SHRAMAN TS--mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai---(SHOT2,updated pg 3}[30-6-16] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinegirl100

it was a cute and emotional os. loved it very much. if something like this will happen in show it would be exact same like your os. you described shravan feelings very welll.

with lots of love
-anupriya

really thnx dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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TFS DEAR...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsum os cute one
but I got an stupid thought what would have if instead of falling herself she would have pushed shravan from terrace 🤣
Just a thought ha 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really happy that u loved it nd wnt me cont. it
i will try to cont. it
but i m little busy these days
THANK U fr reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi dear friends, i am here again with 1 more shot

it is dedicated to all but specially to my friends #Manyata5 #minarva.panda who told me to cont. it

hope u like and love it like the previous shot

do comment and like plzzz

SORRY FOR THE MISTAKES

here we go

SHOT 2

suman was discharged and shravan brought her to malhotra mansion as there was know one in Tiwari killa. And in malhotra mansion all members were present except ramnath and shravan's chachi.Suman was told to have complete bed rest by the doctor.

Shravan came to home with suman. He helped her in walking inside the house as she was also get hurt on her foot by holding her shoulder close to him and protecting her in such a way if he will leave her hand then he will loose her. And suman was just looking at him. Shravan rang the bell and vandy opened the door

Vandy-"tum log aa gye main kabse wait kar rahi thi" and both passed a smile to her. shravan made suman sit comfortably on sofa and in the mean time pushkar also enter the hall

Pushkar-"kaisi hai tu"

Suman-"thik hun" and pushkar sat near her

Pushkar-"waise kaise gir gyi tu terrace se" and to this suman looked at shravan and shravan looked down and again suman turned to pushkar

Suman -"mera paer(foot) phisal gaya tha" and the response of suman was unexcepted to shravan

Pushkar-"oh,dhyaan rakha kar"

Shravan(to vandy)-"bhabhi guest room ready hai"

Vandy-"vo actually bahut dina se band tha na, toh vo room abhi rehne layak ni bacha hai"

Pushkar-"toh kahan rahegi sumo" and after sometime of silence

Shravan-"suman mere room mein rahegi"

Vandy and suman-"what??"

Pushkar-"sahi toh keh rahen hai bhai,aur isme problem kya hai bhai mere room mein reh lenge ok"

Suman-"par"

Shravan-"par var kuch nahi ab chalo" and shravan made her stand up and helped her to walk to his room and soon they reached to the staircase and suman tried to walk but all went in vain

Shravan-"ruko" and he bend to carry her in his arms and then he carried her in his arms and both shared a eyelock and without breaking the eyelock he walked to his room and seeing the scene pushkar smiled.

Then shravan made her sit on the bed and he was about to leave when felt a hold on his wrist then he turned and sat near her and holded her hand and moved his head from down to up i.e. he asked what

Sumun-"plz yahin raho na"

Shravan-"main yahin hun"

Suman- yahin baitho na,mujhse baaten karo, akele achha nahi lagta hai plz"

Shravan-"main bas tumhari medicines leke aata hun,main bas yun gaya yun aaya" and patted her shoulder and went downstairs and brought medicines and soup for suman

Shravan-"ye lo soup pee lo"

Suman-"mujhe acha nahi lagta hai"

Shravan-"pee logi toh jaldi thik ho jaogi"

Suman-"main medicines le leti hun"

Shravan-"khali paith(stomach)dr. ne medicines lene ko mana kiya hai"

Suman-"par"

Shravan-"chup" and sat near her with soup bowl

Shravan-"chalo muh kholo" and suman ws trying to resist but she cant and slowly opened her mouth and he started feeding her and suddenly

Shravan-"sumo"

Sumun-"hmmm"

Shravan-"tumne pushkar aur vandy bhabhi se jooth kyu bola" and suman understood what he was asking about

Suman-"jaise main tumhare liye special hun, vaise hi mere liye tum special ho" and listening to this shravan immediately looked at her and both of them shared a eye lock. And suman was the first one to break the eyelock

Suman-"medicines" and shravan gave her medicine and made her sleep and covered her with blanket

Shravan-"tum aaram karo main office se aata hun" and unknown to them someone was witnessing the cute and beautiful scene and shravan went to washroom get changed and went to office. And while going office shravan spotted pushkar

Shravan-"chote main thodi time ke liye office jaa raha hun, toh suman ka dhyaan rakhna aur agar koi bhi problem ho toh mujhe call kar dena"

Pushkar-"dont worry bhai aap jaiye" and shravan left from there and pushkar went to suman and slowly opened the door and saw that suman was sleeping and he silently sat on the sofa and unknowingly hit the vase nearby and due to the sound suman slowly opened her eyes and pushkar saw her opening her eyes and went to her

Pushkar-"sorry, yaar galti se"

Suman-"arre, main so nahi rahi thi,waise tu kab aaya" and she tried to sit and pushkar helped her to sit

Pushkar-"bas abhi abhi"

Suman-"oh"

Pushkar-"waise ek baat kahun"

Suman-"hmmm"

Pushkar-"jab tum dono ek dusre ke liye itne special ho toh iss special feeling ko uska naam bhi de de" and suman gave him a confused look

pushkar-"main toh tumse pehle hi milne aaya tha par jab maine dekha ki tum dono romance mein busy ho, so i thought not to disturb u both"

suman-"tum jo bhi bol rahe ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha"

pushkar-"main jaanta hun ki tu sab samajh rahi ha, aur sun sumo kahin ye jo teri khamoshi hai naa tere pyaar se naa jeet jaye" and without giving her chance ti say anything

pushkar-"you take care, aur kuch chahiye ho toh phone kar dena, main niche hi hun" and went from there as he knew that suman need some time alone to think over what he has said.

And in the office shravan was not able to work only suman's word " jaise main tumhare liye special hun, vaise hi mere liye tum special ho" was doing round in his mind as shravan knew why she is special to him but why he is special to her.

EVENING

Shravan entered in his room, and the scene infont of her eyes scared him

Shravan-"SUMO" and ran towards her

Shravan-"tum yahan kyu khadi ho" as suman was standing near window and looking outside

Suman-"aise hi"

Shravan-"dr. ne tumhe complete bed rest kahan hai"

Suman-"mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai"

Shravan-"haan. Thik hai baith ke baat karte hai" and made her sit on the sofa

Shravan-"ab bolo"

Suman-"dekho main jo ab bolne jaa rahi hun pehle shanti se puri baat sunna phir react karna plz"

Shravan-"jaldi bolo mujhe tension ho ri hai"

Suman-"shravan tumne mujhse pucha tha naa ki maine pushkar se jhuth kyu bola tha kyuki tum mere liye special ho but not as a friend but because you are more than a friend to me, tum vo insaan ho jisse main kabhi bhi nahi khona chahti. Tum mere liye bahut important ho. Tum vo insaan ho jiske saath main safe, protective feel karti hun. Main nahi janti ki Main jo feel karti hun waisa hi tum feel karte ho ya nahi par main jo feel karti hun vo main keh dena chahti hun kyuki main future mein ye nahi kehna chahti ki kaash maine keh diya hota( suman took a deep breath)I...LOVE YOU" and she closed her eyes as she was feared about the rejection, and soon she felt a pair of familiar strong arms took her in a tight embrace and suman also hugged him back. And the silence between them were speaking and after some time shravan tighten the hug more

Shravan-"I LOVE YOU TOO meri sumo" and took her out embrace

Shravan-"will you be mrs. Suman Shravan Malhotra"

Suman -"yes" and again they both hugged each other

And with this they happily ever after...

do hit like and comment

waitinggg

Edited by angel_writer - 9 years ago
orion23 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Damn nice!
Loved it!
Do continue😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
wow
so cute and romantic
absolutely loved it
continue soon please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
lovely and cute os do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
It was awesome
Totally loved it dear
ShraMan happily ever after 😃
Well done 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Amazing update
Suman's accident lead to their confession atleast in this

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