FF || Of Pride and Promises || Last Episode on page 98 - Page 5

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Hello.

I read both the chapters in a go.They are way too good.

I loved your style of writing. Beautifully penned.

So now Shravan is going to takeover her restaurant😉

Excited to read how the story unfolds,how Suman reacts and how they both fall in love.

Loved it.

-Mitali❤️

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub

Hey hey
That was some kickass writeup .
Totally loving this .

'He expected to see someone older than her, someone less prettier. Someone less confident. '
Oh , the problems this guy has to face . Haha .

God bless you .

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Thanks for updating soon! Enjoyed their confrontation - crisp and to the point. I'm eager to see how their story unfolds. Suman Tiwari will be furious at the takeover - unless she has another plan. Do update soon! :)

Originally posted by: sapphire3

As expected she turned down his offer 😃
Loved their confrontation
Shravan is going to takeover Saffron...it will be amazing to see both of them working together 😃
Arrogant handsome shravu , smart independent, confident sumo...together they are dynamite 😃
Amazing chapter
Thanks for a quick update 😊

P.s.- I love your name, reminds me of my childhood friend 😳


Take care
Priyam

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Hey there Sarcy,

haha Suman Tiwari will be livid once she finds out his plan which BTW is coming up next insha Allah. I really hope it lives up to your expectations :)

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow
totally loving this shravan
wonder what he will do next
cannot wait to find out
continue soon

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Nice update. I so love the simple and straight conversations that you pen. Just plain greedy to read more.

And, just tried to re-read your YHM ones - they seem to be removed; do you have them elsewhere?

Originally posted by: .SSS.

I have recently started to follow the show and this forurm. Its quite a surprise for me to find your fiction here. Love both the updates and looking forward to more. Since i already know that you wont send any pm's i have decided to catch up the story and comment at my own pace😉

- Sapna

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

A takeover!!! SUman will not like it, if she dislike shravan now, after takeover she will hate him and i think she will make his life living hell.

awesome update

looking forward to read more.

Originally posted by: docbenna

This is one awesome tale you are spinning dear
👏
Keep it up waiting to read the rest 😃