Mohabbat Ki Hai, Aiyyashi Nahi....A ShraMan FF(Part 1 updated on Pg 1) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thnx for the positive response folks!!
Extremely sorry as I cannot post today as promised!!😭
Actually I am in Amritsar for a few days as my grandpa passed away n am very busy!!
Will post as soon as I go back to Dehradun !! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Can i kill you plz coz...
YOU DON'T JUST POST SUCH AN AWESOME PREVIEW AND UPDATE NONE
I want an update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I just love the prologue ❤️ dialogues remind me of bajirao mastani🤣 sorry if I sound rude😒 the prologue has been a suspense to me 😳 and I wanna read the entire ff right now 🤣 please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys!! Most of u would have completely forgotten about this and it's all my fault!!I had written this a few weeks back and completely forgot to post it!! Plz no chappals ya. Ihave many!! Now, this os is based on the current track and you will find everything here. But, on the context of providing a little relief to all my heartbroken yaarons, I have not included Aditya-Suman's marriage proposal (Yaar in dono ka naam bhi ek saath lene se dimaag garam ho jaata hai)!!

Ok, enough of my non-stop blabbering! Read the story and do shower all your lovely comments. I will send PMS to all who are there in my buddy list. And plzz, if you do not get a PM, send me a friend request and you will be receiving pms thereafter. Have a pleasant reading and do tell me how it is!!

PART 1

"Uncle aap sach keh rahe ho?"

Suman could not believe her ears and stars. Did the arrogant, plotting, dominating, blackmailer Ramnath Malhotra really say this? How on earth could it even be possible? She pinched herself and realised what even though impossible, but it was true. Ramnath Malhotra had finally asked her to return to her son. He had seen how Shravan was finishing one bottle of whisky after the another, and hurting himself physically. His hands were covered in blood-smeared bandages and he lay in a corner of his room, drunk. His door was locked half of the time, and no one dared to enter. Ramnath had somehow managed to get him in his senses and pull him out for PreeKar's wedding.

How difficult had it been to feed him sleeping pills the day before and put him to bed. Varun had helped him a lot. Hadn't he been there, bringing Shravan out in his senses would have been an impossible job. Kamini, Pushkar, Vandy and Lalaji had decided to stay in Tiwari Qila on a sick Nanaji's stubborn insistence. Kamini disliked the idea but gave in before her son and his happiness. So with only Varun left in the house, Ramnath had no other choice but to tell him everything.

"Bade papa apne kya kyun kiya? Jab aap jaante the ki Shravan Suman se pyaar karta hai aur uske bina nahi reh sakta, tab unhe alag karne ki yeh koshish kyun ki?Aapko andaaza hai ki aapse kitni badi galti hui hai?"

"Main jaanta hoon. Der se hi sahi par mujhe ehsaas ho gaya ki main kitna galat tha. Maine unke pyaar ko nahi, unki class differences dekhi. Maine 11 saal waali baat ko phirse dohraane ki koshish ki."

"Kaunsi baat?"

"Maine hi Nirmala ko kaha tha ki who Shravan ko chodkar chali jaaye. Mujhe galatfehmi hui thi ki Nirmala ka uske boss ke saath affair chal raha tha. Aur shayad in galatfehmiyon ki jagah mere dil mein isliye hui kyonki Nirmala mujhse zyaada paise kamaati thi. Mujhe ab meri galti sudhaarni hai. Apni galtiyon ki bharpai to main nahi kar saktaa, par wahi galtiyaan ek aur baar dohraane se apne aap ko rok sakta hoon. Main kal hi Suman se baat karoonga aur usse apne bte ki zindagi mein waapas le aaoonga."

"Achcha laga yeh sunkar Bade papa ki aapko apni galti ka ehsaas hai. Koi bhi zarooratein ho to bejhijhak mujhse kahiyegaa."

"Zaroor beta. Thank you."

"Suman beta, main galat tha. Maine tum dono ko judaa karne ki koshish karke bahut badi galti, nahi guna kiya hai. Plzz beta, laut aao mere Shravan ki zindagi mein. Nahi jee paa raha hai who tumhaare bina. Tumse judaai uske liye jaanleva ho chukaa hai. Jo sharab ko choota tak nahi tha, woh bah botalein khatam kar raha hai. Beta, ek tum hi ho jo usse sambhaal sakti ho. Jaao aur jaakar usse apnaa lo."

Suman's joy was simply inexpressible. How she wished to run into Shravan's arms at that very moment and hug the living daylights out of him! How she wished to close all distances between them, and become his for life! But alas! She now no more existed for her man. He had come to PCT in a drunken state and broken all relationships with her. She had never expected that his jealousy and her unwanted ignorance would clash in this manner. He had promised to never let him get attracted to her. His attraction, or rather obsession, for Suman had hurt him to a great extent and he was done with that.

She remembered all those blissful moments that they had spent together in their childhood and their youth. Avoiding to break down completely in front of Ramnath, she pulled up her elegant lehnga and ran down the stairs into her room. She closed the door and sat against it, sobbing uncontrollably.

"Kyun Shravan? Kyun? Kyun hamesha hamaare saath hi aisa hota hai? Kya main tumhaare kaabil nahi hoon? Kya tumhe paana ka mujhe haq nahi hai? Kyon zindagi hamesha mujhse mooh mod leti hai? Ma, papa aur ab tum bhi mujhse door chale gaye. Main zindagi mein unn sabko kho diya jinke bina jeena jaise naamumkin hai. Apne vaade ki wajah se main tumse itni door chali gayi ki ab tum meri shakal tak nahi dekhna chahte. Kya maine humesha ke liye kho diya tumhe? Tumhe kaise lag saktaa hai ki main aur aditya - Nahi Shravan, main tumhaare alaava kisi aur ke bare mein soch bhi nahi sakti. Mujh par haq sirf aur sirf tumhaara tha, tumhaara hai, aur tumhaare hi rahega. Main sirf tumhaari hoon. Dekho na, aaj jab main hamare beech ke saare faasle mitaakar tumhaari ho jaana chahti hoon, tab tumne mujhe rok liya hai. Please Shravan, ek mauka do, waada karti hoon ke tumhe taqleef dene se pehle main mar chuki hongi. Main humaari zindagi ko ek aur mauka dena chahti hoon. Plz Shravan, kya tum mujhe ek baar phirse apnaa nahi sakte?"

Those words just flew out of her mouth, even without allowing her to give them a second thought. She soon realised that PreeKar's wedding was going on and her Maami was looking for her. She recollected her senses and stepped out to help with the wedding rituals.

Throughout the wedding, Suman kept stealing glances at Shravan who did not even bother to look at her. She knew that he was broken to, but being a stubborn man, he was just not willing to forgive her. The wedding was successful and the newly-weds took the blessings of their elders. Suman was asked to do the tilak of the groom and his family. After everyone, finally it was Shravan's turn. She kept staring at him with teary eyes seeking forgiveness but they met absolute rejection. Her hand even got burnt, but she was completely taken aback when Shravan did not even bother to care for her burnt finger. After all the post-wedding rituals, the bride's family bid farewell to the groom's family with teary eyes and stepped back into the house except Suman. It had started raining by then, and Suman sat on the road, all drenched. Her soaked lehnga stuck to her body and the rain dripping off her body parts, especially back and abdomen would have surely pulled Shravan to her and made him do what they had been longing for all these years, had he been there. Her maasi dragged her into the house and sent her to her room. With all the wedding rituals, and of course Shravan's extreme ignorance, the day had indeed been very hectic for her. But she was least bothered to care for her weariness. Shravan was all that clouded her mind then and she broke down once again. Would he ever forgive and accept her?

Ok I know this was very lame and short! But please do co-operate. I will try my best to provide you intensity and hope to get positive response from all my readers. Am very busy as a new murder case just fell on my head today and only God knows how many days will this last. Will try to update as soon as possible. Till then, enjoy and please do keep commenting!

Thanks,

Shikha.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start I hope Ram realizes his blunder in the show as well ! Sumo the poor girl I hope he listens to her at least !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shikha luvd it keep going can't wait for more ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Koi nhi der aaye durust aaye😉
Great ramnath realize his mistake 👏
Bs sumo ko chance mil jaye 😭
Take your time and post awesome update👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's amazing shikha 👍🏼
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its awesome 👏 I wish Ramnath had used his pea-sized brain in the show as well 🤢
I loved it 😃

Ps: I'm curious reading your murder case line.. 😳 What do u do?

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