Game on : A Shraman TS - Part 2 page 2, Part 3 page 4 - Page 7

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Read both chappy 2 n 3 just now
He tricked her 😆
I could imagine ramu's expressions reading that london ticket confirmation msg 🤣 🤣
Superb plan ...ek hi bar me gf n dad dono ki halat kharab kr di 🤣
Confession was too cute 😳
Lines in the end 👏 👏
Amazing TS...loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Awesome...❤️

I love this so much 😭👏 the last part was amazing 👏 RamHoe defeat was amazing too🤣 I loved the entire part beautifully written and then lastly shravan cheating on sumo 🤣 bichaari sumo 🤣 in all it was really amazing! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: hiral_2010

I love this so much 😭👏 the last part was amazing 👏 RamHoe defeat was amazing too🤣 I loved the entire part beautifully written and then lastly shravan cheating on sumo 🤣 bichaari sumo 🤣 in all it was really amazing! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Happy endings...

I read it again today!!!!! It was such a nice story!!!!! Show mein aisa dekhne ko miltha tho acha hotha tha!!! Ab kya karen? BTW,nith, you are a wonderful writer👏So, why don't you write a fresh one on shraman? Eagerly waiting for your write-up soon...

Originally posted by: Safire

I read it again today!!!!! It was such a nice story!!!!! Show mein aisa dekhne ko miltha tho acha hotha tha!!! Ab kya karen? BTW,nith, you are a wonderful writer👏So, why don't you write a fresh one on shraman? Eagerly waiting for your write-up soon...

Originally posted by: Joyness

Lovely update

Originally posted by: nith125

Thank you so much 😳

I have not been coming to the forum much these days, have been a bit unwell plus a work deadline, but I'll be around more often. I have an idea or two in my mind, hopefully there will be a new OS from me before Friday 😳