Damaged- A FF on Sharaman Part 62 (Pg 150) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Read all the parts, my heart goes out to Sumo I hope Shravan does something to make her feel better !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4_

Early morning after Suman leaves room... Sharavn goes downstairs only to be stop near Ramnath's room as he heard Suman's voice ...

What she is doing in papa's room...

Uncle aap kya kahna chahte hai...

Tumne vada tod kar accha nahi kia... Kyo kee shaadi tumne Sharavan se... kaha tha door rahna usse

Uncle maine koe vada nahi toda hai... maine to use aap se vada karne ke liye avoid hee kia... main to Nanu ke jidd par Aditya se Shaadi ko bhe taiyar the ... Fir Sharavan ne hee pahle haan bola shaadi ke liye... aur maine aapse kaha tha agar Sharavan aage badega to main naa nahi karoogi...

Suman... usne tumhae liye nahi mare liye haan kee hai ... Usne mere guru dakshina dee hai... Vo kabhi tumhara nahi hoga. Nafrat karta hai vo tumse ...

Haan aap sach kah rahe hai... main jaan gaye hoon kee vo nafrat karta hai... Aap jeet gaye ... Uske liye main ... gold digger, selfish... Hoon aur ab to hum friends bhe nahi hai ... Thanks Uncle for everything..

Suman mujhe galat mat samajana main tumhara bura nahi chahta hoon... pichali baar tumne cheque lene se mana kar dia tha ... Abhi bhe time hai ... main tumhe blank cheque deta hoon... chali jao kahi ... main khud tumhare divorce ka case dekhooga... aur Sharavan se baat bhe main hee karooga ... vo mere baat nahi talega.. bas tum ek baar bol do use ke tum divorce chahti ho.

Nahi... Uncle, I won't accept your offer. Whatever is the condition I won't divorce until Sharavn himself ask for it...

You will repent your decision Suman.

Sharavan hides ... Before she can come out. His eyes stinging and head spinning he goes back to his room... Like a zombie.

Am I hearing things... Papa can never do this to me ... He knew how much I love Sumo... and what pain she went through alone ... What was the deal and cheque... I know she is nothing in front of papa... she is no match to his arguments ... no one can stand in front of him in court ... and she is just a baby. Ohh God ... why I stopped looking at her...

Gosh ... I have to check where she goes ...

Suman leaves home.

Chachi_ Sumo kahan hai

Vo abhi nikli hai.

Sharavan Driving ... There she is ... Walking... I have to leave car and follow her on foot only. After one hour ... Sumo are you mad? Why the hell you are walking miles and miles ...

Why she is entering in Bangla Saheb Gurudwdara... so she was not lying about going to temple but for hours and walking everyday such a distance. This is strange ...

Suman_ Baba ji, give me strength to survive ...

Sumo is eating in langar ... And sleeping on floor (Puzzled)... God what I did ... I damaged her totally... she can't eat and sleep in her own home. (Her home Sharavan... Do you really remember how many times you called her gold digger... Blamed that she wants to marry a rich guy... talking about status... your fake status Sharavan... You are the poorest guy in this world abandoned by your own parents ... ironical)

My Sumo is sleeping on floor ... She doesn't feel secure in my room... Kitna gira hua hoon main... aur papa, ek baar bhe nahi socha ke vo Sumo ko blackmail kar rahe hai ... meri sumo ko. Oh God she doesn't have money to take auto or for food ... He fell on his knees crying for his deeds, his bitter words, and his loss of faith in his father ... And above all for his only friend whom he betrayed deeply.

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Suman reaches home alone... Unaware of Sharavan's presence all the way long.


Edited by Wiccamaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
God...it touched my heart...tears filled my eyes... finally truth is revealed... m so happy ...n sumo's condition...God my heart is aching... shravu man see wat you made her... you broke her completely... she's walking miles, eating langer, sleeping on floor... :( God I really hope everything will be good between shraman ...thanks yar at least u revealed ramu's devil face here...don't know when cv's will do this in serial...m tired of this ramu now... please update next part soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
So sad ! Poor Suman ! Everything she has to face
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Posted: 9 years ago
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mohabaat main nahi hai fark jeene aur marne ka
usi ko dekh kar jeete hai jis zalim pe dum nikle

bahut nikle mare arman lekin fir bhe kam nikle - Mirza Galib

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

mohabaat main nahi hai fark jeene aur marne ka

usi ko dekh kar jeete hai jis zalim pe dum nikle

bahut nikle mare arman lekin fir bhe kam nikle - Mirza Galib

Wah wah wah wah!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Omg.. This is superb update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wicca I feel so proud of you Girl ... Just read the 4th part ... Can totally see this happening on the show .. Every one talks about Shravan's hurt because he goes whining about his broken heart .. But Sumo who always tries to bounce back , fight , put on a brave face .. No one tries to understand what toll it takes on her .. Hence your concept of her being damaged in the process is brilliant...you have captured her angst beautifully...
Edited by tibs09 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
poor sumo... cant see her like tht she is fighter she is so stong what happen to her plz ... sumo.ko phelay jaisa kerdo
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Emotional update yr...
Ramu truth out..

Always assume sumo's pain like this and u wrote it Beautifully... 👏
Edited by _Eternity_ - 9 years ago

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