Damaged- A FF on Sharaman Part 62 (Pg 150) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
You made cry girl
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
wow awesome
so painful
read all chapters in one go

u have written about suman pain so well
was feel like crying reading it

pls udate soon and pm me if possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5_

Late Night (2 O'Clock) _

Suman_ Sharavan nahi aaya...

Ramnath _ Pushkar Sharavn ka kuch pata hai... Abhi tak nahi aaya?

Nahi Sir, main Sumo se poochta hoon use pata hoga...

Nhai use pata nhai hoga...

(Suman is listening from stairs)

Pushkar car nikalo ...

Suman_ main bhe chalti hoon

Nahi koe jaroorat nahi hai... hum dekh lege...

Pushkar_ Main jaa raha hoon, aap pareshan mat ho ...

They searched and found him sitting in car totally drunk.

Sharavan ye sab kya hai...

Sumo nahi aaye ... aap ne rok dia mere Sumo ko... kaha hai mere Sumo

Tum abhi hosh main nahi ho... ghar chalo ...

Kon se ghar chaloon ... kiske ghar... Pushakar Sumo kahan hai ... aa rahi hai naa.. main wait karta hoon

Sharavan ghar chalo isi vakht

Sumo ke sath jaonga... Mere sumo aayege lene tabhi jaoonga ... aur haan Papa main hosh main hoon ... ab to man poore hosh main hoon ... pahle nahi tha ...

Ramnath( ye kya kah raha hai... kal dekhta hoon) Pushkar Suman ko lekar aao main yahi hoon.

After Pushkar goes to bring Suman...

Sharavan kya hua ... Achanak se Suman ko kyo bula rahe ho... tum to uska chehra bhe dekhna pasand nahi karte ho...

Papa aap bhe kya baat karte hai... Chehra to aap uska dekhna pasand nahi karte hai... mujhe to har jagah vahi dikhti the ... aur abhi bhe dikhti hai... bas Papa aur kuch nahi dekhna hai mujhe ... Aur haan aap bhe mujhe pyar nahi karte hai Nirmala Ahuja kee tarah...

Sharavan kal baat karoonga ... abhi tum hosh main nahi ho

Pushkar comes back with Suman_

Suman_ Sharavan ghar chalo...

Tum sach main aaye ho...

Haan sach main aaye hoon ab ghar chalo abhi ...

Sharavan's room_

Sharavan tum leto yahan ... Pushkar help karo...

Sumo tum jaa to nahi rahi ho ...

Nhai main yahin hoon ... you sleep ...

Pushakar looks at them and leaves room.

Suman_ (why he is holding my hand ... what happened today... this sudden change in behavior. I think he is drunk that's why ... Now I have to sleep with him all night like this... ) Both sleep on same bed holding hands ...

Nightmare waited on doorstep till first ray of sun and went back promising to come back next night.

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Edited by Wiccamaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
very nice ! update soon ! good to see change in shravan 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
quick and bery nice update... nw all the misunderstanings will clear and the new sunrise will beginning their life
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
So suman went to gurudwara everyday.
So relieved shravu knew the truth now .
And the last line of 5th chap was so beautiful
Awesome updates 👏
Thanks for the pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Sorry par I am pressurizing u again!
Jaldi next part plz!😛
Kya karoon, inna sona jo likhdi hain!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow man. Your update speed is commendable! I wish i could be this fast! Amazing one! Cant wait to read more! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nimik, Flib... thanks galz ... I am 9 number Aquarian... so you can understand my eccentricities ... bloody combo of stubborn madness 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6_

Morning_

Sharavan wakes up early to found her sleeping peacefully ... His hand still holding her hand ... (I am sorry for everything Sumo... I won't hurt you ever promise and I won't let anyone hurt you again. I know sorry is not enough for what I did... But I will try to be your friend... and I have to confess something... something terrible I did ... I have maligned our friendship...how I am going to tell you ... I have no idea.. I am so scared Sumo. I want to keep that truth hidden from you ... I am dead scared that you will leave me after knowing that truth... Sumo I really don't know what to do ... I just know one thing that I can't live without you. Even when nana ji proposed our marriage, I pretended that I am not happy but part of me was happy that you will be live with me forever.

Knock_

Pushkar_ Bhaiya Sir bula rahe hai

Aa raha hoon...

Ramnath's room_

Sharavan kal kya baat kar rahe the..

Kon see baat papa..

Tumne Suman ko bulaya ... uske bina ghar nahi aana chahte the ... dekho mujhe koe fark nahi padta hai par vo sahi nahi hai tumhare liye... theek hai ab vo tumhari wife hai par jyda maan mat lagana ... Kab tumhe dhoka degi pata bhe nahi chlega..

Haan papa aap sahi kah rahe hai... Aur maine kal kuch kaha hai to shayad drink ke vajah se bola hoga...

Aur haan Sharavan tum roz drink kar rahe ho main janata hoon tumhari maan kee shaadi nahi hai ye... par abhi bhe bahut se options hai tumhare samne...

Haan papa options to bahut hai ... ab sab kuch soch samaj kar hee karooga... aap fikr mat kariye ...

Dining room_

Suman is preparing breakfast_

Sharavan_ Chachi aaj halva khaooga... main fresh hokar aata hoon..

Are vaah puttar ji... Abhi bolti hoon tumhari votti ko... Suman Puttar .. . Sharavan ke liye halva bana lena.

After some time... Sharavan is about to have first spoon of Halva.

Ramnath_ Abhi Tiwari ji kaa phone aaya hai sabko tiwari Kial bulaya hai... abhi ... kuch urgent hai, aur haan Sharavan ye halva baad main kha lena... ( do you think I don't understand what you are saying and what you are hiding ... Baap hoon tumhara...)

Sharavan_ Why I am feeling uneasiness ... Sumo is in front of my eyes... she is alright but why this dreadful feeling ... Same strange feeling like just before her accident ...

Sumo you come in my car ... almost dragging her by hand ...

What is this Sharavan?

Nothing ... Just sit.

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