ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th] - Page 14

Anjali, the third chapter was just as fabulous as the first two. I loved their conversation and the feeling of newness yet comfort in their relationship. I love the Chor Bazaar/Jail bit, the AsYa feels just hit me again. Great job with this, I am looking forward to the next chapter!

wow. this was something new,

That cliffhanger!!!!!

Loved this chapter update soon pls

Wow!!! 👏 👏

Take a bow storyteller...what an update!!! Felt like as if I was watching an episode..

Loveeeddd every bit of it!

Halwa part was tooo good!

Loved pushkar, how he said, he made guys runaway!! 🤣 and Shravan's reaction... Awesome!!

Overall, it was sooo awesome of a chapter.

Chor Bazar - getting arrested ...but why? Cliffhanger... Aarrgh 😡 😡

Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

Till then Hugs!!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

OMG! Anjiii... New story!!! I'm dancing with joy! 😃

Fluff + Anjali = Absolute Gorgeousness ❤️

Coming to the concept, it is perfect and suits ShraMan beautifully... Yes, even I'm pissed off with the current track. Poor babies are crying day in and day out!

Chapter 1

Pushkar is so adorbs! 😳 That guy and the way he teases Suman is so cute! 😆 I'm loving the way you've portrayed Tiwaris and Malhotras as family friends and Priya, Nirmala and Kamini being friends.. it was nice reading it. 😃

Awww... Shravan came to meet her as soon as he landed. 😳 WHY IS THIS MAN SO PERFECT! And yes, a total bhukkad! 🤣 And as usual.. Sumo had to fight. 🤔 Well, let's go on to the next one.

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Chapter 2

Priya and Sumo's convo was so lovely.. 😊 The way she was making Sumo understand was so sweet. And again.. Mr. Pushkar is here! 😆 It's so easy for him to tell if there is something wrong between the 2 of them coz he is seen both of them together for so many years. 😆

"For Bhaiyaa?"

^I swear, when I read this I can actually hear Pushkar mocking and funny voice! 🤣

GAH.. Shravan is back for good! 😃 🥳 And the usual, Suman walking in on Shravan... may be she could have run faster and seen something more than the clothes on Shravan. ☺️ 🤣

That HUG! 🤗 {Please can I have one too ☺️ OKAY, BYE.}

And finally everything is sorted! *sigh of relief* That gift was perfect. And ummm... someone's blushing and someone's already liking it. 😉

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Chapter 3

I think this man and food go hand in hand! 😆 Bhukkad.😛 Loved the way Pushkar was trying to make his bhaiyaa jealous! 😉 He is so protective of her and i love love love that fact. ❤️

Finally they spoke about what was eating up their mind. Both are waiting for the other one to initiate I suppose.. 😳

The Chor Bazaar started with a slight intimacy and then went on to full on madness.. Hilarious! 🤣 Totally had the AsYa Mangalpur feels. 🤣 ☺️

Pushkar is not gonna spare them and it is gonna be a treat for me to read him tease these two. 😆

Thank you for writing this Anji... 🤗 Continue soon. 😃

P.S.: I'm so so sorry that I haven't got onto "Meant To Be". I have been reading everything on the go nowadays that I forget about it everytime I log in. I promise I will read it... just dunno when. May be I have to take out time separately and put a reminder on my phone! 🤔

ILY. ❤️

~ Mrina <3

Omggg it's amazing
Love love loved it ... Thnks gor the pm

Marvelous update Anjali. Thank god Aditya is not a bugger here. Hmmm lets see how this Shraman will spend the night. Am already excited

What. Why.

I really really like your version of Aditya.