EDKV ..An Adaptation-PART 5 updt on P 12 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Ramnath and kamini😡
Poor Sumo...
And shravan at ahuja villa😲
Interesting update and even more interesting precap..
Continue soon!

Thanks for the PM 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: orion23

Ramnath and kamini😡

Poor Sumo...
And shravan at ahuja villa😲
Interesting update and even more interesting precap..
Continue soon!

Thanks for the PM🤗



Thank you for reading and commenting huggg u back

Yes Ramnath is turning into mogambo but I planned something for him :) regarding Shravan in Abuja villa let's see what happens next :)

Thanks again for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Nishtha


Thank you will update tonight :)

Aww...Thank you dear in advance...loads of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu


Aww...Thank you dear in advance...loads of love



Your most welcome dear :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Story is getting more interesting at each update
Amazing concept
Ramnath the villain is so arrogant and creating problems for Suman
And Shravan is not here
Precap sounds interesting too
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Story is getting more interesting at each update
Amazing concept
Ramnath the villain is so arrogant and creating problems for Suman
And Shravan is not here
When will Shravan know the whole truth????
Precap sounds interesting too
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Story is getting more interesting at each update
Amazing concept
Ramnath the villain is so arrogant and creating problems for Suman
And Shravan is not here
Precap sounds interesting too
Continue soon



Thank you for appreciating
Yes Ramnath has turned full villain but there would be twist in the tail and Shravan will get to know the whole truth very soon so keep glued ;)) hehehe
Thanks again will update next chapter in couple of hours
Thanks again
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Fabulous update dear..
Ramnath turning villain...
Poor sumo.
So abhiraj us son ahuja..so May be shra now know the truth..
Thnx for pm dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Fabulous update dear..
Ramnath turning villain...
Poor sumo.
So abhiraj us son ahuja..so May be shra now know the truth..
Thnx for pm dear...



Thank you so much for reading nd commenting :)

Yes there is truth behind abhiraj and you will know in next update which I am writing now so will publis in couple of hours. Problem is I write everything on my mobile and then publish it :-| so it's takes time

Your most welcome for pm , hope I am not bothering anyone :)

Thanks again
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
EDKV Part 4

Shravan, Sahil and Abhiraj is sitting in the living room...Sharavn still has doubts about the room next to guest room so he asks.." what is so secretive about that room Abhi ? Abhi says " well even I dont know but since childhood the room is waiting for its occupant as per dad and Ma'am . " Sahil interrupts why are we even talking about some random room lets discuss something spicy.. Abhiraj and Shravan both gives disgusted look I know he will never change... they all laugh .

So where is your Dad Abhi is he the final decision maker ?oh he passed away 8 of years ago ..oh sorry I did not know, not a problem at all actually he was always unwell and knew he wont last long he was suffering from some terminal disease but as we were young so nobody told us anything..Shravan puts his hand on Abhi . I am sure he must be proud of you now...Yes actually all thanks to Ma'am...who is this Ma'am ? asks Shravan

just then they hear Dinner is ready please come.. We will discuss all this in detail later lets have dinner first

They all go and sit to have dinner prepare by the butler.

Back to Delhi

Sumo has reached the house and feeling dejected and lost .. Mami jee taunts see your deeds shown you this day today where there is nobody to help you and you are seeing PCT getting closed infront of your eyes even your true friend Shravan has left you...

Sumo replies please mami jee I dont want Nanu to know anything this is my fight and I will overcome it.

Mami jee : Yes you dont have any other option left either. Also let me tell you one thing I will not wait for your marriage as I want Preeti to get married soon and you have to pay us your debt before you can even think of settling down.

Sumo :i know mami jee and I am sure I will pay it off soon. Also the 4lakh cheque I have to return as I could not complete his order nor will be able to do for couple of days.

hearing this Mami jee loses all cool so now I have to wait for your work to start again and who knows whether it will or not...I want 2lakh now..

Sumo brings her jewellery and gives it to Mami until then keep this but mami jee wasnt ready to budge down no I want your car too as guarantee . In anger Sumo gives that to Mami jee too and leave for her room

On reaching her room she cries bitterly why you did this to me Shravan? you said you will never let me fall then why this? I just wanted to unite a mom and her son and getting this in return ? why me god why I always have to go through this ? Am I not deserve of happiness..

just then daboo comes in her room..Didi are you cryign because of mom? No dabbu I am not crying.. yes you are... but why? I thought you are the strongest girl in the whole world ? you are my super woman so cheer up I am sure you will find the way out again like you did last time ..I read in my school book that if god is creating trouble it means he has kept one door open to get out of trouble so cheer up. I love you..

hearing such words from Dabbu, Suman wipes her tears and replies yes I will overcome this trouble too with or without anyone's help.

In Malhotras Ramnath orders his men to do not do anything..its enough I am sure she must have learnt her lesson and wont cross my path again.and smile slyly .

In Mumbai friends are enjoying their sumptuous dinner except Shravan who somehow not feeling comfortable in this house and thinking I have to book a room in some hotel asap.. Abhiraj enquires are you fine Shravan? Yes I am just that I am tired and want to go to sleep so please excuse me...oh sure have a good night...while Sahil wants him to stay longer..some other day Sahil please...

As he was getting up the suddenly electricity goes.. Abhiraj what happened let me check...Shravan leaves irrespective of the situation and goes to his room to relax...and light comes after 2 mins..oh I forgot to switch on the lamp and fan..he gets up to do...and as soon as he does...he gets shocked looking at his own big photo of childhood and car wallpaper with beautiful car design all over the place he stands there like a child lost in big jungle.. what is this ? what is happening with me ? am I dreaming ?

He suddenly hears someone running in his direction..its Abhiraj...oh you entered Ma'am son's room by mistake ...Shravan now totally lost and ask back who is this Ma'am and what my photo doing in this room??? Is this you ??an equally amused Abhiraj ask? YES!! replies Shravan... oh god...its a long story but let me tell you briefly

Actually My dad was suffering from illness so Nirmala ma'am joined dad's busines and had taken it to new heights, but ma'am husband used to mistreats her and used to hit her and one fine day..he thrown her out of the house and said if she ever filed a case against him he will bring her down in the court which will make her son hide his head in shame. So Ma'am left him and came here.. but still she never lost hope to meet her son...but his husband used to send her notice every year stopping her to meet him else he will file a case ...now its 10 years but Ma'am still love her son and have decorated this room for you ...I guess...why am I saying her son infront of you..may be because I still cannot trust the destiny.

Shravan holds Abhiraj collar how dare you say a word against my dad?? Abhiraj surprised at sudden change in his behaviour asks..why are you angry at me.. this is the truth and I lived with all my life...

Nirmala ma'am is like my mother and I have seen her going through alot.. she was my dad's best friend and after his death she managed us and the business perfectly..She never told me anything about her son , his name but I knew it because I got curious and read one restraining notice from your dad myself...i still have a copy if you want to read..??

The whole world of Shravan has fallen infront of his own eyes... dad whom he trusted all his life never knew he has a other side of him as well...so was Sumo always right? Why do I refer her as Nirmala Ahuja...maybe she still is Nirmala Malhotra..but why he never told me anything...and starts crying...WHY ME...

Yes show me the notice please..pleads Sharavan..sure says Abhiraj

Meanwhile in Delhi...

Sumo calls Preeta and asks now we have to find a alternative solution some place from where we can atleast start our business again? Preeta says...maybe its small but why not use my home for the time being? Sumo replies I dont want to trouble you? but if you do not start the work its not only you but livelihood for us as well ...so lets do it together..Sumo agrees...and cut the phone

Now Dhurandar assures Preeta that he will join them too..I will sit infront of old PCT office and if anyone comes there asking about you all ? I will guide them to your new office so that we dont loose any more clients. Preeta smile..

Precap : Shravan is boarding the next flight to Delhi while Sumo is preparing and sending tiffin from her Preeta's house


Edited by Nishtha - 9 years ago

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