Shraman OS || Aar ya Paar complete..epilogue( page 9)

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Hi guys
Here I am with yet another OS..it's in line with the current track... I have picked up from where the yesterday s episode ended.. and as the wait gets difficult over the weekend and we r anxious what Sumo will say to Shravan at the cafe...amongst all those speculations I am writing this OS to put my mind at peace!

Do read and leave ur comments here is part 1

Aar ya Paar ( Part 1)

Sumo was still shaken and felt a huge lump form in her throat as she remembered over and over again the relevation Kamini Chachi had just made about Shravan not being involved in demolishan of PCT.
Her heart beat racing she raced her ambassador accelator equally hard... she called Shravan.. he picked up the phone in a haste and and asked Sumo R u ok?...he was worried she had recovered just 3 days back.. concern evident in his voice..she dint answer..the lump in her throat making her difficult to speak..he repeated this time almost yelled R u ok sumo..Bolo..main aau..he started searching his car keys..Just then he heard her say.." No I am not ok..I waiting for u in my car outside ur office gate"..His entire being was shaken..and he shouted main aa raha hoo..kya hua tumhe bolo...but the line on the other side had gone dead...the walk from his office to outside gate was almost a 5 minute walk but he picked up such speed that it took him just 45 sec to cover that distance and in these 45 sec several dreadful scenarios crossed his mind he reached out to see her sitting in the ambassador on the driving seat..he knocked on the window..she opens the door on the passenger side..Shravan almost gasping for breath got in and asked" kya hua..tabiyat tho theek hai phir se tho hand co-ordination ki problem..he withouht completing jumped to ask tum car chalake..arey abhi tho tum keh rahi thi theek nahi ho..phir car kyon...Sumo tum pagal ho kya...and Sumo with all r might shouted "busss".Shravan was taken aback..with the pain and anger in her voice..and he saw his office watchman was tapping on the window to check if everything was fine...sumo said sab theek hai..aap jaye..Shravan looked embarrassed as the watchman left with an all knowing smile.
Sumo started I am fine it's not about my health..Shravan relaxed a lil and breathed a sigh of relief..he said.." tumne tho mujhe dara hi diya tha..uss bechare watchman ko bhi..usse tumhari cheekh sunkar laga hoga ki shayad main tumhare saath..he trailed of realising what he was just about to say!!..and then said. Ab bolo..kya hua theek kyon nahi ho? He asked quizzingly..realising she looked weak but he kind of sensed matter seemed something else not her health..

She just stared at him with hurt anger and did not respond... he shook her for an answer and she shouted back" kyonki tum theek rehne nahi dete"..he saw tears forming in her eyes..
Main? He asked a lil puzzled..Ab maine kya kar diya..
She composed herself and said let's go somewhere else and talk..he said kyon..She replied kyonki main keh rahi hoon..and started the car and raced it super speed..the five minute distance seemed like ages to Shravan as he was unable to comprehend what was happening..she parked the car outside a cafe but Shravan said "I will not come with u if u dont tell me what's going on?..

Sumo turned to him almost like she was gazing directly into his soul and asked " u dint know na about demolishan of PCT..u din't know the land on which PCT was there was Berrys land and u did all this unknowingly? ..He wasn't sure whether that was a question or a statement and he wasn't prepared for such direct question plus her sharp gaze was making him a lil uncomfortable.. he said " woh main...she completed for him" woh maine tumse jhooth bola tha ki maine purposely kiya hai..yehi na.."
Shravan lowered his eyes not able to take her direct gaze..
Sumo almost losing it now said..".jhooth tho itne convincingly akhon mein dekh kar bola tha ...ab sach saamne aaya tho nazar kyon chura rahe ho?..she boxed him with her fist .and said kuch tho bolo khadooos. ..
That action jolted him to reality...and he said in a surprisingly calm tone.."All what u said is right but it doesn't change anything between us.. "
he was extremely serious.." am upset with what happened between us ,.between u and my dad and the allegations u have made against my dad..I cannot forget them..my dad is my world..he has taken enough betrayals allegations in his life and he doesn't deserve anymore and specially from u or my mother..he was surprised he was mentioning that.. and Sumo..it's good for us that we stay away from each other..that's the main reason ... I din't even try to clarify about PCT..the hurt evident in his eyes as he said something and eyes spoke something else...

Sumo had had enough..she blurted almost shaking.."So u get to decide when to stay away when not to ...this last one month when I was recovering what happened to ur so called door rehne ka natak ..and now suddenly u tell me nothing has changed we have rewinded back to the day of my accident standing across the road..hating even the sight of each other.
...the mention of her accident shook Shravan..he said accident ki baat mat karo..he looked shaken even at the mention of it and continued "Sumo main tumhe uss halat mein nahi dekh sakta tha...aur maine jo bhi kiya woh ek dost..he trailed then he just said..woh jo bhi kiya woh zaroori tha..aur...
Sumo dint let him complete and said yeh usse bhi jyada zaroori hai. She held his face made him look at her ..she continued.
Shravan we have been friends since childhood and we have fought so many times...but always bounced back..I am not saying that it's like any of our earlier fights but can't we resolve it..and moreover after knowing none of us meant any harm to the other...i can't even think of hurting u in wildest of my dreams and I know u don't mean to hurt me either its just ur anger ur ego..makes u behave like a weirdo sometime but ..that does not change the fact that u love me..she said with as much confidence ans ease as if she was just uttering her own name.

He looked at her in disbelief but without wavering her gaze she continued..and neither it changes the fact that I love u...he looked at her with his eyes widened and opened his mouth to say something but she stopped him...and said..please Shravan..aaj mujhe meri baat khatam karne do...please ..he himself dint have the heart to stop her...he could let her speak for eternity if it required and with hope in his eyes he gestured her to continue...She said u think only u have loved me for all these years..I waited for u to come back for all these years counting sec min days... living with the guilt of failing my best friend my love...yes I din't realise I loved u when u were around me all those years but the day u left the emptiness that surrounded me made me realise that how much I loved u missed u and how important u r in my life... sometimes even more important than my self respect which I guard so closely...he smiled at her mentioning that and gave her adoring look.. she continued.. when u came back things ironed out between us after an intial bumpy ride..made me even more sure about the fact that we belonged together
He looked at her with love and compassion but still confusion reeling his mind..he was feeling numb..and was in flurry... he asked how u know I loved u since childhood...she said I had read that letter...and it was just a confirmation or a seal on what I was thinking or feeling from ur end was true...not that I needed a letter to read what was written all over ur face I wud have known even without the letter as.. I am not blind like u... and she boxed him again...Shravan retorted I am not blind...she threw her hands in the air in disgust...of course u r..u can't see how hopelessly I am in love with u and abhi mera itna kuch kehne ke baad bhi bass tumhe sirf iss baat pe react karna hai ki tum blind ho ya nahi..no reactions on other thing? Shravan Malhotra u r not only blind but also deaf heartless a moron and ...he had had enuf and he shut her mouth with his gave her a deep kiss she cud feel her struggling to speak but she soon calmed down as his passion sent her into orbit of her own..he broke the kiss to look at her with love and softness she hasn't seen earlier..and said itna bolti ho?Pehle tho chup rehne ko khud bola phir bolti ho bolte kyon nahi..he hugged her tightly into his embrace...she rested her head on his chest listening to his heartbeat..feeling relieved...he kissed her head and said ye ambassador mere liye bhi bahut special ho gayi hai. ..and smiled and said...I love u Sumo..his voice soft and filled with compassion..and she heard him say...ab bus tum ek baar papa se maafi mang lo..tho..he felt her move a lil but he wasn't ready to let her go..and he continued Papa ne tumhare liye pct ki land khareed Lee..itna naraz hone ke baad bhi mujhe tumhari care karne di...I am sure if u apologise with ur pure heart he wud forgive u..he wud forgive u for me...he definitely will ...I know him...and then we will b together forever...she dint say anything. Just tightened her hug around him..he could feel it was more like a Promise..reassurance
And he was right..she thought in her head..all battles r not to b fought right then...some r to b left for later. .then Shravan s words" tum logo se hi nahin mushkilo se bhi ladti ayee ho aaj tak " echoed in her mind..she knew she had a mightly battle at hand and with the mightiest person in Shravan s life...and she was determined to win this one..for them...her mind already at work...

To be continued...
Do leave ur comments..
Pls overlook the typos..
Love Ek Duje Ke Vaaste

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Amazing update
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Hi ppl thanks for all ur lovely comments...I am honoured...
So here is the second part of the Aar ya paar OS...

Do give ur comments...
Aar ya Paar Part 2

They sat in the car for how long they themselves din't realise..Shravan moved closer like trying to close the distance between them if there was any left ..
He placed a kiss on her cheeks and and she could see relief and content in his eyes..he placed her head on his chest and said ..." Sumo every time I think this is the end of us being together destiny or probably u bring us back together...I had almost given up on us this time but see here we r..together...I can't even express how relieved and happy I am that u came over to clear the mu and now that u have agreed to apologise to Papa .nothing can come between us...she was taken aback a lil with his words.. ...did he just say.. agreed to apologise...when did that happen??...well probably coz she dint react he had assumed she had agreed...well this one misunderstanding was not going to be cleared today she told herself she needed to think...to do something...but what she was at a loss ...but apologise no no way...she was in her thoughts..when he heard him say...tum kal subah 6 am aa jana papa udh jaate hai..I am sure mujhe tho aaj neend nahi ayegi..almost grinning...so we will clear all of this first thing tomorrow morning...she said 6 baje..arey woh..she paused..trying to make up an excuse to postpone this ..as she needed some time to bring the truth out and apology was not something on her mind right now...something else was cooking...this time not in her kitchen but in her mind.. she was just about to give an excuse when both Shravan s and Sumos phone rang...They both jumped out of their thought and almost unentangled from each other ...Pushkar was calling Shravan and Preeti was calling Sumo...they gave each other a kinda knowing look before answering their phones..Shravan moved out of the car to answer the call giving Sumo chance to answer hers ...Sumo picked up her phone..she could hear Preeti sobbing on the other side of the phone and saying..Di bahut gadbad ho gayi hai...woh Pushkar ke baare me in ghar me in..she broke down..she just said aap jaldi aa jao...I will tell u everything..she could sense a similar convo going on there bw Shravan and Pushkar...she didn't hear much but saw Shravan approaching the car and telling Pushkar everything will b fine calm down...she heard him say something about picking him up and then he kept the phone...
He came to the car and said...Preeti ne bataya she said nahi but haan kuch pushkar 'ko leke confusion..kuch gadbad hui hai..I have to go home..he said..hmm..Ghar mein sabko Preti pushkar ke baare me in pata chal gaya hai...it seems some vandy bhabhis friend saw them in a disc and and sent her a pic of Preeti and Pushkar..then chachi.and vandy bhabhi went to the disc and created a scene ...post which she landed at ur house giving a piece of her mind to ur family members..Shravan seemed disturbed this when he was relating all this...he seemed annoyed..and with something more seemed to disturb him Sumo thought...she asked aur??? He realised how well she knew him...and he said chachi accused u of trying to come close to me by using Preeti and pushkar..he din't complete..thos nonsense was too much for him..he said anyways ..gving a disgusted look ..Sumo doesn't matter what chachi thinks ...but with this background I feel we shouldn't tell anyone about us right now.. chachi can make ur apology to Papa look like an antics to bring preekar closer or she could tell papa...he shook his head as many negative scenarios crossed his mind .her lawyer mind at work..she heard him say...lets take a lil time before we break this news also lets cancel the tmrw 6 am plan I don't want u to come in line of chachis fire and moreover I can't risk our relationship for anything now... I have had enuf of these games with destiny and this time I won't let anything or anyone come between us.. determination evident in his voice..he contd.. how much I wanted this mu to clear bw u and dad asap..but now with this development of preekar..we will have to wait for us and for preekar to make things right.. let me figure out what can b done and how and then I would let u know when time is right..
he said pushkar is coming to pick me up here at the cafe.. u please go now and drive carefully...mesg me on reaching home...I love u.. he kissed her forehead and said u don't worry a thing now I will make everything alright for us and for Preekar I promise..she knew he wud keep this promise..but somewhere she knew that more than him it was she who has to work hard to let him keep his Promise..she was as determined as him or even more to not let him down this time she placed a small kiss on his cheeks and left
Suman felt restless she was feeling the pain for Preeti..but somewhere she felt a tinge of relief too on two accounts..one she dint have lie to Shravan or make any excuse for not apologising to his father right then..and it gave her time time to think and make things right form the root...She should only b feeling sad she told herself ... ur sis is sad...what's wrong with u..sumo..talking to herself...but somehow this mess after all wasn't a mess but a destinys indication to bring out the truth...and eventually everything will fall in place...she told herself bahut filme dekh lee tune iss bimari ke chakkar mein..bed par pade pade...what r u thinking sumo destiny indication..buss ..
...she cleared her mind and he headed back home
The scene at home wasn't a pretty one..a lot of abuses had been directed at preeti and the family by Kamini Chachi and mausi gave a detailed account of it ..telling her about Kaminis accusations of tiwari sisters trying to stalk malhotra bros for money and she heard mamiji say how low she ,( kamini)had fallen in their eyes with all kind of dirty talk.

Sumo listened to all that had happened..and how Chachi had misbehaved with the family...she thought..that today itself chachi who had tried to clear misunderstanding bw her and Shravan why was she dead very against Preekar...but she thought Pushkar is her son and clearing mu bw them and finding about Pushkar were 2 different things... mausi had also told her that chachi was accusing suman of stalking Shravan and she wanted both Suman and Preeti to stay away from Malhotras..Suman felt if she really wanted Shravan to stay away from her ...why did she try to clear misunderstanding bw them.. well then she thought that was before she found about Preekar so aging it made sense..probably no not probably she told herself..it made absolute sense...but why was she concerned about Shravan and her chachi on more than one occasions shown she don't like her much...Suman recollected how she had behaved when Shravan was leaving for London..not letting them say goodbye and now she was trying to clear misunderstanding ..something seemed amiss. she couldn't figure out what.. she shrugged her thought and accounted them again to the number of movies she had seen...she told her self pehle that destiny wala now this faltu wala shaq ..what's wrong with u Sumo...come out of this... she had to set things right for them and Preekar she told herself this almost loudly...somehow..and what was it she had to figure out Soon...she headed to Preetis room with her thoughts all over the place...

Pushkar had picked up Shravan from the cafe and looked extremely upset with the turn of events..he had requested Shravan to speak to bade papa...
When they reached home...Shravan headed towards his dads room..he was about to enter when he heard Ramnath say to Kamini...

To be continued
Leave ur comments...have a wonderful Sunday

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Edited by nancyrio90 - 9 years ago

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