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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

it's mind blowing waiting for epilogue ...beautifully penned loved it

Thanks so much... Will try and update asap



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ossum ossum ossum os dear waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gurveen

Mind blowing update
Shravan has decided to get the truth out himself
Thank god he didn't misunderstand sumo this time
Shravan sometimes behave irrational and hurts his mother
So the truth came out and sumo was there with him
Update epilogue sooon


Thanks..
Ya shall try my best to update it asap..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
very nice ... pkz update the further part asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aur kitna sabar karayegi Nancy?
Phal jab meetha hi hona hai, to jaldi epilogue de de!!!
Love u baby!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariajamal

very nice ... pkz update the further part asap...


Thanks for ur comments...Shall try an update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nimik

Aur kitna sabar karayegi Nancy?

Phal jab meetha hi hona hai, to jaldi epilogue de de!!!
Love u baby!!!!!!!!

Thanks shall update asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
totally awesome
absolutely brilliant
cannot wait for epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awesome...beautiful dear...read all parts in one go!


tfs


love,
spandana
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys here is the epilogue...well it's really not an epilogue as seeing the excitement from few...I actually wrote a full flege part rather than just the narrative...
So it has turned out to b long again!!!

Have fun reading and as always leave ur comments...

So call it an epilogue or final part...here it is...

Aar ya Paar (Epilogue)


Shravan was standing outside the Labour room tossing up and down..he had bravely tried to b with Sumo as soon as she got into Labour room but had fainted twice himself and picking up a qutub minar wasnt easy so now her doctor had barred his entry in the labour room...he anxiously sat outside the room..unable to relax...he saw his mother bringing coffee for him..she had come to London for Sumos delivery...though he wasn't as comfortable with her as Sumo was but he had forgiven her...it had hurt him that his mother had let him live for 10 years with a wrong impression..about so many things..but slowly came to terms as to why she did that...Sumo had insisted that she wanted her MIL to take care of her and the kid and Shravan had complied to her demand...in these three years whenever visited India they used to visit her and Tiwari killa..and of course Preeti Pushkar ..Pushkar had found the strength finally stand up for his love and family had given in to his demand..Preeri and Pushkar were happily married now..
Sumo had opened one more PCT at london and given charge of India PCT to Preeta...

Varuns name was flashing on his phone...he answered the call an anxious Vandy bhabhi asked ho gayi delivery he heard a fimilar voice promting questions to her..pucho suman kaisi hai...bacha kaisa hai..theek hai na Sab..that voice brought back bitter memories of that dreadful day once again..that voice of his Father..Ramnath ...
Though it all happened 3 years back but the memory of it still as vivid as if it happened just yesterday...
Shravan had taken Nirmala with him to Delhi...they dint speak a word during the flight and Sumo refused to sit in between them..she wanted a window seat..at least that's the excuse she made...
On the way back Shravan was in his thoughts planning to bring out the truth..when Nirmala had said...mujhe pata hai tum kya soch rahe ho..kya yeh tum mujhpe chod sakte ho?I know Ram..I will handle this..he wanted to protest but Sumo held his hand and he had nodded...just this one time he wanted to trust his mother...

Nirmala had asked them to wait just outside Ramnaths room while she went and meet him...while leaving from the airport... Shravan had called Pushkar to take the entire family out for dinner except Ramnath as they needed to discuss something extremely important with him alone...he had told him not to let him know ...the way he had said Pushkar knew it was important and he complied..Shravan din't want any scene to be created in front of the entire..family specially Kamini...wanted to go
give one last fair chance to his father and to understand if whatever said was true or false

He remembered while Sumo and he stood outside Ramnaths room how his mother had made an entry and almost stumped Ramnath she had started by saying "maine suna hai Shravan and Suman ki shaadi hone wali hai...(Suman had told Nirmala how Ramnath was very upset with her after that days fiasco...Nirmala knew his weak point...and she hit it right there where it hurt the most)...he had said aisa kuch nahi hai tumhari khabar galat hai aur kyon aaye ho yaha...though he was angry ...at what nirmala was saying but he tried to keep cool..
she continued ...arey badhai dene akhir Shravan ki shaadi hone wali hai lagta hai Shravan ne tumhe bhi nahi bataya...daad deni padegi Suman ki...jo kaam main itne saalon mein karne ki himmat nahi kar payi usne ek jhatke me in Kar diya. Tumhe Shravan se alag and she clapped...kya pakad hai uski Shravan par tumse bhi jyada..
Ramnath was stumped and irked beyond comprehension and said u r absolutely wrong...after that PCT fiasco...suman Shravan ki taraf dekhengi bhi nahi...Nirmala had said ...Really...itna confidence..aaj kaha hai dono...he said Shravan has gone to Mumbai...She informed so has Sumo...he said u r lying ..she told call up tiwari killa...ask them and she herself called up Preeti she dint want anyone else to answer the call..and put the phone on speaker.. Preeti had picked up...and confirmed..that Suman had gone to Mumbai.. Nirmala cut the call before Preeti divulged anything else...he was already boiling probably his insecurities dint let him think straight now...after Sumans accident. ...Ramnath had become even more insecure...then he heard Nirmala say..they have gone to plan their wedding the planner is my friend and she had seen some of Shravan s pic which I had cut from Newspaper and put on my office wall..she called me...to tell ...I am happy Shravan ko suman jaisi ladki mili...now Ramnath had had enough...
and Ramnath said...Suman Tiwari...he blurted...tumhara PCT maine tudwa diya tumhe akkal nahi ayee...papers bheje to show how Shravan can destroy ur self respect...akkal nahi ayee...now u wait an watch what I can do...and u Nirmala don't get too happy maine 10 saal pehle bhi jeeta tha ab bhi jeetunga...tumne meri baat nahi maani na..uss Ahuja ke yaha naukri karti rahi ...nahi mujhe divorce diya...main janta hoon..tumlogo ke beech kuch nahi tha par jyada udne wali mujhse jyada paise kamane wali biwi mujhe nahi chahiye thi tumhare iss self respect ne tumhe barbad kiya...ab yehi Suman ko bhi barbad karega..kaise maine tumhe apni aur Shravan dono ki life we bahar fek diya tha...his smile devilish...tum tho itna darr gayi mere dhamkane se ki waapis Shravan ki custody lene ki tumne sochi bhi nahi...iss Suman Tiwari main bhi mujhe tum hi dikhti ho...independent working woman..with so called self respect...apne usulo ke saath compromise nahi karne wali ladki... I dint let u part of Shravan s life and wudnt let her b a part of his life...these type of women t r not fit to b anyone's wife...Nirmala had added fuel by saying...par woh Pyar karta hai Suman se ...he had smirked in his pride...haan tho...janta hoon main...padha hai uske bachpan ka woh love letter...he almost rediculed him...aur kya woh apni maa se pyar nahi karta tha...karta tha na...par usne sirf woh mana jo maine usse bataya woh dekha jo maine usse dikhaya...tho yeh Suman Tiwari kya hai...yeh mere aur Shravan ke beech nahi aa sakti ...I will ensure that... he trusts me..more than himself and he would do exactly as I say...

and a voice came from behind...ab nahi papa...
He had seen the look on his father's face when he had seen Shravan standing there with Suman.. as if he had seen a ghost...the sheer disgust of the man standing in front of him who he called papa...had shook Shravans entire being but he don't cry and seemed emotionally much stable than he himself wud give credit of...he had found strength to hear and accept the truth...however the thought of his father's betrayal had disgusted him..how far cud his father go..for satisfying his ego...he had made a puppet out of him just to hurt his mother and to keep Shravan only to him...anger digust despise all emotions evident..shravan had stood numb...his father was starting to say sab jhooth hain these both women have misguided u..and r putting u against me for there benefit...now Shravan had enuf...

Not they u have misguided me
Maine aapki har baat par vishwaas karke kitni badi galti kardi...par ab aur nahi...aap se kya shikayat karu...he shook his head in disbelief...coz u r a sick man Ramnath Malhotra mentally sick aur aap jaise par tho taras bhi nahi aata..leave about talking and complaining.. Ramnath said yeh sab maine tumhare liye kiya...Shravan said ...mere liye nahi apne liye...aur dusro ke liye kuch karna kya hota hai ask Sumo and maa..he finally acknowledged her as his mother..
and Ramnath Malhotra I don't even know why I am standing here and talking to u...u don't even deserve my anger or hatred..
He composed himself and said...mere liye kiya na aapne yeh sab meri maa ko ab Sumo ko mujse alag karne ki koshish mere liye ki...tho main aapke liye bhi aisa hi kuch karta hoon...
Mr. Ramnath Malhotra today is the last day when v r meeting...kal aapne mujse maa chini thi aur aaj sumo ko alag karne ki koshish ki...he smirked aur maine aapse aaj aapka beta cheen liya..he had paced out if his room holding Nirmala and Sumo..
The rest of the family had returned and had witnessed Shravans outburst...
Suman and Shravan had got married in the next one month and had left for london after that...Ramnath had tried a number of times to meet Shravan but he wasn't successful...

The crying of the baby broke Shravans thought...
He ran inside to see the baby...it was a girl...he took the lil bundle of joy kissed the baby and he then gave peck Suman s cheek who seemed extremely exhausted..he told her Sumo u have made me the happiest and the richest man today... tears of happiness blurring his vision and Suman said in a bleak voice. .see lil baby..Sush...(they had decided name as Sush if it was a girl and Sharman if it was boy)...ur "Papa".. something shook inside Shravan took out his phone and called Vandy bhabhi asking her to hand over the phone to Ramnath ...they hadnt spoken seen each other in these 3 years...He heard a very shaky voice coming from the side...Beta Shravan...Shravan closed his eyes and said controlling his emotions...Beti hui hai Papa...aur iss khushi wale din i want to forgive u I don't want any negative vibes attached to this word papa any longer...aur aapse sirf ek aashirwaad chahata hu...ki mujhe aap jaisa papa na banaye...

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Do leave ur comments as I look forward to reading them ..waiting..

I am still intrigued by Nirmalas character ... I have tried to justify her actions in this OS but love to see how CVS unfold the plot...
Happy reading and keep watching Ek Duje Ke Vaaste



Edited by nancyrio90 - 9 years ago

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