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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
To say Ramnath was irked would be an underestimation ...he was way beyond that!!
He just gave a glare to kamini...which she easily ignored
Shraman were a bit hesitant in moving forward to acquire the stage

"arre Suman puttar Shravan puttar ki gal hai ji kis baat ki deri hai aur sharmana hai bass utar jao dance floor pe aur laga do aag ji!!" Lalaji exclaimed!!

Suman looked down she had no courage left to face Ramnath but she was feeling the pain of the daggers being shooted by his eyes she can feel his intense, anger filled, and hope filled glare upon her constantly

'mai jaanti hoon uncle aap chahte hain ki mai iss dance k liye mana kar doon...but uncle believe me I cant I just cant do this anymore...at least for tonight...please forgive me!!' She thought in her mind with tears threatenning to leave...

She looked at Shravan who gestured her to ask "chale?"
She nodded in yes but still a bit hesitant

She was scared and how she wished that the time should just stop there nobody can see them together and only she and her Shravan should left out so that they can spend their special night together for one last time!!
Shravan saw her delima and seeing chachi constantly insisting and Suman lost in her own world he came forward took hold of her one hand and looked into her eyes...'wait...her eyes are moist why are you crying Suman why?? I cant see you like this please stop!!' He mentally conversed with her
She looked at their hands and then all of a sudden she started feeling a bit relieved as if now that those protective hands are holding her then no one like NO ONE can harm her ...she felt protected and closed her eyes only to let a lone tear escape from one eye which Shravan wiped off through the pad of his thumb and holding her cheek with the same hand he nooded assuring her that everything will be alright she should just trust him...like the other time when he assured her of preekar's marriage and she smiled back telling him that she trust him blindly all through her eyes and the amazing part is he understood everything!!

And then they came on the stage ...she still feared meeting eyes with Ramnath ...kamini was broadly smiling seeing back n forth from shraman to Ramnath ...


Ok I did this a long one coz nobody is here right now I guess

So!! Continue...
Edited by Ammiey - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Thnk u so much payal and behnaa!!
I'll continue...

Shravan is just unable to decipher the actual meaning behind her divinity, her elegance, her angelic demeanour;he looks at her lovingly and she reciprocates the look with teary eyes. He understands that she is unable to be comfortable even if she wants to. So he signals the DJ to play something hatke.The song "Chaahat(Blood Money)" changes to "Dilliwaali Girlfriend" and Sumo gets excited. They get into a very flirting mode and rock the stage. The song changes to Angrezi Beat Pe, followed by Balle Balle(Bride and Prejudice) and lastly, Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi hai. Their performance receives a standing ovation. Shravan feels happy as Sumo is smiling. Sumo thanks the DJ in her mind for helping her to hold back her tears and not break down. After the performance,...

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Viewers please join us, it is really a lot of fun...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
After the perfomance the hall was full of loud noises but these noises were not just noises these were the loud applauses and appreciation for the most outstanding couple of the night!!

"Bhaiya and Sumo ne toh sach mein aag laga diya stage pr!! " said an excited Pushkar with a ear to ear grin ...(believe me his grin was that big that a Colgate add can be put on him)
Preeti agreed willingly "haan sahi kaha tumne di aur Shravan ek saath dhamaal macha skte hain...par ye baat unhe koi bataye tabb na!!" She exclaimed!

Ramnath was feeling disgusted he was panicking he himself dint know why!
'calm down ram calm down sirf ek dance hi toh tha Suman aisa kuch nai kregi jisse vo Shravan k kareeb aa ske ...its just a dance ...its JUST A SIMPLE DANCE!!!' He was busy making himself understand mentally and adjusting himself with the situation . He was finding a way again to threaten Suman if found her alone.

While on the other hand Suman took a slight glimpse of Ramnath and saw him worried looking down here and there 'uncle aaj mai aapse nai darrne vali ...im really sorry uncle but I just cant!! Aaj mai Shravan ko khush dekhna chahti hoon at any cost fir chaahe uske liye mujhe koi promise hi kyu na torna pare!!' She thought in her mind constantly staring Ramnath with a fading smile .

Shravan still smiling at the audience looked at Suman and saw her fallen face he just touched her shoulder and raised his eyebrows to ask "what?" She shook her head in negative witha broad smile and they descended the stage thanking everyone .

As they came down Suman told Shravan that she wants to go washroom for once to clear her sweating face and adjusting the light makeup . He assuringly nodded and she went. Seeing this Ramnath stealing from everyone went after her and before she can enter the washroom he shouted her name from behind.

"SUMAN!!" she stopped in her way with wide eyes but still not turning around to face him...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Continued...
"Tumhaari himmat kaise hui mere bete ko haath lagaane ki!?!"
"Uncle woh to sirf ek dance tha"
"To?TO kya!!!"
"Uncle yeh Chachiji ke insistence par hi hua"

Ramnath got teary eyed. Man hee man mein-
"Kamini ne to mera dil tod hi diya!! Pyaar kiya to darna kya, yahi socha tha, par aaj jaan liya ki nahi bataya to karna kya??!!" 🤣

He composed himself and continued blaming Suman-
"Maine kaha tha tumhe Shravan se door rehne ke liye, to phir kyun?"
"Uncle main poori koshish kar rahi hoon. Preeti ki shaadi ho jaane dijiye plzz. Main Shravan ko bhool to nahi sakti, par haan, yeh koshish kar rahi hoon ki woh mujhe bhool jaaye."
Saying this, she ran into the washroom.
Little did they know that a pair of eyes and ears had been a witness to their conversation...
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Writers, PS- this pair of eyes and ears belong to Pushkar, not Shravan...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
That was hillarious behna!!! 🤣 that ramnath ka dil tootna seriousllyy 🤣
And I already thought to continue with that pair of eyes and ears being someone else's n not shravans but u alrady helped with your tag line!! See hm behno ki soch kitni milti hai!! 😳 😛

Ok continued...
Little did they know that a pair of eyes and ears where watching and hearing them and their conversation respectively!!
It was Pushkar!!
He stood there all numb with the thousand volt shock jo ki zor ka laga usko!! He couldn't believe what he just heard or rather he dint want to believe...his eyes wide open and staring blankly at he dint know what!! ...somebody started calling him
It was his mother the KAMINI!!

"Pushkarrr!!! (seeing him standing near washroom) aye lo ji tu idhar kya kar rha hai??? Sb tujhe udhar dhoondh rhe hain...aur tu idhar hai Preeti ko aise bheer mein akele chhor k aana chahiye kya ? Hein?? Arre dulhe ho tm aur tm ho ki idhar ayi vayi velle khare ho!!" She started ranting beside him when suddenly she noticed him not responding at all and staring at the direction of women's washroom path!!
She followed his gaze but found no one there then again she gazed him back!! (worry clearly evident in her eyes)

"Pushkar ?...(she pushed him hard bringing him out of his trance ) PUSHKARR???"
"haa...haan mumma kya hua ?? Kuch kaam tha? ...mai bass washroom jana chahta tha..." He said a bit stammering since he was adjusting back to being normal.
"women's washroom k taraf mur gye na jaate jaate ??" She said in a sarcastic way making an angry yet serious face
Pushkar saw he was standing in the direction of women's washroom and saw back at his worried yet angry mumma
"vo ...mumma vo..."
She became more concerned and put an assuring hand on his shoulder and started rubbing his shoulder smoothly to sooth him down as she used to do in his childhood becoz she saw he was scared of something...as if he saw some ghost ...'par kya? ...mujhe pata lagana hi parega' she thought

"ki gal hai puttar bata mennu" sh said concerned
...pushkar was now somewhat feeling relieved but not wanted to spill the beans yet as he himself was not sure if whatever he saw n heard was true or not so he dismissed the topic to take some time to analyse upon it...he went back on his seat still lost n thinking 'bare papa aisa nai kar skte...kuch toh baat zaroor hai...vo aisa kyu krnge?? Kya vo nai jaante that bhaiya loves sumo n sumo b bhaise se...fir kyu ???' He got irritated not finding any answer
Preeti noticed him thus..."kya baat hai?" She asked concerned "kuch nai" he dismissed
"mujhe nai bataoge ?? Ab hm pati patni banne vale hain n pati patni k beech sb share hona chahiye sukh dukh sb!! Toh apni tnsion mujhse share kroge toh tumhe b halka feel hoga...ab bolo!" She said giving a sweet smile n Pushkar stared at her face wanting to tell her everything and at the same time confused as to whether to drag Preeti in this or not as she would be broken to hear such cruelty with her sister like he was suffering right now...


Ok I always do a long one sorry but cant help to control my bullet train of imagination 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Amy, tu ek aur part likh de phir i'll continue😛😆😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Ok behna lagta hai ab hmdono ko hi mil k ise ek ending tkk pohchana hoga...but plzz rukna matt jab tkk khatam nai kr lete coz I really want to see where this leads and how it ends !! Its really interesting taking an interesting turn of events 😳


Continued...
"bolo Pushkar " Preeti whispered as she dint want to make people around them worried to see a tension going on between the would be married couple and gave a fake smile to guests who came forward to congratulate them in advance and give them aashirvaad

When they were left alone she again insisted "Pushkar are you going to say anything or not?" She sounded a bit angry...or wait I should rather say a bit irritated
Pushkar sighed aloud "Preeti ...vo...yaar kuch nai function ka maza lete hain na!!"
"Pushkar please" she pleaded with a puppy face on which Pushkar started to melt

"smjho na Preeti nai bata skta mai abi ok? Please try to understand function aur mood dono kharaab ho jayega ..." He said irritated preeti's eyes were filling with tears on his irritation Pushkar saw this and immediately guilt bore upon him

"i'm so...so i'm soo sorry Preeti vo actually...im really sorry please rona matt"
Preeti smiled through her tears and wiped her eyes dry
"nai roungi par aisi kya baat hai jisse mood aur function dono kharab ho jayega ??...aur ho jayega kya tumhara toh ho hi gya na?"
Pushkar sighed "Preeti I'll tell you once we get back to our home at night before going to sleep ok? Now till then enjoy the function"

Preeti smiled "vada karo sach mein bataoge!"
"I promise "
And they attended the function smoothly after that but Pushkar whenever left alone tried to analyse everything from the begining...when they were talking kamini heard everything
"aisi kya baat ho gyi jo Pushkar ko itna stress de rhi hai ...mere puttar ko koi b stress de usse mai chhorungi nai pata laga k rahungi" she said determined to eavesdrop their conversation once again in the night.

On the other hand Suman returned to the hall lost but as soon as she saw Shravan in her view she beamed with a smile!!
"Sumo (holds her hand) chalo mere saath " he sounded excited
"par kahan? " she said a bit laughing to see such childish behaviour of him but adored him with an 'aww' all over her face.

"chalo toh sahi surprise hai...chhat par chalte hain...u said na ki aaj ki raat aisi honi chahiye jise hm hamesha yaad rkhe? Toh bass aakhe nand kr k jaisa keh rha hoon vaisa krti jao! Ab chalo" he said all the while grinig ear to ear
And Suman just couldn't take her eyes off her happy and satisfied Shravan she was smiling too and wanted the time to just stand still for tonight...

And then they reached the terrace...shravan covered her eyes with his broad hands...

"Shravan ab hatao b apna bara Sa haath !!" She said pouting...
"ok darling just wait for a moment have patience" he said smirking.

He removed his hands and Suman adjusted her eyesight...and what she saw she was elated!!! Her eyes widened and a huge smile krept on her face...

The whole terrace was decorated and all over the floor a red carpet filled with rose petels were spread
In the middle there was a round table with two chairs and all around there were stands containing innumerous pictures of them together smiling and having fun from childhood till their grown up ones.

She slowly moved forward looking all around her and becoming enchanted by their pictures
Shravan slowly moved backward not removing his eyes off her and locked the door of the terrace on that sound she turned around and saw him doing that ..."Shravan?" She asked laughing "bass mai nai chaahta aaj koi hume disturb kare ..." He said slowly moving towards her...she feeling shy turned towards tabke and saw a photo frame kept on the table she grabbed it and her eyes filled with tears ...it was her parent's which Shravan kept in his childhood ..."ye tumhare paas ab bhi!..." Her voice was cracking up ...shravan grabbed her face and wiped her tears "hamesha mere saath hi tha hai aur rhega!" ...she hugged him out of the overflowing and overwhelming happiness and he reciprocated back hugging her tighter...

Ahem! Zada lamba ho gya 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
She realized what she was doing and broke the hug. She turned to leave but the firmity of Shravan's grip was more than her restraint.
"Shravan jaane do!!"
"Agar papa se dar rahi ho, to plzz is dar se bahar niklo-"
Suman was shocked and turned around.
"Tumhe kaise pata?"
"Chote ne sab bata diya mujhe-"

FLASHBACK
Pushkar takes Preeti and Shravan to a room and tells them everything. Shravan is jus too shocked by the sudden turn of events. He refuses to believe them and goes from there. He is just rushing away when Ramnath's voice catches his attention.
"Suman ko Shravan se alag karne ka mera plan aakhir kamyaab ho hi gaya!!"
He continued but the first line was enough for Shravan. He just stormed away from there and went to the terrace.
FLASHBACK ENDS

"Sumo, poochogi nahi main uss din tumhe kya batana chahta tha?"
"Jaanti hoon. Tumhaari dil ki baat mujh tak ussi din pahunch gayi jis din tumne mujhe uss daal waale tarike se thik kar diya tha."
Shravan was elated.
"To iska matlab tum bhi mujhse-"
"Haan karti hoon. Par tumhaare zubaan se ek baar sunna chahti hoon tumhaare zindagi mein apni jagah"
Shravan placed his lips on hers and whispered against them-
"I love u. Aur tumhaari ahemiyat tumhe batane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tum mere dil ka woh hissa ho jiske bina mera koi wajood nahin."
Suman hugs him tighter and says-
"Par tumhaare papa hamaare iss rishte ko kabhi nahin maanenge"
"Jaanta hoon, aur iska ek hi tareeka hai-"
Suman looked into his intense eyes and understood what he meant. She closed her eyes and turned around. Shravan placed trails of kisses along her neck and shoulders. He then lifted her up and carried her to the little room on the terrace. He placed her on the bed and lay on her. He leaned forward to her lips but firstly, looked into her eyes seeking permission to make her his forever. She closes and eyes and gives a slight smile, thus giving her consent. He places his lips on hers and takes out all her accessories. A lone tear escapes her eyes. He removes her dupatta, pulls the blanket over them and switches off the lamp...☺️
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Ok so I am blushing hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!☺️. Ab maine isko ek aisa turning diya hai jahan se bahut kuch ho sakta hai. Ab kya karna hai, it's up to u!!
Ye tera imtehaan hai behna, dekhte hain tu sab ki tarah likhti hai yaa kuch alag karti hai!!😉
All the best!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Ohhoo toh my guru is taking my exams haan?!
Koi nai ji i'll not disappoint my guru 😉
Okie dokie behna i'm thinking hard!!! This time my train of imagination is taking a bit time so just wait n watch agar aaj nai likh paaye toh kl pakka you'll see my dhamaal!! 😉
Btw kuch zada hi hot direction mein mor diya tune uff kitni garmi lag rhi hai 😛
Its very hot...i'll cool it down a bit u just wait... 😳
Edited by Ammiey - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sprry minarva u can write after my part i've already told that i'll write ...so sorry plz.. 😊


Ok so continued ...

That night was a wonderful night for the two satisfied souls...that was the special and that most awaited night for which they waited for 10 long years...
Suman felt complete and so does Shravan ...she was so satisfied that she now wanted nothing from life!! (not that she ever was greedy) and now she felt that she'll conquer any difficulty with ease with Shravan by her side...

Next morning they were sleeping sound sleep when a ray of sun enetered through the now slightly open window which fell on shravan's face who adjusted his eyes with the light and his sight fell on a sound sleeping Suman with a pleasant smile on her face with her face kept on his chest...and his one arm around her shoulder...he gently stroke her hear and smiled seeing her as if his whole world was there and he needn't get out from there...
He heard his phone vibrating and he carefully and slowly removed his hand from her shoulder to quickly grab his cell

"50 missed calls??!!!" He whispered yet shouting with astonishment
Then he saw the missed calls were some from Pushkar some from kamini chachi some from his bhaiya and bhabhi also lalaji and the rest and almost 30 missed calls were from his great DAD!!
He scratched his head and then get up to wear his clothing when Suman shifted in her sleep slowly wakening and opening her eyes...
She saw no one was near her and shot up with an alarm!!
"oh my god!! Nanu!!" She said desperately searching her phone..
Shravan came in just then and smiled

"pehele kapde toh pehen lo !" He said still smiling and realizing that she quickly grabbed the bed sheet to cover herself with a *gasp* leaving her mouth!
"issmein chhupanr vali kya baat hai kl toh sb dikha diya!" He smirked
"Shravan Malhotra !! Just shut the hell up and get out I have to change"
"haan toh yahin kro!" "shut up and leave" she shouted!
Then he left laughing and she changed and grabbed the phone she dialled nanu's number and told him that she stayed a night at her friend's house as she went to look for a place for pct and it got late since the function ended late...

Shravan also gave an excuse that he was with his friend discussing about pushkar's wedding and slept there both were sorry to not inform the family.
When Shravan returned to her in the terrace she was clicking pictures of the decor and the while terrace Shravan came and they both took selfie with Shravan kissing her on cheek and she meekly smiling narrowing her eyes...and many more cute poses..

Next day it was mehendi...suman saw all arrangements when suddenly she felt dizzy and fell on the ground Shravan got concious and picked her up before rushing to the hospital ...in the hospital after examining her the doctor came back to an anxious Shravan (only he went as he assured everyone that he'll manage )
"doctor sumo?? Sumo thhik toh hai na?" He asked worriedly ...
"haan Suman b thhik hai aur..." His eyes started to widen as he feared listening to the 'P' word
"...aur uska sehat bhi!...uska sehat ab kaafi jaldi thhik ho rha hai...actually lagta hai usne kaafi dino se thhik se soya nai aur abhi use araam krne ki zaroorat hai toh dhyaan rkhiyega"

He sighed a relief and then got sad that because of his father suman' not slept or eaten properly ...immediately Suman got discharged and they came back...
"tumhe kya laga that i'm vo?" She smirked
"kya vo?" He asked acting confused
"ki tumhe vo 'P' word sunne ko milega ?" She laughed and he smiled ...somewhere he wanted to listen that but just feared as it wasn't the right time...
"vaise Shravan ek minute k liye mujhe b laga ki mai vo ho gyi hoon pakka as my periods is shorting late...toh mai darr gyi thi! But doctor ne kaha its late but it'll happen" she sighed a relief

'another 'P' word ' he exclaimed in his mind!

In the evening everyone sat for the mehendi and preeti's mehendi started and some more ladies started puting mehendi
Shravan came and sat beside Suman " write my name!" "nai!!" She smirked with attitude
"thhik matt likho jao!" He stood up to leave when she grabbed his kurta with her free hand
"likhne ka zaroorat hai kya? Jab mere life aur dil mein permanently tmhara naam chhap chuka hai?" Shravan smiled and said "ok" and sat back
"hmm good achha hua maan gye varna tmhare naam se jagah kam bachta designs k liye " she gave a relieving sigh when he beat her lovingly with the coushin ..."Shravan mehendi kharaab ho jayegi!" She said laughing ...mehendi lagane vali b hassne lagi dono ko dekh k...
"aaj tumhe mera gulaam banna hoga coz I dont have my own hands so your hands are mine!!" She said beaming with attitude "ok your highness" he bowed down in respect making her laugh.

Ramnath wasn't able to understand what's happening why Suman is all touchy again with his son ...is she breaking the promise? I warned her yesterday then why??...
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Ok a longer one than before.. I guess i've written somewhat like others only its not something hatke ...so...sorry behna tumhare ummeedo pr khare nai utre
Behna u'll tell whether we should continue it till they become parents or end somewhere in the middle..
Continue minarva... 😊
Edited by Ammiey - 9 years ago

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