My khayali pulao on future track

I saw Ranjit Gupta's Insta about surprise for audience...
No idea what is going on in their brains..
But after watching their set video, one thing is sure, we are not going to get shraman that soon...
Wait is looong

So, one story idea came to my mind, I wish to share it with you all...
Nanu's sudden demise soon after preekar marriage left Sumo broken( actually ,I love Nanu, and want him to stay here)
Shraman is still not in talking terms, and he is trying his level best to behave, as rude, still concerned for her...
Mami still stood firm in her decision to leave to US..
Nirmala planned to take Sumo along with her, as she promised to Nanu that she look after Sumo .
Shravan comes to know about Sumo leaving..
Sumo badly want shravan to stop her & confess..
Till the moment she get into the car, she expects shravan will come & stop, but shravan won't come..
Sumo in tears, unwillingly go with Nirmala& Aditya..
They thought Sumo is worried because of Nanu's death, so they didn't asked anything about it.
On the way, Shravan overtakes & stop their car...
Pull her out & his emotional outburst..
He didn't cared about Aditya & Nirmala's confused eyes on them..
"Your ego reached this level that, you are ready to leave all of us forever?
You didn't even remember the promise I gave, that I will be there for you.
Toh teek hein, if this is your decision, I won't stop you.
But you should say this on my face.."
Sumo looks on , then suddenly hugs him & weeps...
Aditya & Nirmala stood shocked, but shravan & Sumo were least bothered about them
Suman : "You left me, breaking all relations between us,
You were not ready to here what I have to say about it,
You don't know how I needed you all these days..
I was expecting you to come & pacify me..
Why Shravan, why you ignored me this much??"
Shravan lost his words..
He hugged her back...
Hold her tightly so that she won't leave him...


Guys, I'm not an experienced writer, but just wished to share my thoughts.
please leave your comments...

Very well written. Though I doubt, if Suman will be ready to leave her PCT back and go with Nirmala.

Originally posted by: Shreeswathy

I saw Ranjit Gupta's Insta about surprise for audience...
No idea what is going on in their brains..
But after watching their set video, one thing is sure, we are not going to get shraman that soon...
Wait is looong

So, one story idea came to my mind, I wish to share it with you all...
Nanu's sudden demise soon after preekar marriage left Sumo broken( actually ,I love Nanu, and want him to stay here)
Shraman is still not in talking terms, and he is trying his level best to behave, as rude, still concerned for her...
Mami still stood firm in her decision to leave to US..
Nirmala planned to take Sumo along with her, as she promised to Nanu that she look after Sumo .
Shravan comes to know about Sumo leaving..
Sumo badly want shravan to stop her & confess..
Till the moment she get into the car, she expects shravan will come & stop, but shravan won't come..
Sumo in tears, unwillingly go with Nirmala& Aditya..
They thought Sumo is worried because of Nanu's death, so they didn't asked anything about it.
On the way, Shravan overtakes & stop their car...
Pull her out & his emotional outburst..
He didn't cared about Aditya & Nirmala's confused eyes on them..
"Your ego reached this level that, you are ready to leave all of us forever?
You didn't even remember the promise I gave, that I will be there for you.
Toh teek hein, if this is your decision, I won't stop you.
But you should say this on my face.."
Sumo looks on , then suddenly hugs him & weeps...
Aditya & Nirmala stood shocked, but shravan & Sumo were least bothered about them
Suman : "You left me, breaking all relations between us,
You were not ready to here what I have to say about it,
You don't know how I needed you all these days..
I was expecting you to come & pacify me..
Why Shravan, why you ignored me this much??"
Shravan lost his words..
He hugged her back...
Hold her tightly so that she won't leave him...


Guys, I'm not an experienced writer, but just wished to share my thoughts.
please leave your comments...

Originally posted by: Mad_Shubhi

Very well written. Though I doubt, if Suman will be ready to leave her PCT back and go with Nirmala.

But still I would like to see such kind of confession. In fact everyone here is waiting for that emotional outburst leading to a confession.

Yup.
PCT, her loan..etc giving me hopes that she won't leave soon..
But nanu-Nirmala convo & her promise to Nanu & Nirmala bringing Aditya's proposal.. these things are making me to think out of the box.

I don't want sumo to go anywhere with nimmo and chippo..and i want her to stay put in TK...may alone ...and slowly shravan realising his love and her love...afyer nanu death i donot want sumo to accept Adi proposal...

Originally posted by: Joyness

I don't want sumo to go anywhere with nimmo and chippo..and i want her to stay put in TK...may alone ...and slowly shravan realising his love and her love...afyer nanu death i donot want sumo to accept Adi proposal...

I too don't want..
But till she rejects Aditya's proposal, it is a headache

Well written dear

You wrote very well 👏

Originally posted by: Simran0305

Well written dear

But thr r many things which can go opposite as per ur prediction

Still i wish it shld happen like in ur way or any way but we shld get atleast shraman confession😉😳

Thank you..
It's not a prediction..
It's a wish, as I want to see Shraman together soon...
My khayali pulao..

Originally posted by: Hhkfw

You wrote very well👏

U really like it

Thank you... 😊