'BURN' - A 'SHRAVAN' OS.

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SharManEDKV

@SharManEDKV

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awesome!!! 👏👍🏼OS from Shravan POV's, a much needed one under the circumstances. u have beautifully laid out Shravan inner turmoil, such strong emotions - to imagine Namik enacting it - was just ..

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Roshni2015

@Roshni2015

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Mandy,

Superbly written... Loved every bit of it...

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Thank you every one for your great comments! I wrote this last night on a whim. Thanks so much for all the appreciation! I have had no time to come on the forum due to being too busy. So will try and abswer you all when I get a bit of time later tonight!

Thanks again!

Mandy.

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

I liked Shravan's pep talk to be bad and his inner monologue

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sapphire3
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Take a bow !!!
Mandy you never fail to amaze me
His emotional turmoil is so beautifully penned 👏
I so wanted an OS on shravan. And look my wish is granted 😃
You are amazingly talented .
Keep writing !!

Thank you so much! Appreciate the comment and sorry for the late response. But these days I have little to no time during the day and sometimes even at night. I have a very busy work / home life. But I love to write, so sometimes I stay up past midnight to finish these stories. It's like they need to be written and I sometimes literally can't stop myself! :)

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: orion23
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Mandy!
How do you manage to do this each time!
Your writing always leaves me wanting for more.
It's very spellbinding , you weave magic with your words!
I love your take on Shravan and his inner turmoil.
He was an inferno, he's burning constantly and when no one bats an eye at his turmoil this is what happens. The one time he does something to sooth the pain, he will end up hurting more.
This man! He's a puzzle which you seem to have fun decoding.

Loved this one!
👏
Can't wait to read your next...
If I may, an OS based on his guilt trip would be stealer coming from you!

Take care!
And keep writing!
Zoya

Zoya thank you so much! I really miss the comments by Fero aka Firdaus.

Thanks for the comment and the appreciation. It really means a lot. Anyone who puts themselves out their creativley in whatever form wants to know their work is appreciated and it is amazing when it is! It's a great feeling.

I love that the readers on this forum always "get" my vision for the character and where I am going with it! Yes I LOVE to analyze interesting characters and Shravan is a very well written character. I love to decode what he is thinking.

Just after I wrote this, and my version of Shravan was seen "introspecting", the show's version of Shravan was seen doing the same. It was amazing to see how he also came to the conclusion that he had done "the right thing". Anyone reading this story would think I had already seen that episode, but I wrote this before it aired!

Love how I sometimes find the writer's of the show interpret Shravan the same way I do! See him the same way I do. He is a fabulously complex character! Just the way I like them! There is a lot of depth to Shravan, and that is why he is so real, and why I love him so much! :)

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sumond

@sumond

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Kudos to you as a writer...I am a silent reader...but just could not go without telling you as to what a good writer you are. Hope to read more from you.

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sumond
Kudos to you as a writer...I am a silent reader...but just could not go without telling you as to what a good writer you are. Hope to read more from you.

Thank you so much! I appreciate you took the time to tell me you liked the story! Please bookmark my page on ShraMan (as per my signature) and all the stories link's are posted there!

Thanks again!

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