediently gave Shravan his phone.

Shravan then turned to Aditya and said, "I won't report this. Consider this a favour. Tell your mother to keep you away, far away from me. Cause if you cross my path or Suman's or that of anyone I hold dear, so help me God! I will kill you. Is that understood?"

Aditya merely nodded his head, his eyes downcast. With the last word in, Shravan left the place.

Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

Mera dimag aaj bilkul kam ni kar rha
main ni likhungi 😕

Edited by sapphire3 - 9 years ago

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Harshi Arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

I'm very excited all the best to all👍🏼

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

RES
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UNRESS

He checked the time , it was 6 o'clock
" Oh fish!!! I'm late. Nanaji kya sochenge? Aur Sum..." his voice trailed off
"Mujhe kya karna usse? Use to iski bhi khabar nahi hogi ki uska pati gayab hai" he muttered to himself

"Pati!!"
The words hit him. He was married . Married to the girl who used to be his dream .Used to be!! He chuckled humorlessly

"Kaha kab kya kaise bigad gya sumo?" He sighed

Everyone was waiting impatiently for his return.

"Kya karte ho bhaiya ?? Kaha reh gye the? Pata hai, hum sabko kitni chinta ho rhi thi" Pushkar bombarded him with questions

"Chote sans le le jara." He said patting pushkar's back

Everyone gave him a questioning look..He occupied a seat beside nanaji .
Holding his hand he said " Sorry nanaji ek bahut jaruri meeting thi. Kisi se hisab barabar karna tha. " He said spitefully

"But koi baat ab main aa gya hu na . Chaliye jaldi se vidai ki rasm kar lete hai. Sumo se kahiye wo ready ho jaye" He said with a wide smile.

"Par shravan Suman to PCT gyi hai preeta ke sath." Mausiji said offering him tea

Again she chose work over him. Anger flashed in his eyes

"Phone laga zara usko , aise kaise chali gyi . Vidai karni hai uski." Nanaji said getting slightly angry

"Par bauji wo to apna phone ghar pe hi bhool gyi hai aur preeta ka bhi phone switch off hai" mausiji explained

"Heights of carelessness. His girl has no sense of self preservation. But why do I care?? "
Ofcourse you care stupid , she is your wife " his inner voice chided

"Nanaji main PCT ja raha hu. " He said getting up
Nanaji nodded

"Preeti pushkar tum log sumo ka saman lekar chalo ghar chalo .Hum dono sidhe wahi aa jayenge" he said
They nodded

"Par beta vidai?" Mamiji asked in a worried tone

"Mamiji aap ne kaha tha bina pati ke patni ki vidai kaise ho sakti hai? To uska pati aa gya hai apni biwi ko le jane ." He left smiling, leaving mamiji in thoughts

Edited by sapphire3 - 9 years ago

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res

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Mamiji started off with her usual rant after shravan left. "Yeh bhi koi baat hui bhala batao! Shadi bhi chup chap kar li aur vidai bhi aaise, babu ji dekh liya apni ladli ko! Apni vidai hai aur maharani nikal li kaam pe. Ab yeh toh shravan ka badakpan hai ke kuch bol nahi raha woh."

"Manju!" Exclaimed Mamaji. "Shravan ne kaha subha shadi kar lo toh usne kar li. Kaha na shravan se sab uska kia hai. Toh tum..."

"Shadi tak toh theek hai Dabbu ke papa, par yeh ladki apni khud ki vidai mai nahi thi. Koi farq hi nahi pada ho jaise ke iss ghar ko chodd ke jaa rahi hai."

"Bas! Bohot hua manju! Bas karo." Said nana ji. "Chali gayi meri bacchi apne ghar. Ab toh uske khilaf apni bakwas band karo."

"Magar babu ji hum toh.."

"Bas... " Said the old man as he got up and retreated into his room.

Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago

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potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unressed.
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All through the way to PCT, Shravan's heart was hammering with anticipation. She had once again outsmarted him. But what could he expect from the one who always did the unexpected? She was his Sumo after all! 'Aur meri Sumo kuch bhi kar sakti hai!
But now we are married. Ab kya?' He recalled their childhood moments where she used to describe her dream wedding and the expression on her face after they signed up in the court. His heart clenched with a knowing feeling as her broken, shattered face swam before his eyes. But he tried to dismiss it away thinking this is what she had forced him to do, leaving no other option. But that nagging feeling just wouldn't leave his mind. 'Was this really the only option? She did provide with another one, didn't she? ' His conscience kept battling within, thus he failed to realize when he reached PCT.
As he pulled the car outside the building, he felt a distinct, creepy sensation crawling his insides. Something was not right. Something was definitely amiss.
But what could it be?

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: potterginny
Sorry peeps! I am late!
Res karu?

Kar de..

We barely have anything today...

Res please!

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neverlandspirit

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unres

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He swallowed the feeling of nervousness down his throat and makes his way inside PCT. Everything was normal, the staff were fretting over the stoves mixing in the right combination and amount of spices, there was the usual hum of the refrigerators and the occasional whistle of the pressure cooker. Everything was just as it was supposed to be.

And yet it wasn't...

Because Shravan caught a glimpse of Preeta in the far back corner of the kitchen but Sumo was missing. He was sure Mausi Ji told him that both Suman and Preeta together left for PCT. So where was Suman, where was his wife?

"Preeta!" He yells from the door, startling the poor staff. "Suman kaha hai?"

Preeta furrows her brows in confusion, wiping her hands down on her apron. "Kaha hai ka kya matlab? Ghar par hogi."

Shravan by now was running low on patience and high on paranoia. "Woh tumhari saath ghar se nikli thi na? Phir woh kaha hai?" He all but yelled.

" Oh nahi ji, woh toh sirf mujhe gate tak chodne aayi thi, Keh rahi thi ki kuch der tak Aapka intezaar bahar hi karega. Kyu ji kya hua?"

And that's all he needed to hear before running back out the door and in search of his wife.

Edited by neverlandspirit - 9 years ago