Shraman TS- Dabhi Dabhi Si Kwahishe (Chapter 4 pg5 27th Aug) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
amazing update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow short but good pls make another one as early as possible.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Nimik

Itna superb update ke liye roses!!

Raat tak wait karane ke liye chappals!!

Sab manzoor hain meri jaan❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Holla guys I'm back after such a long time..here goes the 4th chapter
No proof read please ignore the errors.


Chapter 4
Suman was near the railing on the terrace.. shravan tiptoed towards her and slid his hand on her wait to prevent her from running away and his other hand held her hand so that he could see her mehendi
Sumo was liking this this new feeling..her heart slamming against her chest..she was hyperaware of his presence...
Sh- Beautiful..acha ye 'ss' kiske liye likha hain..*having a naughty smirk*(he knew deep down that she loves him but he wanted her to confess)
Su- (stammering) umm..ye 'ss' ka matlab hai sumo..
Sh- aur yeh dusra 's'?
Su- tumhe isse kya matlab... yeh tumhara court room nahi hai ki tum mujhe question pe question puchte jaoge aur main tumhe answer doongi (elbowing him lightly in the stomach) chalo jao abhi yaha se lambu
Before Shravan could say anything else Vandy called him downstairs.
Sumo heaved a sigh of relief .It was tough for her to push him away, she just wanted to forget the whole world and just wanted to tell him how much he means to her...she wanted to stay in his arms forever.. being with him was a different feeling.. being with him made her happy to be alive..he was all she had wished and wanted in life..
Sumo taking a deep breath decided to focus on Preeti and her marriage..for her family's sake she smiled again not because she was happy but because she strong.. being an orphan atleast taught her to be strong even when she was having a war inside her which threatened to destroy her

The wedding
Sumo eyes searched for her shravan when the baraat was at their doorstep..as soon as her eyes met his she immediately looked away murmuring something angrily to herself.
She kept herself busy so that she could stop admiring shravan and feeling sad that he cannot be hers ever
Without taking rest , putting on a fake smile on her face she kept herself engrossed in something or the other
Daboo sitting in a corner noticed everything..he had to do something to make her sumo di happy...he quietly sat next to shravan putting resting his forehead in his tiny palms and patiently waited for shravan to notice how sad he was.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awww Daboo he is cute
He is worried about Suman and Shramans happiness
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Daboo the Cupid will do something
Amazing
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gurveen

Daboo the Cupid will do something
Amazing
Continue soon

Hopefully he will..but he's Daboo after all..apna faidat toh dekhega hi😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why no updates even after so long a period??? Please update!!!

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