EDKV ..An Adaptation-PART 5 updt on P 12

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hello Friends..
This is my take on current track..I promise to finsih my story in couple of write ups as I do not have much talent of writing..
Do let me know if you all liked it then only I will continue..as there are wonder writers amongst us but this is my genuine attempt to give my take on story .

This is how I envisage story could move forward rather my fiction , also my story will finish in couple of writeups

13/06/2016

Episode starts where Ramnath's car has broken down and he is going to client's office in Shravan's car. He gets on the back seat and see Shravana's blazer lying there he picks it up and something falls from it...its rose and a 10 year old letter. He picks up the tattered letter to read.. which is confession of Shravan for Sumo! He is aghast at the thought of Sumo being his daughter in law , controlling his son's life and being the second person to do so.. he gets furious and ask the driver to turn the car back to office and check on his son...

At Tiwari Villa whole family is against Sumo for creating rift between the two family. Mami is blaming Sumo and Nirmal for the whole fiasco and not even leaving Nanu.. eho asked you to introduce Shravan's mother to him after 10 years... if she really wanted to meet him she could have tried in the past 10 years.. Nana ji jumps in when ou don't know the story please do not judge a person.

Mami Ji: yes I am the culprit in all that goes wrong in this house and in Sumo's life. We had only one good friend Malhotras and we lost them because of Sumo...

Sumo: standing there emotion less now speaks if I have done something wrong I will correct it too.

Nanu : what you did is right Sumo?

Sumo : yes it is for me and I will prove it too.

She leaves for Malhotra's office. Thinking I know Shravan he is probably mad at me but I will set everything right.

She reaches the office to meet Shravan.

While Shravan in his cabin still thinking everything that conspired yesterday and why he is always at the receiving end of the fate! Why cant he leads a normal life like others..and blames his stars...Suddenly peon comes in and says Sumo madam wants to meet you. He shouts back I told you I don't want to meet anybody please ask her to leave now...

Manager comes outside and say sorry he is busy today come tomorrow, sumo replies I will meet him today and will wait for him.

Shravan peeks from his window to see Sumo but he stops himself thinking about what his dad said and how hurt he is..

Ramnath enters the office and see Sumo sitting in the waiting lobby. What she is doing here..I have to do something before its too late..but what?How to throw Sumo from Shravan's life once and for all..she is Tiwari jee's grand daughter but I cant see my house breaking down at my guru's expense..and gives devilish smile.

Shravan's come out from his office and goes straight to people sitting in waiting lobby..shouting at Sumo:

Shravan: Suman Tiwari what are you doing here?

Sumo: suman Tiwari just one day has changed our equation so much?

Shravan: Oh please lets keep our relation at home this is my office and I know you because you are grand daughter of Tiwari jee. My dad's guru beside that I don't have any relationship with you.* in flashback they show the scene where in childhood sumo said the same to her friends for Shravan*

Also just because I am handsome and rich you want to cling onto me! Dont be so desperate Suman and leave me alone for good.

Sumo: but...I came here to clear the misunderstanding..

Shravan: See I speak to you nicely so don't think I have given you importance, like you i have gazillion girls friends and I cant entertain them all else who will work.

Sumo: do not insult me infront of all..

Sharavan: oh c'mon if people see me talking to you they might give you some more tiffin orders so be thankful to me

Sumo : by now she has lost all the patience and leaves the place in anger

Watching all this unfolding from his office Ramnath rejoice thinking atleats my son is mine only . he has shown the Sumo her place...but I know all this anger hatred is for the time being only as I read Shravan's confession myself so I have to do something to stop them...before its too late.

Precap: Sumo has come back to her house and planning to burn down all the letters, photos and gifts of Shravan. While Ramnath asking his men to go Sumo's PCT.


PS: i have written this from my mobile so please ignore mistakes, could be spelling or grammatical.:)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice. Interested to read how you tackle the track. Please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really liked ur version of current track
I'm already curious to know how u r going to use the article in ur story
I wud love to read this story in ur style
Plzzz continue this...its awesome 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_vaish

Nice. Interested to read how you tackle the track. Please continue



Thank you so much for reading and appreciating . I will continue the next chapter today itself and finish off the entire story before Monday episode
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: PALAK19

amazing...dear keep writing



Thank you for reading I will finish off the story before Monday and will write next chapter today itself . Thank you for reading 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3

I really liked ur version of current track
I'm already curious to know how u r going to use the article in ur story
I wud love to read this story in ur style
Plzzz continue this...its awesome 👏



Thank you so much for such kind words . I will write the next chapter today itself and will finish it off before Monday episode 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting ..pls continue soon liked it
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Very interesting ..pls continue soon liked it


Thank you dear for reading and liking it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing...
beautifully penned...😊
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Originally posted by: arshuaar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">amazing...
beautifully penned...😊</font>



Thank you will update next chapter today

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