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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
awesome updates
absolutely loved them
continue soon
superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

awesome updates
absolutely loved them
continue soon
superb



Thank you so much :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
it was amazing. loved each chapter. please pm me also
with lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: shinegirl100

it was amazing. loved each chapter. please pm me also

with lots of love
-anupriya


Thank you so very much as I hardly proof read it but you guys are still showering me with praises thank you 🤗

will surely pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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EDKV Part 5
Shravan is standing n the room which is in thenew city and in a completely new and align house...ahouse where he was staying only for night ..turned out was waiting for him from the last 10 years...it was surreal for him to see his own portrait starring at him. He is confused how to react to this sudden truth which has been thrown at him without any prior warning... he should blame his destiny that why this day took soo long to come or thank his star that at least they came...As now he can go and be himself.. he has no longer has to deny his feelings he has for his mother... his love his.. childhood...what a day... which brought both sadness and happiness together.

While he was trying to understand his emotions... Abhiraj comes in with the letter which he never wanted to read in his life...he open the notice to read while his hands were trembling and his lips were saying hope this turn out to be false.. hope there is some other Shravan they are referring to.. or better it turns out to be a dream... Abhiraj nudges him and ask him to read it.. what he is waiting for?

The letter reads..

This is the by order of District court of Delhi that Mrs. Nirmala Malhotra has been refrain meeting her and Ramnath Malhotra's son. As it is a negative impact on Mr. Ramnath Malhotra and on his son due to fragile mental state of Ramnath . Which is due to Nirmala Malhotra's carelessness shown towards their son. If Nirmala Malhotra defy this order a case will be immediately lodged in the district court and custody battle will commence.

On reading the letter... Shravan falls on the floor like nth time during this week.. So dad notonly knew the where abouts of Mom but also knew she was not Nirmala Ahuja but Nirmala Malhotra why this with me ? what have I done to deserve this? Why the only person I trusted all my life turns out to be a lie ? my whole life has been a lie a big lie until now...

Now I know why he never wanted me to come home to India during holidays and used to visit me instead.. now I know why he kept me away from here so that he can continue his game here.. now I know why he never wanted me togo near Sumo so that he can hide the biggest truth of my life from me...

How will I face Sumo..How will I face Nanu..most of all how will I face my mother...all the words that he uttered that day when Sumo tried to unite them was going on his mind...while Abhiraj was standing there dumbfounded..Are you fine Shravan quips Abhi...Trust me this is the best I felt in the last few days kindly leave me alone and would you mind if I sleep here tonight instead of the guestroom... oh c/mon its your room only so feel at home...and was about to leave...

When Shravan asks him from behind...where is Nirmala Ahu...I mean where is my mum is? Oh she is in Delhi and trying to sort out old case of our company there...Sharavn replies..I doubt I would be able to participate in the presentation tomorrow as I am heading home Delhi by first flight... Sure replies Abhiraj.

In the morning in Delhi..

Sumo gets up and get the keys from Mami of her Ambassador car and inform her she needs it more than her today..she goes directly to Preeta's place to start off today's tiffin service to her existing clients . As tiffin was not delivered in the past couple of days. Preeta was waiting for Sumo to come.. she informs her how Dhurandar is sitting outside their old office for her clients and have cleaned her room for food to prepare...Sumo goes inside to find all her staff waiting for her.. so Sumo should I put your favourite kadad chai so that we can start cooking? But where we will get vegetables from as everybody has refused to give us anything on credit.. no problem at all assures Sumo Take the keys ofmy Ambassador and get the vegetables...They all smile

In Mumbai

Shravan is boarding the flight back to Delhi...and ignoring numerous call from Ramnath . He wonders why is he not answering my phone.. what if Sumo met him and told him everything...no this is not possible I myself know he is in Mumbai and Sumo is in Delhi and after the confusion I created he will never speak to Sumo again.. May be he is busy with Presentation.

Precap: Shravan watch Ramnath and Nirmala together where Ramnath is confessing yes I manipulated Shravan for myself as I wanted to be the only hero in his life not you a mother ! who was always better than me...and I see the same in Sumo and want to keep her away from my sonj ust like I did with you for all these years...
Edited by Nishtha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Awesome chappy!!
Loved it!
Bechara Shravan, I wonder how much more torment will he have to go through at the hands of his own
I can't wait to see how the next chapter unfolds, Shravan will break😭

Update real soon😳
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Poor shravan ...betrayed by his own loved ones 😭
Ramnath 😡 😡 ...i want to punch him
Waiting for the day he knows that ramnath has demolished pct
Awesome chapter as usual 👏 .
U r fantastic writer
Thanks for pm
Keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3

Poor shravan ...betrayed by his own loved ones 😭
Ramnath 😡 😡 ...i want to punch him
Waiting for the day he knows that ramnath has demolished pct
Awesome chapter as usual 👏 .
U r fantastic writer
Thanks for pm
Keep writing



I can't thank you all enough for being kind and praising me inspite knowing that my writing isn't that good :) so thank you thank you easing and liking the update yes Ramnath is officially in trouble but Shravan might behave out of character you never know ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Nishtha



I can't thank you all enough for being kind and praising me inspite knowing that my writing isn't that good :) so thank you thank you easing and liking the update yes Ramnath is officially in trouble but Shravan might behave out of character you never know ;)



Who said ur writing isnt good enough??
U r a writer na...n we r the readers. So let us judge
Janta ka faisla h that u r an awesome writer...cheers!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: sapphire3



Who said ur writing isnt good enough??
U r a writer na...n we r the readers. So let us judge
Janta ka faisla h that u r an awesome writer...cheers!!!



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