SHRAMAN TS--mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai---(SHOT2,updated pg 3}[30-6-16]

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hi guys i am writing something on SHRAMAN for the first time
hope u all like it

i was thinking if suman would have jumped from the terrace then wat can be the scene after that

plz do comment and like
sorry for the mistakes
so here we go

MUJHE TUMHARI ZAROORAT HAI

every thing around shravan stopped and shravan was just looking down of the terrace in total shock because he never thought that something will happen like this. it was like a nightmare for him.
And suddenly realised wat had happened
shravan(shouted)-"SUMAN" and ran towards down stairs and reached to suman who was lying lifeless there and took her in his arms
shravan-"suman utho, look at me" and shaked her but there was no response and shravan was crying
anjali(crying)-"shravan suman ko hospital leke chalte hai" and shravan carried suman in his arms took to the car and anjali drove the car to the hospital as shravan was not in the condition and after some time they reached a near by hospital
shravan(shouted)-"doctor,doctor" carrying suman in arms and looking here and there
anjali(shouted)-"doctor"
doc-"kya hua hai" and put sumo on stretcher
shravan-"actually" but shravan was not able to say anything
anjali-"actually vo suman terrace se gir gayi thi"
doc(to nurse)-"fatafat operation ki tayiyari karo" and sumo was taken inside and as shravan was holding her hand slowly slowly the hand slipped from his hand and she was taken inside the O.T. and shravan looking at her until her sight was visble to him and when he lost her sight then he sat on the chair and remmember the talk they had before sumo jumped off the terrace
shravan-"sab meri vajah se ho raha hai, sab meri vajah se" and both of his hands on his fore head and anjali came to him and sat near him
anjali-"plz calm down,sumo ko kuch nahi hoga"keeping her hand on his shoulder
shravan-"nahi sab meri vajah se hi ho raha hai na main usse ladta na ye sab hota"
anjali-"kuch ni hoga usse"

AFTER 1 HOUR

Suddenly doc came out of OT and both went towards her

shravan-"sumo kaisi hai"

doc-"abhi vo unconscious hai, sur par bahut gehri chot hai thi ager 24 ghante mein hosh ni aaya toh unki halat bahut critical ho sakti hai, abhi hum unhe ICU mein shift har rahen hai"

shravan-"hum usse mil sakte hai"

doc-"abhi nahi hum apko thodi time bata denge ki aap kab unse mil sakte hai"

sharvan-"ok" as he knew he had no choice then to wait for doc to allow him. and soon sumo was shifted to ICU and doc did her checkup and after almost 45 mins. a nurse came out of the room

nurse- "suniye aap mein se koi yeh medicine lekar aiye"

shravan-"mai lekar aata hun"and took the slip nd went

anjali-"hum kab mil sakteh hai"

nurse"ab aap mil sakteh hai, par patient abhi bhi uncounsciuos"and went and anjali went inside

Anjali sat beside sumo and started crying and auddenly noticed that sumo's heart beat rate was decreasing

anjali(shouted)-"doctor, doctor" and doc came to the room

doc-"kya hua"

anjali-"doc ye dekhiye" and showed him that sumo heart beat rate was decreasing and doc told nurse to get ready the heart beat reviving equipment(actually i dont know the name of that method) and doc gave sumo but nothing happened and in the mean time shravan entered the room and anjali ran to him

anjali-"shravan suman" but he didnt said a single word and the packet of medicine fell from his hand and stepped towards her and sat near sumo holding her hand

shravan-"sumo hum sab ko tumhari zarorat hai,mujhe tumhari zarorat hai" and put his forehead on the hold. dr. gave sumo the shock nd she start breathing faster i.e,pulse rate became normal nd all become very happy

doc-"its miracle, ise kehte hai sachha pyaar"

and after some time sumo get consciuous and she slowly tried to open her eyes but everything was blur and soon she was able see everything perfectly and soon her eye caught the the most beautiful view, her man mr, shravan malhotra was holding her hand and his head was lying over the hold and she smiled and slowly moved her hand and with slight movement of her hand shravan woke up

shravan-"are u ok" and sumo tried to sit

sumo-"aahh"

shravan-"apni sumogiri band karo aur chup chap leti raho" and sumo followed his instructions like a obedient child and shravan stood up

sumo-"shravan"

shravan-"kya shravan tum kya pagal ho ye kya kiya tumne"

sumo-"tumhara barosa pana chahti thi"

shravan-"koi aisa karta hai, agar kuch ho jata toh phir main kya karta"

sumo-"achha hota na tumhare zindagi se ek musibat chali jaati"

shravan-"SUMO( then he calmed himself and sat near her and took her hand on his) sumo tum meri zindagi ka vo hissa ho jisse main kabhi nahi khona chahta, plz kabhi aisa kuch mat karna ya kahna"

sumo-"kyu nahi khona chate"

shravan-"because u r special" and both smiled to each other

shravan-"aur vaada karo kabhi aisa kuch ni karogi"

sumo-"promise"

shravan-"pakka promise"

sumo-" pakka promise"

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it was a cute and emotional os. loved it very much. if something like this will happen in show it would be exact same like your os. you described shravan feelings very welll.
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