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Shambhavi

@lazyshambhavi

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

omg zo

u r a writer too and that too an awsome one.

ur writing style is peculiar in its own way.⭐️

It's captivating.

awsm writing by you, zo

dialogues,emotions ,narration everything well written.

heart wrenching os with a happy ending.😃

well done👏

visited the forum after a long time and got a wonderful treat.

Thank you.😳

morever ur title captured my attention.

this song is my current favoryt😳

me shambhavi,in case u have forgotten😆

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Unressed on pg1
Sorry jaan res itna pehke kiya n unressed it too late 😔

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: lazyshambhavi
omg zo
u r a writer too and that too an awsome one.

ur writing style is peculiar in its own way.⭐️
It's captivating.

awsm writing by you, zo

dialogues,emotions ,narration everything well written.
heart wrenching os with a happy ending.😃
well done👏

visited the forum after a long time and got a wonderful treat.
Thank you.😳
morever ur title captured my attention.
this song is my current favoryt😳

me shambhavi,in case u have forgotten😆

Forgotten you? Like seriously!!!

Course I remember you ...

Thank you so very much!

Itni tareef!

7th heaven

The song is wow right!

Can't get enough of it!

And now that you're back, I hope you're here to stay😆

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sapphire3
Unressed on pg1
Sorry jaan res itna pehke kiya n unressed it too late 😔

Runs to check page 1...

Arey tu res pe bhi chodd deti I'd be happy...

😆

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sapphire3
Res for the comment 😉 😆
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Unress

Vikku 🤗
Kya likha hai tune 👏 👏. Ja aaj baitaal tujhe koi ques ni puchega ...main bahut khush hu
Muahhh for the dialogues
Mai kuch nahi hoon Sumo, sirf tumhari parchaayi hoon. Tum nahi toh Shravan kuch nahi." ❤️ ❤️
Sumo suffering thinking he did ehsaan .
Shravu longing for her love 😭
It was so beautiful and the song was cherry on the top. Ashiq tera ...perfect for shraman

Kehte hai pyaar saath ho toh maut bhi aasan ho jaati hai, yeh toh phir bhi zindagi hai...

Beautiful lines and so true 👏 👏

Absolutely fantastic story !!!
Loved it to core❤️
Missed your writing
Loads of love ❤️

Aww man Baitu!!!

I'm grinning like a fool!

Your comments always make me so very happy!

That's my favourite line too!! Shravan sach mai Sumo ke bina kuch nahi hai...

And "Kehte hai pyaar saath ho toh maut bhi aasan ho jaati hai, yeh toh phir bhi zindagi hai..." yeh meri original line hai bro!😳 #ThodaHumBhiLikhLeteHai

So glad you like it!

#AurJeeneKoKyaChahiye😆 (#Credit Mahi)

Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago