|ShraMan SS: Zehnaseeb| [Chapter 10 (Last), Pg55, Apr 29th]

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Nidhip7

@Nidhip7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#321

Thank you so much guys for the lovely feedback! 🤗

Love you guys. ❤️ Thank you for sticking around and always encouraging me to write better. 😃

~ Mrina <3

Hello dear

Very good story line.. shraman portrayed beautifully.

Waiting for the next update eagerly

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#322

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#323

Am I the first one ?? Yey!!😃

Such a beautiful story its simple to read. No over the top drama, but has a much deeper sensibility to it. About how two people fall in love in reality 😊

Was very sad when you had to stop writing for sometime dear. But now I am happy that you going to complete this story and I adore this couple here and the way their love is unfolding.

Beautiful.

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#324

I couldn't comment on the previous update, but I have to tell you that I love your story!!!

And this update has to be my most favourite one...Sumo is not shy or apprehensive. ..she wants to explore. She seeks time and he gives her that.

The ease with which they have entered into this marriage is so much in contrast to them not wanting to getting married earlier. I loved the flow...very smooth.

The beauty of your story is how realistically simple you have kept the narrative and yet it manages to make us feel dreamlike romantic.

This was clearly the best update so far Mrinal...you are going great here!!!

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#325

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Awesome Part.😊

Shraman were Married,it was so Nice.😊

Shraman Conversation was so Cute.😳

The way Suman asked Shravan How he loves her,it was so Nice.😊

Shravan said to Suman that he wanted to kiss her,it was so cite.😊

Shravan teasing Suman was so Cute.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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Ananya Agarwal

@..Ananya..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#326

This gave me that cozy and mushy feeling that I really can't put in words!

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#327

It's nice to read simple yet romantic love story of Shraman. Their love mature one they understand each other, trust each other. Shravan is already in love with her the thing is Sumo yet to realise her feelings for him. Wedding night was really funny both are want or don't want game playing.

Just 2 chap left, waiting for romance between two mature couples or our favourite couples.

Thanks for PM

Vinu

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#328

Just love the sweet and calm Shravan and the naive Suman...

Sad that theres only 2 chapters left

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#329

Nice part Mrinalini...

I can never get bored of this sincerely...

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nuttynuts

@nuttynuts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#330

Nice one Mrinalini! So Shravan and Sumo are finally married. Yay!

I liked this Sumo. She's different from the ones I've read in other stories. 😆 Initiating and asking for stuff. 😳 What will poor Shravan do but oblige 🤣 I hope she realizes its love and not like for Shravan, very soon.

Continue soon!

Nuts

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