SHRAMAN SS--DOORIE-- chap 13 (LAST PART)[pg 54]{17/9/17}

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hi to all my dearest friends
i am again with 1 more story
hope u all love it
DOORIE
prologue

A man was sitting on the ground alone in his room holding a photo frame

Man-"kyu chali gyi tum, kyu chali gyi mujhe chod kar, agar mujhse koi galti ho gyi thi toh mujhse kehti aise kyu chali gyi,main tumhare bina nahi reh sakta, plz laut aao, plz laut aao" and the man hugged the photo frame tightly close to his heart and started crying. And suddenly the door of the room get opened and pushkar entered into the room

Pushkar-"shravan bhaiya" and shravan turned to him and again looked away. And pushkar went to shravan and sat on the ground near him and put his hand on shravan's shoulder

Pushkar-"bhaiya" and shravan immediately turned and hugged him and starting sobbing

Shravan(between sobs)-"chotu, kyu chali gyi vo mujhe chod kar, kyu" and pushkar rubbed his back

Pushkar-"bhai"

Shravan-"pushkar tum dono toh bahut achhe dost ho na, tum usse kahoge toh vo laut aayigi, meri baat toh vo sunti hi nahi hai"

Pushkar-"bhaiya, plz apne aap ko sambhaliye"

Shravan-"plz sumo, mere paas wapas aa jao, main nahi reh sakta tumhare bina"

And since last 1 month, shravan's condition was same like this. He used to engross himself in work and when not working then he used to get slided into the lanes of memories of his with sumo.

do suggest me whether i should cont. it or not

plz do comment and like

waitinggg

CHAPTER 1- PG 5


INDEX

prologue - above

chapter 1- pg 5

chapter 2- pg 7

chapter 3- pg 12

chapter 4- pg 15

chapter 5- pg 19

chapter 6- pg 24

chapter 7- pg 31

chapter 8- pg 37

chapter 9- pg 42

chapter 10- pg 45

Chapter 11- pg 48

chapter 12- pg 51

chapter 13(LAST PART)- pg 54


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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Wow Angel!!!!
Very intriguing prologue 👏
I wonder where did sumo go???
Plzzz continue and update soonish
I dont want to die of curiosity
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Angel!
This looks fabulous!
Please do continue!
I love the prologue so much, story toh banti hai!
Jaldi jaldi continue🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsum plot dear
Poor shravan so broken with Suman's departure
but where is suman ???????
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing concept
Do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3

Wow Angel!!!!
Very intriguing prologue 👏
I wonder where did sumo go???
Plzzz continue and update soonish
I dont want to die of curiosity

really thnx dear😳
i will not let anything happen to you my dear friend
i will surely try to update ASAP
but my exams are approaching😭 so may be i will be late dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

Wow Angel!

This looks fabulous!
Please do continue!
I love the prologue so much, story toh banti hai!
Jaldi jaldi continue🤗


thnks dear😳
surely i will try to update soon
but my exams are approaching so may b i will be late😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_writer


thnks dear😳
surely i will try to update soon
but my exams are approaching so may b i will be late😭😭

Oh! Mine too!
Its okay!
Update after the exams, we'll be waiting🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_writer


really thnx dear😳
i will not let anything happen to you my dear friend
i will surely try to update ASAP
but my exams are approaching😭 so may be i will be late dear


No worries take your time 😛
All the best for your exams 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Angel
It's amazing
Interesting
And where is sumo
Hope she is alive in your story 😔
Superb continue asap

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